Kabuto submit

Kabutop · 1 Kabuto submit 11/09/16, 05:53 pm

Kabutop

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(252/252)
Stamina:

(100/100)

D Skills:

RipQuip

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type:Offensive
Range:Medium
Requirements Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust.
Scaling: created sword capable of more strikes
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1+ 1 sustain
Cost: 10, 5
Description:
Uses gravity to pull a chunk of the ground into the users hand in the shape of a sword capable of a single strike of D Teir damage. Sword can be up to 1 meters in length. [Strength/gravity magic]

original:

Vally

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type:Supplement
Range:Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. Wand/fingers must target centre of target
Scaling: 0
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1+ 1 sustain
Cost: 10, 5
Description:Targets a 3 meters diameter area within 10 meters of caster and rapidly raises it up 3 meter, pulls the equivalent of ground beneath the ground 3meters [Strength/gravity magic]

original:

D1

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust.
Scaling: 0
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1+ 1 sustain
Cost: 10, 5
Description: Gravity pushes user 5 meters in the direction of the caster's choosing. [Strength/gravity magic]

original:

Ds

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. Wand/fingers must target centre
Scaling: 0
Sustain: 0
Type:Supplement
Cool Down: 1+ 1 sustain
Cost: 10, 5
Description: Radpidly Pulls a 3 meter tall wall from the ground within ten meters of the caster.[Strength/gravity magic] Protects from one side, and width is 2 meters.

original:

C ranks:

B ranks:

The Walking Moon

Tier:B
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. Wand/fingers must point towards target, and words The Walking Moon must be spoken before running starts.
Scaling: Increased damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:5 posts
Cost: 30,15
Description: The user folds the gravitation direction around themselves, allowing the user to run in any direction on any surface they please for a distance of 10m. [Wall running, ceiling running, water running, and air running]. While doing so, the user fires off a 1m in diameter Ball of strength magoi at a target within 20 meters at speed to inflict C-tier damage. [Strength/gravity magic]

original:

Rising Sun

Tier:B
Class: Assassin
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Katana in hand and at least one foot on even footing.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain:0
Cool Down:5
Cost: 30/15
Description: The user jumps 5 meters into the air at speed, slicing their blade upward at the same speed to inflict C-tier damage to anything struck.

original:

Closing Cloud

Tier: B
Class:Assassin
Type: Supplementary/Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. Wand/fingers must point towards target, and words The Walking Moon must be spoken before running starts.
Sight prevention in area works both ways.
Scaling:Larger area of smoke
Sustain:0
Cool Down:5 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:
The user scrapes blade against the ground, at speed creating a strong friction between blade and ground to generate a smoking flame which generates a cloud of smoke with a diameter of 5 meters in front of the caster preventing people from seeing clearly within that area. Simultaneously the user will dash in any direction at speed for 5 meters.

original:

Toe Step

Tier: B
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: requires two unocupied feet
Scaling: larger distance
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 5posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:Rapidly moving without making a sound, the user sneaks through her surroundings at speed for a total distance of 7 m

original:

a ranks:

Last edited by Kabutop on 04/03/18, 05:13 pm; edited 12 times in total

Duquin · 2 Re: Kabuto submit 11/09/16, 08:14 pm

Duquin

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(100/100)

We don't use speed number anymore. Remove them all. This also means no speed scaling.

"Need a wand/katana" is not a satisfactory requirement. A requirement should be some kind of physical action you need to perform in most cases.

Requirements/Drawbacks is also not an optional section. You need to fill it out for the abilities where you left it blank.

Please fix those issues before further grading.

Kabutop · 3 Re: Kabuto submit 03/10/16, 12:19 pm

Kabutop

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(252/252)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Think done.

Diligence · 4 Re: Kabuto submit 04/10/16, 10:38 am

Diligence

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(100/100)
Stamina:

(400/400)

You will need to resubmit your character; it's been archived due to inactivity.

Kabutop · 5 Re: Kabuto submit 10/11/16, 06:20 pm

Kabutop

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(252/252)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Bumping this; now that i am archived

Ariel · 6 Re: Kabuto submit 13/11/16, 02:13 pm

Ariel

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(175/175)

RipQuip
- The sword should be 1 meter.
Vally
- This honestly seems more like a C-Tier ability than a D-Tier ability.
- At what increase does the area change per scaling?
- Please specify how deep of land this ability raises.
Ds
- The range should be close.
- Which aspect of the wall increases and how much does it increase per scaling?
- Does the barrier protect the user on all sides? Just one side? A combination of one side and from aerial attacks?
- It should just be about 2~3 meters in height.
- Can you please specify the width of the barrier?

D1: I changed the wording slightly.

Code:

[center][b]D1[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Magician [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Short [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. [b]Scaling:[/b] Increases distance [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1+ 1 sustain [b]Cost:[/b] 10, 5 [b]Description:[/b] Gravity pushes user 5 meters in the direction of the caster's choosing. [Strength/gravity magic]

Once you're done correcting everything for your D-Tier abilities, I'll move on to your C-Tier and B-Tier abilities.

Kabutop · 7 Re: Kabuto submit 27/11/16, 09:02 am

Kabutop

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(252/252)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Done & and i removed the scaling stuff; don't care for it. Nerfs be real but i think i done the d stuff.

Ariel · 8 Re: Kabuto submit 10/12/16, 09:57 pm

Ariel

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(175/175)

Vally
- 2-3 meters would be more appropriate for a D-tier ability like this.

RipQuip:

Code:: [center][b]RipQuip [/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Magician [b]Type:[/b]Offensive [b]Range:[/b]Medium [b]Requirements [/b][b]Drawbacks[/b]: Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. [b]Scaling:[/b] created sword capable of more strikes [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1+ 1 sustain [b]Cost:[/b] 10, 5 [b]Description:[/b] Uses gravity to pull a chunk of the ground into the users hand in the shape of a sword capable of a single strike of D Tier damage. Sword can be up to 1 meters in length. [Strength/gravity magic]

D1:

Code:: [center][b]D1[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Magician [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Short [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. [b]Scaling:[/b] - [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1+ 1 sustain [b]Cost:[/b] 10, 5 [b]Description:[/b] Gravity pushes user 5 meters in the direction of the caster's choosing. [Strength/gravity magic]

Ds: I changed the type to defensive.

Code:: [center][b]Ds[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Magician [b]Type:[/b] Defensive [b]Range: [/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Pointing wand in certain direction/ or placing two fingers, and rapidly thrusting in direction, spell goes direction of fingers trust. Wand/fingers must target center. [b]Scaling:[/b] - [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1+ 1 sustain [b]Cost:[/b] 10, 5 [b]Description: [/b] Rapidly pulls a 3 meter tall wall from the ground within ten meters of the caster.[Strength/gravity magic] Protects from one side, and width is 2 meters.

Kabutop · 9 Re: Kabuto submit 04/03/18, 05:13 pm

Kabutop

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(252/252)
Stamina:

(100/100)

All good now i think; changed the 5 meters into 3. So thats my Ds all done ???

Ariel · 10 Re: Kabuto submit 04/03/18, 08:29 pm

Ariel

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(175/175)

When I first graded your abilities I was still a bit noobish on it so... haha... Time to remedy my mistakes!

Ripquip

Requirements/Drawback | I'm not really sure how this requirement necessarily fits this ability? It doesn't make sense to me, but I guess it can work? I mostly want to hear your thoughts on it because this statement, 'spell goes direction of fingers trust', strikes me as odd given the nature of the ability.
Description | While I do get why I nerfed it to 1m, looking back, I think it may have been a little too much. I believe it was 5m previously? As of now, I do feel it would be appropriate to place it at 3m.
Description | The sword, if it isn't used to deal D-Tier damage in one post, will disintegrate.

Vally

Scaling | You need to have some sort of scaling. This applies to all your abilities. Scalings are extremely useful, so it would be weakening yourself by not adding them - hence my insistence for scaling.
Description | I believe I should nerf the range which you may affect to 7m.
Description | You may hold up the chunk of land for one post. Please specify that in your description.

D1

Range | Your range should be medium, silly goose~.

Ds

Description | Please change the max range which you may pull a wall from to 5m.
Description | Don't forget to specify how much damage it may protect against before being destroyed. Furthermore, if it hasn't already been destroyed, in one post it should collapse.