Lagi's B rank Rebsubmission Part 1 ish

Name: Cell Repair
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie must not be expanding outside of Lagi's body
Scaling: Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie can heal Lagi's main body of B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.

Name: Goo Trap
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie can only attack through the allocated exit point.
Scaling: Resistance Band: For 10 more stamina, Orie's Goo can resist A rank strength .
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie generates and shoots out a thick gooey  substance that hardens on contact, 5m in diameter from Lagi's mouth. Anything caught will be in a B-Tier immobilization of the limbs that are hit. This technique can be forced to end early by Lagi. If the face is covered by this technique they will be unable to breath, with unconsciousness following in two posts and potentially death in the third.

Name: Kagune Wing
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
Scaling: N/A
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie generates a pair of black and red wings that are 3 1/2 meters in length and 2 meters in width that reside on Lagi's back. With this, he is capable of  speed flight equivalent to walking or running at any altitude for as long as the technique is active. If the wings are taken off, they would just regenerate naturally if the sustain is active.

Name:  Goop Acid bullets
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie grows tentacles out of Lagi's hands or shoulders first to act as "guns" to aim and fire the goop.

Scaling: Eat Through- For 10 extra stamina, each acid bullet, event though it has D rank ability damage, it maintains its B rank for item damage and can eat through magic items, weapons, and tools B rank or lower.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

A combination of treating Goop extensions as apart of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are  1 meter in diameter from the tentacle cannons that are generated. The tentacle cannons are 1 meter in length and width, and due to Orie's anatomy, are not locked in place and can aim remotely from any position.  The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. These bullets reach as far as 20 meters and Deal D rank damage each.  

Name: Digestive Slime bomb
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie forms for a second in order to create a tentacle cannon.
Scaling: Eat Through- For 10 extra stamina, the acid goop bomb has 1 rank higher in acidic item damage. This allows items, weapons, or magic tools A rank or higher to be damaged and destroyed.  
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

A combination of treating Goop extensions as apart of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Orie can fire off goop 7 meters in diameter from the  1.5 meter chest tentacle cannon thats generated from Lagi's body within 5 meters of Lagi, to inflict B-tier damage in the form of acidic burns upon contact. The symbiosis protects the Host Body from the digestive properties from the goop.  

Name: Outer Cell Repair
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie must be inside of Lagi.
Scaling: Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie can fire off a 7 meter fan spray  in length and width thats generated as an autonomous 2 meter tentacle hose  from Lagi's body to a point within 5 meters of Lagi, to heal B-tier damage over 3 posts after contact with the goop.  

Name:  Anomaly Internal Revert- Counter-Paralysis
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Using this within 3 posts of eating food negates the recovery gained from that food since.
Scaling: Medic 2: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal status 1 rank higher than this ability.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie can heal the effects of B-tier and lower temporarily paralysis by immediately repairing the damaged nerves  

Name:  Acid Tail
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie) And Body Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie's slime  is visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the allotted shape.
Scaling: Durable- For 10 more stamina,  the tail is now reinforced in such a way that it would take a higher ranked ability in order to destroy it.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Orie can conjure a scorpion resembling tail of digestive acid that can be in the dimensions of  10 meters in length and 20 centimeters in width. The tail does B rank acid damage.

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Body Manipulation Series

Name:  Bulk Up- Strength
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must flex arms first.
Scaling: Hercules- for 10 more stamina, Lagi can have strength 1 rank higher than the current rank.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Lagi increases the mass of muscles in his upper body and lower body, making it so he is capable of B-tier strength. Arm movement is slightly stiffer  than usual unless combined with Bulk Up- speed. 

Name:  Bulk Up- Speed
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must flex legs first.
Scaling: N/A
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Lagi increases the muscle mass of both legs and arms to move them at high speeds. The character can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls. 

Name:  Breathing Blast
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must inhale a deep breath
Scaling:Repel- For 10 more stamina, lagi can blow back attacks that are B rank or lower.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Lagi can imitate a basic yoga breathing exercise and turn it into a weapon. By taking in air with his lungs in unison with his stomach and chest by using the proper form, Lagi can blow out a powerful gust of wind. His stomach would expand depending on the amount of air he takes in and the strength of the wind is B rank damage and travels in a cone as far as 10 meters with a diameter of no more than 3 meters.  

Name:  Whiplash Spear
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator a
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must first wiggle out his wrist before proceeding.
Scaling: Double Hit- for 10 more stamina, this ability can hit twice each post.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Lagi extends one of his arms to 10 meters. When it strikes, it inflicts B-tier damage. Lagi is capable of sustaining this ability.

Name:  Bullet Point
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must aim the finger or toe in question in either an unorthodox way or a gun shape.
Scaling:  On the mark: For 10 more stamina, the extension capabilities of this attack doubles.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Through Orie, Lagi stretches out one of his fingers or toes as far between 5 meters away and fires them like a string bullet. The selected finger has a free form of moment  and could bend in any kind of way that Lagi wishes. The attack does B rank damage and can break bones upon  impact. Lagi can use either of his fingers or his toes.

Name:  Jumping Bean
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lagi must flex his legs and crouch  in a squat like position.
Scaling:  On the mark: For 10 more stamina, the jumping range of this ability doubles.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Lagi increases the muscle mass of his arms and legs and adds a spring to them, giving himself the ability to jump fast and move between 10 meters away. Lagi contains a spring cushion in his arms and legs that avoids any kind of residual pain to occur from the landings

Name:   Groundhog
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator and Beast Tamer [Orie]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
Scaling: Tough Claws- For 10 more stamina, Orie's shovel like hands can dig through even A rank surfaces.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Through Orie, Lagi creates two beast like limbs that look like shovel claws that are five feet in length and width each. They can be used to burrow underground.

Name:  Dense Shield
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator and Beast Tamer [Orie]
Type: Defensive
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
Scaling: Wall- For 10 more stamina, the defensive values of this ability will match 1 rank higher than this ability
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Through Orie, lagi can generate a hardened group like arm between 10 meters in size and harden the limb in order to block incoming attacks. Lagi can block 1 B-Tier, 2 C-Tier, or 4 D-Tier abilities before breaking.  If sustained, Lagi can either harden the limb again or generate another limb to use

Real quick, all your ranges are listed as mid. Even if they are clearly long range. Please be sure to fix this as you're making all the other edits.

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Cell Repair:

Requirements - Technically, Orie is always inside Lagi's body. "Orie must not be expanding outside of Lagi's body" is a more fitting wording for such a requirement.


Goo Trap:

Requirements - Orie is always inside Lagi so this isn't really valid.

Scaling - there is a typo here where you wrote group instead of goo

Description - Set a designated exit point for the goo. Drop the size of the goo to 5m. Having effect 3 limbs even if your opponent only stepped in it or got some on their hand is a bit too "gamey" for the new systems. It goes on logic so only the parts that are hit would be affected. This means you could potentially effect someone's entire body with a direct hit.

Might want to put in a line that the goo hardens. Otherwise immobilizing someone with it doesn't make total sense. The current wording seems to suggest the goop is just sticky which might lock them in place, but it wouldn't prevent an arm from swinging a sword even if it was covered from fingers to shoulders.


Kagune Wing:

Requirements - Same problems as above but I'll elaborate a bit more. The purpose of this section is to ensure that most abilities come with some kind of tell or weakness. So that means having Orie's slime visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into shape or something along those lines.

Description - Drop the "high speed" line OR set an altitude limit of like 10m.


Goop Acid Bullets:

Requirements - For an ability like this it should be something like Orie growing tentacles out of Lagi's hands or shoulders first to act as "guns" to aim and fire the goop.

Description - Make a specific point of exit. Decrease the size of each shot to 1m an increase your range to 20m OR drop the range to 7m.


Digestive Slime Bomb:

Requirements - You know the drill by now.

Description - Considering that a 7m diameter ball is roughly 4x the size of Lagi, I find it hard to imagine him producing a projectile that large unless Orie is creating a giant canon tentacle or something like that. I think a 7m fan spray would make more sense than a giant ball.

If you want 15m, drop the size from 7m to 2-3m. If you want to keep the 7m size of the attack, drop the range to 5m.


Outer Cell Repair:

Requirements - Same old, same old.

Description - Like above, nerf one aspect of the range or size of the ability. A giant ball coming out of your tiny ball makes no sense here either so changing it to a spray like from a hose would be better here also.


Anomoly Internal Revert:

Requirements - Refer to above abilities. But based on the ability, a good drawback would be that using this within 3 posts of eating food negates the recovery gained from that food since. Food would be a foreign substance after all and possibly is even the source of whatever poison you ingested.

Description - "Status Effects" is too broad of a term as there are many things one could consider status effects which can't be fixed internally. Specify that this expels poisons and other foreign materials.

Also, explain HOW this is happening. Like, is Orie sweeping through your body collecting bad stuff in her slime and then expelling it in a nasty slime ball Lagi coughs up?


Acid Tail:

Requirements - You know the drill

Range - The numbers you have would be long range. The nerfed range I mention would be mid.

Description - Okay this tail is wider than you are. It needs some serious dimension nerfing. Do you want a thick tail or a long tail? Thickest I'll allow is 1m with a 4m range. If you have a 20cm tail, you can have 10m range.


Bulk up Strength:

Drawbacks - Give this ability a drawback such as Lagi's movements being stiff while active or something like that.


Bulk up Speed:

Description - Give a text comparison to describe exactly how fast the speed boost is in relation to the fanalis racial bonuses.


Breathing Blast:

Description - Decrease the range and size of the blast to something more reasonable. Like with the above abilities, the more range you want, the smaller the blast should be. The less range you have, the bigger the blast can be.


Whiplash Spear:

Requirements - back to the same issue with the other Orie abilities.

Description - Drop the range. Specify whether this is being done with Orie's "arms" or Lagis. Can't be both.


Bullet Point:

Requirements - This ones super easy. Just say you have to aim your finger and make a "gun" shape with your hand.

Description - Limit this to fingers or toes. If you want to keep the range of 15m, then you can't have free movement. If you want free movement drop the range to 5m.


Jumping Bean:

Requirements - Add in the need for a crouch or something else other than just flexing.

Description - Set the range to a solid 10m


Groundhod:

Requirements - Same as above issues


Dense Shield:

Requirements - same as above issues

Description - Defensive abilities no longer gain a tier bonus. This also needs a more specific execution. You can't just do any limb in general. Be specific. Also, 10-15m is like 5 times your size, that's ridiculous. Cut the size down to something more reasonable.

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Anomoly Internal Revert:

Description - The way I see it, you've got multiple abilities in one here. The act of Orie moving through the body collecting foreign materials is very different from the act of Orie repairing damaged nerve cells. Yes, the goal of negating a status effect is the same, but as I pointed out before you can't just have an ability that cures status effects in general.

You can have an ability that can purge foreign substances and you can have an ability to repair damaged nerves to counter paralysis, you can also have an ability that heats up your cells and cures frostbite. But you can't have one ability that does all of these things based on the situation.


Breathing Blast:
Drop the range to 3m.


Bullet Point:
You need to drop the range to 5m if you want to keep freedom of movement. If you want to keep 15m range, it needs to be a straight shot without free movement.

Range scaling only adds 5m for every 10 magoi invested. It doesn't double.


Dense Shield:
Double check this one for typos. There seems to be a lot.

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The rest are approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Cell Repair
[center][b]Cell Repair[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie must not be expanding outside of Lagi's body
[b]Scaling:[/b] Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie can heal Lagi's main body of B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Goo Trap
[center][b]Goo Trap[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie can only attack through the allocated exit point.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Resistance Band: For 10 more stamina, Orie's Goo can resist A rank strength .
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie generates and shoots out a thick gooey  substance that hardens on contact, 5m in diameter from Lagi's mouth. Anything caught will be in a B-Tier immobilization of the limbs that are hit. This technique can be forced to end early by Lagi. If the face is covered by this technique they will be unable to breath, with unconsciousness following in two posts and potentially death in the third. [/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Kagune Wing
[center][b]Kagune Wing[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
[b]Scaling:[/b] N/A
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie generates a pair of black and red wings that are 3 1/2 meters in length and 2 meters in width that reside on Lagi's back. With this, he is capable of  speed flight equivalent to walking or running at any altitude for as long as the technique is active. If the wings are taken off, they would just regenerate naturally if the sustain is active. [/list]


[b]Name:[/b]  Goop Acid bullets
[center][b]Goop Acid bullets[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie grows tentacles out of Lagi's hands or shoulders first to act as "guns" to aim and fire the goop.

[b]Scaling:[/b] Eat Through- For 10 extra stamina, each acid bullet, event though it has D rank ability damage, it maintains its B rank for item damage and can eat through magic items, weapons, and tools B rank or lower.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A combination of treating Goop extensions as apart of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are  1 meter in diameter from the tentacle cannons that are generated. The tentacle cannons are 1 meter in length and width, and due to Orie's anatomy, are not locked in place and can aim remotely from any position.  The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. These bullets reach as far as 20 meters and Deal D rank damage each.  [/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Digestive Slime bomb
[center][b]Digestive Slime bomb[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie forms for a second in order to create a tentacle cannon.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Eat Through- For 10 extra stamina, the acid goop bomb has 1 rank higher in acidic item damage. This allows items, weapons, or magic tools A rank or higher to be damaged and destroyed.  
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A combination of treating Goop extensions as apart of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Orie can fire off goop 7 meters in diameter from the  1.5 meter chest tentacle cannon thats generated from Lagi's body within 5 meters of Lagi, to inflict B-tier damage in the form of acidic burns upon contact. The symbiosis protects the Host Body from the digestive properties from the goop.   [/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Outer Cell Repair
[center][b]Outer Cell Repair[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie must be inside of Lagi.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie can fire off a 7 meter fan spray  in length and width thats generated as an autonomous 2 meter tentacle hose  from Lagi's body to a point within 5 meters of Lagi, to heal B-tier damage over 3 posts after contact with the goop.   [/list]


[b]Name:[/b]  Acid Tail
[center][b] Acid Tail[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie) And Body Manipulation
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie's slime  is visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the allotted shape.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Durable- For 10 more stamina,  the tail is now reinforced in such a way that it would take a higher ranked ability in order to destroy it.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie can conjure a scorpion resembling tail of digestive acid that can be in the dimensions of  10 meters in length and 20 centimeters in width. The tail does B rank acid damage. [/list]


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Body Manipulation Series

[b]Name:[/b]  Bulk Up- Strength
[center][b] Bulk Up- Strength[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must flex arms first.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hercules- for 10 more stamina, Lagi can have strength 1 rank higher than the current rank.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lagi increases the mass of muscles in his upper body and lower body, making it so he is capable of B-tier strength. Arm movement is slightly stiffer  than usual unless combined with Bulk Up- speed. [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Bulk Up- Speed
[center][b] Bulk Up- Strength[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must flex legs first.
[b]Scaling:[/b] N/A
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lagi increases the muscle mass of both legs and arms to move them at high speeds. The character can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls.  [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Whiplash Spear
[center][b] Whiplash Spear[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator a
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must first wiggle out his wrist before proceeding.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Double Hit- for 10 more stamina, this ability can hit twice each post.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lagi extends one of his arms to 10 meters. When it strikes, it inflicts B-tier damage. Lagi is capable of sustaining this ability. [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Jumping Bean
[center][b] Jumping Bean[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must flex his legs and crouch  in a squat like position.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  On the mark: For 10 more stamina, the jumping range of this ability doubles.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lagi increases the muscle mass of his arms and legs and adds a spring to them, giving himself the ability to jump fast and move between 10 meters away. Lagi contains a spring cushion in his arms and legs that avoids any kind of residual pain to occur from the landings [/list]


[b]Name:[/b]   Groundhog
[center][b]  Groundhog[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator and Beast Tamer [Orie]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Tough Claws- For 10 more stamina, Orie's shovel like hands can dig through even A rank surfaces.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Through Orie, Lagi creates two beast like limbs that look like shovel claws that are five feet in length and width each. They can be used to burrow underground. [/list]


If possible, please reply with just the abilities that have yet to be approved when you bump this. Apologies for the delay.

all fixed, Microsoft word found nothing wrong with dense shield.

Lagi, actually read Dense Shield for errors please...

edited, sorry just noticed.

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[b]Name:[/b]  Anomaly Internal Revert- Counter-Paralysis
[center][b] Anomaly Internal Revert[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Using this within 3 posts of eating food negates the recovery gained from that food since.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Medic 2: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal status 1 rank higher than this ability.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Orie can heal the effects of B-tier and lower temporarily paralysis by immediately repairing the damaged nerves  [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Breathing Blast
[center][b] Breathing Blast[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must inhale a deep breath
[b]Scaling:[/b]Repel- For 10 more stamina, lagi can blow back attacks that are B rank or lower.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Lagi can imitate a basic yoga breathing exercise and turn it into a weapon. By taking in air with his lungs in unison with his stomach and chest by using the proper form, Lagi can blow out a powerful gust of wind. His stomach would expand depending on the amount of air he takes in and the strength of the wind is B rank damage and travels in a cone as far as 10 meters with a diameter of no more than 3 meters.   [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Bullet Point
[center][b] Bullet Point[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lagi must aim the finger or toe in question in either an unorthodox way or a gun shape.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  On the mark: For 10 more stamina, the extension capabilities of this attack doubles.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Through Orie, Lagi stretches out one of his fingers or toes as far between 5 meters away and fires them like a string bullet. The selected finger has a free form of moment  and could bend in any kind of way that Lagi wishes. The attack does B rank damage and can break bones upon  impact. Lagi can use either of his fingers or his toes. [/list]

[b]Name:[/b]  Dense Shield
[center][b]  Dense Shield[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator and Beast Tamer [Orie]
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie's slime will be  visibly writhing for a second before fully emerging into the appropriate shape in question.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Wall- For 10 more stamina, the defensive values of this ability will match 1 rank higher than this ability
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Through Orie, lagi can generate a hardened goop like arm between 10 meters in size and harden the limb in order to block incoming attacks. Lagi can block 1 B-Tier, 2 C-Tier, or 4 D-Tier abilities before breaking.  If sustained, Lagi can either harden the limb again or generate another limb to use[/list]