Solomon's Ability Re-submission

I will not be adding any slots that I did not have Trained as I do not feel like training anything right now. Also gone ahead and added one Shard of Solomon to my Vault.

Current A-tier Abilities:

New A-tier Abilities:

Had to make new post as other keeps making errors on it's own no matter how hard I try to fix it.

Current B-Tier Abilities:

New B-Tier Abilities:

(Cost should be 40|20 for all of them)
(In the new system, speed values like 10m/s isn't used anymore)


For the scaling, it sounds like you are trying to increase the AoE.
So for ever 10 Magoi invested, it would increase the AoE by 5m.
Reduce its capability of blocking to A-Tier of damage.


'Blocking with shell only' isn't really a requirement/drawback. It's more of a specification on what happens after the user fulfills the requirements. What actions does the user need to perform in order activate this ability?
Lower it's blocking efficiency to A-tier.


Because 'poisoned' is a status effect, the type would be both Offensive and Supplementary.
Obviously he would need to use his fangs to inject venom in his target. However, that doesn't inform me how Mamoru decided to even attack in the first place. Does Mamoru just attack out of nowhere? What commands did you give him?
Also, the immediate damage would be A-Tier. So basically Mamoru has a 0m-1m range of attack. Honestly, I would increase the range to Short, so Mamoru isn't so restricted in his movements.

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I shall grade your B-Tier abilities once I get off my phone ^^
And I wish you good luck keeping your sanity as you convert your abilities into the new form.

bump, I"ll finish all my C-Tier and D-Tier after these one's are approved :P

Bump

For the requirement of most of the abilities, you need to put physical movement for all the skills, for example commanding your beast with an audible voice, or moving your axe overhead to get ready to swing it

Intimidating Strength:
Better put '-' or '0' for the sustain
I would suggest damage or AOE scaling for this ability
For the requirement, add the physical movement that you want to do with your axe

Crushing Weight:
What kind of command that you will say to your beast, you need to put some more detail for this
Id recommend damage or hit scaling
Put the range for your ability, how far your beast can charge

Venomous Surprise:
Describe what your beast need to do before it can do the attack for the requirement, such as commanding it with a loud voice so it can hear what you want it to do.
Id recommend range scaling

Will grade your B-tier after these parts is good ^^

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t7029-abilities-job-if-one-pleases#38372
Gonna take this on for Solomon.

Name: Intimidating Strength
Tier: A
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must use an axe. Axe must be held by both hands. Axe must be held behind the user.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

• Solomon would swing his axe in a crescent motion and smash it down upon his target dealing A-tier damage. Bringing the axe upwards in the same motion for consecutive strikes. The blow will destroy any material in a 5M radius of impact.
  

Name: Crushing Weight
Tier: A
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: A single, short high pitched whistle to communicate the attack.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

• Mamoru will charge the target within 10M, and use any portion of his carapace to crush the target. The weight and the hardness of the shell deal crushing A-tier damage.
  

Name: Venomous Surprise
Tier: A
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: A double, short high-pitched whistle. The paralysis takes a turn. To poison, the fangs pierce the skin. The target of the attack must be able to fit within Mamoru's mouth, such as a humans arm, leg or neck, but not someones chest or back
Scaling: For 20 more stamina, the damage and poison are increased to A-tier.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40
Description:

• Mamoru would charge towards his target up to 10M away and biting down with massive force of his jaws. He would sink his fangs in his target dealing B-Tier damage. On contact, the fangs which are that of a Cephalopod would then also release a venom applying B-Tier poison to cause paralysis on bitten area and spread through the body causing paralysis in the two limbs closest to the affected area.
  

Intimidating Strength:
Remove this line "The blow will destroy any material in a 5M radius of impact."


Crushing Weight:

Requirements - How does this tell Mamoru where to aim the attack? There should be a bit more here.

Description - Charging 10m would be a supplementary aspect.

How are you "crushing" the target? Is it a tackle? A flop? Rolling on top of them?


Venomous Surprise:

Requirements - I don't understand why the "paralysis takes a turn" line is here. Could you explain a bit more clearly?

Scaling - This ability can't be damage scaled any higher since it is already at the cap of A-tier(the combined potency of the two parts).

Description - Once again, adding in the charge would be supplementary. Part of the ability potency would need to be split to keep it.

Note that the paralysis lasts only one post. If you want it to last longer, lower the number of limbs affected.

Name: Intimidating Strength
Tier: A
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must use an axe. Axe must be held by both hands. Axe must be held behind the user.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

• Solomon would swing his axe in a crescent motion and smash it down upon his target dealing A-tier damage. Bringing the axe upwards in the same motion for consecutive strikes.
  

Name: Crushing Weight
Tier: A
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive/Supplmentary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: A single, short high pitched whistle to communicate the attack. Mamoru will select a target it can see.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

• Mamoru will charge the target within 10M, and will shoulder tackle an enemy. The weight and the hardness of the shell deal crushing B-tier damage.
  

Name: Venomous Surprise
Tier: A
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: A double, short high-pitched whistle. The paralysis doesn't affect the target until their following post. To poison, the fangs pierce the skin. The target of the attack must be able to fit within Mamoru's mouth, such as a humans arm, leg or neck, but not someones chest or back
Scaling: For every 10 stamina, the poison affects an extra limb.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40
Description:

• Mamoru bites down with massive force of his jaws. He would sink his fangs in his target dealing B-Tier damage. On contact, the fangs which are that of a Cephalopod would then also release a venom applying B-Tier poison to cause paralysis on bitten area and spread through the body causing paralysis to the limb closest to the affected area.
  

Gradeable.

Name: Wardens Grasp
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Target must be able to fit within his hand. Cannot run. Must be on the ground.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Solomon reaches out either of his hands and grasps the target and using his grip strength to deal B-Tier damage. Easily breaking any bone and tearing muscle he comes in contact with.
  

Name: Stabbing thrust
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have a running start. Must use both hands. Must bring weapon back before stabbing.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Using his axe, this move allows Solomon to thrust his axe forward using the blade that is atop of the axe to deal B-Tier damage.
  

Name: Castle Toss
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must grab target with both arms. Must be on the ground. Must have sufficient strengrh to lift target.
Scaling: Adding 10 Stamina to this would double its' distance.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Reaching out grabbing the target he would then tosses the target 10 meters in any direction, this would deal C-tier damage.
  

Name: Fortress Wall Stance
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Defense
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Unable to walk, still takes C-tier damage. Must be on the ground. Only protects chest and abdomin.
Scaling: Damage. For every 10 stamina, the amount blocked is increased by one tier.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• He would plant his feet taking a stance with his arms out flexing inwards to bulge his muscle which would allow his chest and abdomen to take up to B-Tier damage.
  

Name: Round Robin
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must bring axe behind his back, both hands are required. Must be on the ground.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Slashing his blade horizontally or diagonally. He then flips the edge, and does a return slash through the same path. Each slash deals C-Tier damage.
  

Name: Mauling
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Maul X" X designating a target. Mamoru brings his paw up.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru raises his paw and swipes at his target and on contact his claws would deal B-Tier damage.
  

Name: Piercing Claws
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Jab X" X designating a target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru would use his claw to jab at the target and on contact, his claws would sink deep into the target dealing C-Tier Bleeding on contact and deal C-Tier damage. The bleeding would deal D-Tier damage over two posts.
  

Name: Drop and Roll
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Roll X" X being a target or direction
Mamoru cannot see. Mamoru cannot turn on his own.
Scaling: Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru would charge his enemy then jump into the air aiming to crush the target or targets with his shell. As he hits the ground he would then use that speed to continue rolling allowing him to deal B-Tier damage and this would be dealt to anyone he rolls on. He is able to roll 10 meters from initial contact.
  

Name: Bloody Teeth
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Verbal Command, ""Sic X Mamoru" X designating a target.
Scaling: Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru would sink its' teeth into the target digging them in deep to deal C-Tier damage and he would then toss it's target 10 meters in any direction.
  

Name: Stampede
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Magoi Cost, takes two seconds to channel magoi, must have a 5M start up run
Scaling: Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 6
Cost: 30 Stamina & 30 Magoi
Description:

• Solomon would channel the Magoi through his leg and out his foot and down into the ground as he smashed his foot into the ground it would then go throughout the ground, those around him would hear sounds like that of a stampede and the ground would begin to shake just before the terrain in a 15 meter diameter would then erupt upwards. Giant chunks of the terrain would shoot up at those in the diameter dealing A-Tier damage and the Magoi would then be seen escaping the cracks left in the ground as small particles of light. This would leave a meter space where Solomon would be standing of undamaged terrain.
  

Name: Tail Whip
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Whip X" X designating a target.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru would twist it's body to whip its' tail at a target on contact it would deal a brunt force of B-Tier damage.
  

Name: Synchronized Attack
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Mamoru must be still. Must use both hands.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Solomon over the time of training together with Mamoru has gotten more in sync with him and vice versa allowing them to time their attacks above par of others. Solomon would be able to jump off of Mamoru and launch an attack slashing his axe at the target dealing B-Tier Damage.
  

Name: Crushing Blow
Tier: B
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Solomon raises an open palm and swings it down at a chosen target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

• Mamoru would use his own body and the strength of its legs to bellyflip into a target causing B-Tier damage.
  

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Intimidating Strength:
Approved

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Intimidating Strength
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must use an axe. Axe must be held by both hands. Axe must be held behind the user.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Solomon would swing his axe in a crescent motion and smash it down upon his target dealing A-tier damage. Bringing the axe upwards in the same motion for consecutive strikes.
[/list]

Crushing Weight:
Approved

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Crushing Weight
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplmentary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A single, short high pitched whistle to communicate the attack. Mamoru will select a target it can see.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]

[list]
[*]Mamoru will charge the target within 10M, and will shoulder tackle an enemy. The weight and the hardness of the shell deal crushing B-tier damage.
[/list]

Venomous Surprise:
Approved

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Venomous Surprise
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A double, short high-pitched whistle. The paralysis doesn't affect the target until their following post. To poison, the fangs pierce the skin. The target of the attack must be able to fit within Mamoru's mouth, such as a humans arm, leg or neck, but not someones chest or back
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 stamina, the poison affects an extra limb.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru bites down with massive force of his jaws. He would sink his fangs in his target dealing B-Tier damage. On contact, the fangs which are that of a Cephalopod would then also release a venom applying B-Tier poison to cause paralysis on bitten area and spread through the body causing paralysis to the limb closest to the affected area.
[/list]

Approved with edits:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Wardens Grasp
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Target must be able to fit within his hand. Cannot run. Must be on the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Solomon reaches out either of his hands and grasps the target and using his grip strength to deal B-Tier damage. Easily breaking any bone and tearing muscle he comes in contact with.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Stabbing thrust
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have a running start. Must use both hands. Must bring weapon back before stabbing.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Using his axe, this move allows Solomon to thrust his axe forward using the blade that is atop of the axe to deal B-Tier damage.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Castle Toss
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must grab target with both arms. Must be on the ground. Must have sufficient strength to lift target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adding 10 Stamina to this would double its' distance.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Reaching out grabbing the target he would then tosses the target 10 meters in any direction, this would deal C-tier damage on impact if the target is unable to [b]use an ability[/b] to recover in midair.[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Fortress Wall Stance
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defense
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Unable to walk, still takes C-tier damage. Must be on the ground. Only protects chest and abdomin.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage. For every 10 stamina, the amount blocked is increased by one tier.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]He would plant his feet taking a stance with his arms out flexing inwards to bulge his muscle which would allow his chest and abdomen to take up to B-Tier damage.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Round Robin
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must bring axe behind his back, both hands are required. Must be on the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Slashing his blade horizontally or diagonally. He then flips the edge, and does a return slash through the same path. Each slash deals C-Tier damage.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Mauling
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Maul X" X designating a target. Mamoru brings his paw up.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru raises his paw and swipes at his target and on contact his claws would deal B-Tier damage.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Piercing Claws
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Jab X" X designating a target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru would use his claw to jab at the target and on contact, his claws would sink deep into the target dealing C-Tier Bleeding on contact and deal C-Tier damage. The bleeding would deal D-Tier damage over two posts.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Drop and Roll
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Roll X" X being a target or direction
Mamoru cannot see. Mamoru cannot turn on his own.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru would charge his enemy then jump into the air aiming to crush the target or targets with his shell. As he hits the ground he would then use that speed to continue rolling allowing him to deal B-Tier damage and this would be dealt to anyone he rolls on. He is able to roll 10 meters from initial contact.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Bloody Teeth
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Verbal Command, ""Sic X Mamoru" X designating a target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru would sink its' teeth into the target digging them in deep to deal C-Tier damage and he would then toss it's target 10 meters in any direction.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Stampede
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Magoi Cost, takes two seconds to channel magoi, must have a 5M start up run
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adding 10 Stamina could double it's distance
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 6
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina & 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Solomon would channel the Magoi through his leg and out his foot and down into the ground as he smashed his foot into the ground it would then go throughout the ground, those around him would hear sounds like that of a stampede and the ground would begin to shake just before the terrain in a 15 meter diameter would then erupt upwards. Giant chunks of the terrain would rise upwards while dissolving into a large cloud of dust destroying the footing of those in range. The Magoi would then be seen escaping the cracks left in the ground as small particles of light. This would leave a meter space where Solomon would be standing of undamaged terrain.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Tail Whip
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Verbal Command, ""Mamoru Whip X" X designating a target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru would twist it's body to whip its' tail at a target on contact it would deal a brunt force of B-Tier damage.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Synchronized Attack
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Mamoru must be still. Must use both hands.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Solomon over the time of training together with Mamoru has gotten more in sync with him and vice versa allowing them to time their attacks above par of others. Solomon would be able to jump off of Mamoru and launch 15m forward. While flying, Solomon can perform attacks freely.
[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Crushing Blow
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Solomon raises an open palm and swings it down at a chosen target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Description: [/b]
[list]
[*]Mamoru would use his own body and the strength of its legs to bellyflip into a target causing B-Tier damage.
[/list]