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1Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 02:06 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Diana's 2nd Beast Sesshomaru_sit_boy_by_metalric

Name: Pluto
Tier: D
Type: Normal
Species: Lunar Canine
Appearance: Pluto is a special breed of canine that was bred by Minerva Corvus. It has a voluminous white coat with a large grey mane, long ears and tail. They have red sclera with a blue iris and get their name from the crescent moon shaped mark on their heads. As a juvenile, he is 152 cm tall but can grow to 304 cm tall.

Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Acidic Fangs
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Lunar Canine
Trait Description: Through successful breeding, this breed has developed a natural acid that they can release into their saliva to coat their teeth.
Trait Effect: This D-tier acid causes bad chemical burns. The burns will deal C-tier damage and if the saliva gets in eyes it can cause temporary blindness.

Trait Name: Poison Resistance
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Lunar Canine
Trait Description: This species of canine has developed a resistance to poisons and toxins.
Trait Effect: He is able to resist up to D-tier poisons and toxins.

Trait Name: Bred for Battle
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Lunar Canine
Trait Description: Through sheer genes, size, and good training they can pack more of a punch than some other canine breeds.
Trait Effect: When attacking the canine deals one tier up of damage to the opponent. If the tier is D the attack deals C tier damage.



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2Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 10:40 am

Diligence

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Trait Name: Psionics Might want to try rewording this. I being intelligent wouldn't make it be able to levitate Beaten

Hopefully I don't need the money right away but I wanted to get him priced so I know how much I'll need. I tried to keep his abilities pretty tame for being a D-tier but if anything could be beefed up a bit more could you let me know? Thanks!

You don't need money. You're a Tamer. The traits are fine it's only D tier so these are perfectly viable.

Also, I want to make him a battle mount since I made him big enough but would I need to specify that anywhere? Haha. Sorry for all the questions I've been asking.

Any beast for a tamer that is large enough can technically be a mount.  Cool


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3Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 10:48 am

Diana Corvus

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BUMP

I reworded the last trait, you're absolutely right, haha.

Though about the money Noir told me I needed to buy it and priced it at 10k huang. o _o Which I didn't have the money before but now I do.


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4Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 11:48 am

Diligence

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Beaten Yeah thought they were free for Tamers

Approved. Priced at 10k.

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[b]Name:[/b] Pluto
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Appearance:[/b] Pluto is a special breed of canine that was bred by Minerva Corvus. It has a voluminous white coat with a large grey mane, long ears and tail. They have red sclera with a blue iris and get their name from the crescent moon shaped mark on their heads. As a juvenile, he is 152 cm tall but can grow to 304 cm tall.

[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Acidic Fangs
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through successful breeding, this breed has developed a natural acid that they can release into their saliva to coat their teeth.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] This D-tier acid causes bad chemical burns. The burns will deal C-tier damage and if the saliva gets in eyes it can cause temporary blindness.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Poison Resistance
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] This species of canine has developed a resistance to poisons and toxins.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] He is able to resist up to D-tier poisons and toxins.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Psionics
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Their species has adapted odd psychic abilities and gained the ability to levitate for short periods of time.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] He is able to levitate and move 2m above ground for one post with a one post cool down.


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5Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 11:53 am

Diana Corvus

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Bumping to purchase. o:

ithinkthatshowthisgoes.


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6Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 12:23 pm

Duquin

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Sorry, but psychic powers don't really fit the universe. Please make something to replace psionics.


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7Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 02:03 pm

Diana Corvus

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Bumping for the changes I made.

Sorry for that, this is really embarrassing. I should have known better.

Rolling Eyes


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8Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 08/10/16, 06:46 pm

Duquin

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Not at all, it's a simple mistake. There is no hard rule out there that psychic powers are banned. I'm just making that judgement call as an admin in order to maintain the atmosphere and theme of the source material.

Very Happy

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[b]Name:[/b] Pluto
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Appearance:[/b] Pluto is a special breed of canine that was bred by Minerva Corvus. It has a voluminous white coat with a large grey mane, long ears and tail. They have red sclera with a blue iris and get their name from the crescent moon shaped mark on their heads. As a juvenile, he is 152 cm tall but can grow to 304 cm tall.

[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Acidic Fangs
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through successful breeding, this breed has developed a natural acid that they can release into their saliva to coat their teeth.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allows the beast to register acid saliva based abilities.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Poison Resistance
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] This species of canine has developed a resistance to poisons and toxins.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] He is able to resist up to D-tier poisons and toxins.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Bred for Battle
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Lunar Canine
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through sheer genes, size, and good training they can pack more of a punch than some other canine breeds.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Increases the damage of basic attacks by one tier.


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9Diana's 2nd Beast Empty Re: Diana's 2nd Beast on 09/10/16, 08:24 am

Diana Corvus

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Yeah that's fine..! Thanks. It looks good to me, haha.

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