Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved]

Rima Fahim · 1 Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 04:23 am

Rima Fahim

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(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Job Name: Investigation
Job Rank: D-Tier
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 50 Xp / 3,000 Huang
Job Overview: There has been horrible chain of murders in the mountain town of Caliginosus. The local authorities are currently offering a large reward to anyone who can find and capture the person responsible, dead or alive. You must go to the most recent scene, and find some clues that will help you track the killer down. After finding any form of evidence bring it to the authorities to be rewarded.

Village View:

Job Name: Apparent Evil
Job Rank: C-Tier
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 100 Xp / 7,000 Huang
Job Overview: The killer is still on the loose, but due to your recent detective work you might have a lead. Use the clues you found to track down the killer. After being ambushed by a known gang of criminals report back to the authorities for a reward. The Masked-Maniac is the killer and will NOT die during this encounter, they will instead escape.

Enemies:

Job Name: Redemption
Job Rank: B-Tier
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 200 Xp / 15,000 Huang
Job Overview: After such a close encounter with the killer you must take a short break to recover some of your stamina. After resting for a short period of time you head back out into the woods to find a surprise waiting for you. After defeating Nyx you must bring her back dead or alive to the authorities to receive your final reward.

Enemies:

Chain Reward:

Last edited by Rima on 31/10/16, 10:59 pm; edited 2 times in total

Rima Fahim · 2 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 10:59 am

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

ready for review~

Noir Ecryola · 3 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 09:54 pm

Noir Ecryola

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I do think this is an interesting job ^^
However, to be able to get a magic tool as your reward, I believe you should put more missions inside this chain. Perhaps more like 1 D-tier mission, 3 C-tier missions and 2 B-tier missions (just for example). The mission should be 5 or more with a various difficulty level.
Try to stretch the mission more, like how you go here and there to find information about the killer's whereabouts, maybe also some tricks played by the killer that put you into some kind of trouble, etc.

Rima Fahim · 4 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 10:33 pm

Rima Fahim

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Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Oh alrighty :o, I think I'll change the reward to just extra exp for now though. I mainly just wanted to know if a reward like that would be acceptable. Tyvm for explaining it~ ^^ How much bonus exp would be allowed for a chain mission like this?

Noir Ecryola · 5 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 10:45 pm

Noir Ecryola

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(260/260)

For the chain reward, it would be 50xp / 3,000 Huang ^^

Rima Fahim · 6 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 10:49 pm

Rima Fahim

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Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

edited ^^

Noir Ecryola · 7 Re: Evil Arises [Chain/Reserved] 31/10/16, 10:53 pm

Noir Ecryola

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Magoi:

(570/570)
Stamina:

(260/260)

I made a very minor edit for the black mamba, bump this thread if you are okay with the change ^^

Code:: [b]Job Name:[/b] Investigation [b]Job Rank:[/b] D-Tier [b]Job Location:[/b] Reim [b]Job Rewards:[/b] 50 Xp / 3,000 Huang [b]Job Overview:[/b] There has been horrible chain of murders in the mountain town of Caliginosus. The local authorities are currently offering a large reward to anyone who can find and capture the person responsible, dead or alive. You must go to the most recent scene, and find some clues that will help you track the killer down. After finding any form of evidence bring it to the authorities to be rewarded. [spoiler="Village View"][img]http://pix.avaxnews.com/avaxnews/e0/e3/0002e3e0_medium.jpeg[/img][/spoiler] [b]Job Name:[/b] Apparent Evil [b]Job Rank:[/b] C-Tier [b]Job Location:[/b] Reim [b]Job Rewards:[/b] 100 Xp / 7,000 Huang [b]Job Overview:[/b] The killer is still on the loose, but due to your recent detective work you might have a lead. Use the clues you found to track down the killer. After being ambushed by a known gang of criminals report back to the authorities for a reward. The Masked-Maniac is the killer and will NOT die during this encounter, they will instead escape. [spoiler="Enemies"][b]Enemy Name:[/b] Masked Man x1 [b]Rank:[/b] C-Tier [b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] C-Tier [b]Description:[/b] A dark-skinned well-built man that is about 182cm tall. He wears dark raggedy clothing, and a porcelain mask fully covers his face. He also has a curved sword at his waist. [b]Abilities:[/b] Moonlight Slash: Deals C-Tier damage with his curved blade. The masked-man will attempt to strike his foe by attacking with his sword in a crescent motion. Midnight Talon: Deals C-Tier damage with his curved blade. The masked-man lunges at his enemy with his blade and tries to go for the throat. Last Effort: Deals C-Tier damage with his fists. The masked-man will go for a few quick and heavy blows to stomach with his bare fists. If hit by this, your movement will be slowed for 1 post. [b]Enemy Name:[/b] Masked-Woman x1 [b]Rank:[/b] C-Tier [b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] C-Tier [b]Description:[/b] A fair-skinned lanky woman that stands about 165cm tall. She wears a long black dress that has multiple cuts in the fabric. Her face is also covered by a porcelain mask however, her porcelain mask has its lips painted red. She also has a small wooden crossbow strapped to her hip. [b]Abilities:[/b] Silver Bolts: Deals D-Tier damage with her crossbow. She will do a quick roll to escape an attack, and take a pot-shot towards you. This attack has low accuracy, but it has a high chance to protect them from a single attack. Thread and Needle: Deals C-Tier damage with her crossbow. She will steadily aim her cross towards you and fire. This attack is incredibly accurate. However, it will take them a bit of time to line you in their sights. Quick Jab: Deals C-Tier damage with her fist. She will attempt to jab you in a sensitive area. If hit by this your movement will be slowed for 1 post. [b]Enemy Name:[/b] Masked-Maniac x1 [b]Rank:[/b] C-Tier [b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] B-Tier [b]Description:[/b] A heavily clothed person with a feminine figure that stands about 135cm tall. They wear a black leather suit, and their face is covered by porcelain mask that has a large blue lippped grin on it. They have a curved blade at their side and a couple of pouches that could potentially store more weapons. [b]Abilities:[/b] Serpent Bite: Deals C-Tier damage with their curved blade. The masked-maniac will come at you with in a strange stance, and will attack in a disorienting snake-like attack. Danger Dance: Deals B-Tier damage with their whip-blade. The masked-maniac will begin to dance in front of you to serve as a distraction, and then will begin to strike in multiple areas around them with their hidden whip-blade. Striking Cobra: Deals C-Tier damage with their curved blade. The masked-maniac will rush towards you incredibly fast, and will strike in a straight line aiming for your chest. [/spoiler] [b]Job Name:[/b] Redemption [b]Job Rank:[/b] B-Tier [b]Job Location:[/b] Reim [b]Job Rewards:[/b] 200 Xp / 15,000 Huang [b]Chain Rewards:[/b] 50xp / 3,000 Huang [b]Job Overview:[/b] After such a close encounter with the killer you must take a short break to recover some of your stamina. After resting for a short period of time you head back out into the woods to find a surprise waiting for you. After defeating Nyx you must bring her back dead or alive to the authorities to receive your final reward. [spoiler="Enemies"][b]Enemy Name:[/b] Nyx:The Unmasked-Maniac x1 [b]Rank:[/b] C-Tier [b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] B-Tier [b]Description:[/b] Nyx is 135cm tall dark-skinned woman, that wears heavy and thick black leather that covers her body. She has multiple pouches on her body that could contain lethal weapons. [b]Abilities:[/b] Serpent Bite: Deals B-Tier damage with her curved blade. The masked-maniac will come at you with in a strange stance, and will attack in a disorienting snake-like attack. Danger Dance: Deals B-Tier damage with their whip-blade. The masked-maniac will begin to dance in front of you to serve as a distraction, and then will begin to strike in multiple areas around them with their hidden whip-blade. Striking Cobra: Deals B-Tier damage with their curved blade. The masked-maniac will rush towards you incredibly fast, and will strike in a straight line aiming for your chest. Black Mamba: Deals C-Tier damage with their hidden poison dagger. The masked-maniac will attempt to get close and personal with you, and stab you in the back with her incredibly poisonous dagger. If stabbed by this, the victim will begin to lose control over their body and faint. They will die if not treated within 3 posts [/spoiler]