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1[CS] Khonsu Menektef Empty [CS] Khonsu Menektef 20/07/16, 05:14 pm

Fuyutora

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Name: Khonsu Menektef.

Country Affiliation: Heliohapt

Race: Human.

Tier: D-Tier.

Class: Warrior.

Age + Birthdate: 19 years old, Movember 16.

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Heterossexual

Personality:

Khonsu is a nice guy. He dislikes any problems on his patch and loves the way the world works without him. Honestly as 99% of all time, he still wants to know beautiful places around the world as he never could until now. Khonsu never stops smiling and, even when anger, never loses his sense of humor and keeps joking all the time, taunting his enemies with that attitude. Normally, the people do not care to his presence and he does not care about the presence of other people around him. One of the most beloved things in the world for Khonsu is the fight: brawling, coliseum competitions, wars… Don’t matter the type of conflict, he only sit and watches with he’s eyes glowing… Unless he jumps into the battle too! As he doesn’t care about injuries or scars in his body, a fight is the most exciting form of fun to him as a person. At the point he only care about losing his members, like legs and arms, as by that way he probably never can fight again. Anyway, he acts as a crazy and stupid guy that likes joking, taunting and fighting other people only for his own fun and pleasure, ignoring any other opinions about him.

Likes:


Fighting - As I tell previously, fighting is the most fun thing in the world to Khonsu, as it watches or as it grabs into the battle too.

Sense of Humor - Khonsu loves joking and taunting his enemies and friends too, he makes jokes even when serious.


Dislikes:

Tyrants and Stupid people - Khonsu hates any living creature that don't appreciate the good of a casual life and don't gives the right respect to other peoples life. Tyrants of royal families is the most hated people for him.

Cats - For some reason, Khonsu hates cats and any other feline species. Keeping some distance from that animals.


Aspirations:

Although his personality, Khonsu have a serious aspiration: he wants to make all people in the world learn more about one another, to create an world pure and good, without non sense wars and fights only for fun. A world without tyranny and without arrogance, that no one is different from another: a world that all living creatures are kings, kings of their own life and destiny. A world without depravity. Without fear of slavery. A world of hope.

Phobias/fears:

He have some fear about cats and other felines that he never tells to anyone, as he family was devoured by lions when he was only a child. He not have some stupid attacks of fear when see these animals, but prefer some distance from them, as he tells to other people that he only “hates” that fluffy creatures. Until the actuality, Khonsu keeps having some nightmares with his dead family in a jail with hungry lions.

Face-Claim: Rider(Fate/Prototype: Fragments).

Hair Color: Brown.

Eye Color: Golden

Height: 179 cm

Weight: 65kg

Appearance:

Khonsu is a brown haired guy, with golden and wild eyes that resamples some pride and fun, that same eyes are a contrast with his smile, that looks like a taunt to anyone he meets. He normally shows as his figurine some metal rings that cover he’s torso, and a white cover and scarf, that hide he’s face from the other people. He has a more dark skin as usual in his country. He uses a metal cover on his legs and black pants too and shows no shirt. The most important characteristic of him is he’s athletic body trained with years of fighting lessons.

Rukh Alignment: White Rukh

Special Features: -x-

History:

Khonsu life was not so easy them the other peoples think. Born as a slave in Qishan, he’s family teaches martial arts to the wealthy family, and as payment for their job, they was treated like no more them wild animals. Normally they didn’t even eat half a meal, living aside jails and jails of wild beasts. He’s father was the strongest man Khonsu meets, capable of broke bones of animals with extremely easily, venerated on his clan as the incarnation of the perfect warrior. But… Some enemies even the perfect warriors can defeat. As he grows, Khonsu watches his father fall in battle for plagues and diseases, one after the other, taking his body into a critical condition. Watching his servant die, his family owners only disapprove the capability and resistance of them, saying only that they’re “stupid creatures without own life, only mere objects without utility”. As that, they’re thrown to the lions as mere meat slices. Thanks to a frame from his mother, Khonsu was able to escape, but not before seeing his entire family dying to the hungry beasts. Hiding himself and training the abilities taught to him by his father, the young boy traveled through the desert, through storms and wild animals, until he reached his objective: Khonsu’s original country, Heliohapt. Incapable to sustain itself, Khonsu grown up as a thief, getting anything it could use to pay his water and food. But he never stops smiling. The royal guard and soldiers always hunted him for his crimes but they were incapable of getting the young, as they easily fall in his jokes and taunts, turning into mere stupid guys with weapons. He created his own imperium, keeping other minor bandits away from his territory and hiding himself in any place dark and good to see the sky. Actually, Khonsu is one of the most infantile peoples in the entire Heliohapt, showing to anyone his smile and joking every time when awake. Although, he ever shows some goodness, giving food to other people without sustainability to pay that, specially the little children that lives in the streets like him lived, as he some times steal remedies to orphans.

Role-Play Sample:

Khonsu was taking care. A royal announcement, ahn? Nice! The guards were in their palces, with swords and spears in hand… He needed to be quite quickly on this service… His eyes flied though the people gathered there. Gold coins, some jewels like rings, necklaces and earrings. He gives a smile hided by his white scarf. He mingled with crowd… His hands working fast, taking only what was easier to carry with him… With some minutes passed and a bag full of some gold and jewels he exited with some care. He walk with calm, the king’s words was been heard but Khonsu’s brain just not even care with it… After all... He had the money!



Last edited by Fuyutora on 20/07/16, 06:51 pm; edited 2 times in total

2[CS] Khonsu Menektef Empty Re: [CS] Khonsu Menektef 20/07/16, 05:41 pm

Ariel

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Welcome to Magi World RP! You're application looks pretty good but I do have a few things that I need to point out:

Phobias/fears:


    This is required to be 75 words long. Your phobias/fears don't meet this word minimum.


Height:


    I am assuming you meant to put 179 cm? Can you please fix it so that it actually says it? (Typos are silly, aren't they?)


Bump when you've made these changes~

3[CS] Khonsu Menektef Empty Re: [CS] Khonsu Menektef 20/07/16, 06:08 pm

Duquin

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One note about your history as well:

You mention being the worst thief in Heliohapt, but that's a bit too much of a reputation to hold starting out as a D-tier character. Being a general menace to the guards is fine though.

4[CS] Khonsu Menektef Empty Re: [CS] Khonsu Menektef 20/07/16, 06:31 pm

Ariel

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Pre-Approved!

Anyways, please wait for someone who has permission to approve your application to come along. Since I'm only pre-approving your app, its possible they may have other things to point out that I missed.

5[CS] Khonsu Menektef Empty Re: [CS] Khonsu Menektef 20/07/16, 08:29 pm

Duquin

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Approved~

Don't forget to make a Vault and get your starter weapons/abilities approved!

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6478-ability-template-systems
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f38-hakim-s-smithy
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f10-vault

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[size=30]CS - Khonsu[/size][/center]


[justify][b]Name: [/b][i]Khonsu Menektef.[/i]

[b]Country Affiliation: [/b][i]Heliohapt[/i]

[b]Race: [/b][i]Human.[/i]

[b]Tier: [/b][i]D-Tier.[/i]

[b]Class: [/b][i]Warrior.[/i]

[b]Age + Birthdate: [/b][i]19 years old, Movember 16.[/i]

[b]Gender: [/b][i]Male[/i]

[b]Sexuality: [/b][i]Heterossexual[/i]

[b]Personality: [/b]

[i]Khonsu is a nice guy. He dislikes any problems on his patch and loves the way the world works without him. Honestly as 99% of all time, he still wants to know beautiful places around the world as he never could until now. Khonsu never stops smiling and, even when anger, never loses his sense of humor and keeps joking all the time, taunting his enemies with that attitude. Normally, the people do not care to his presence and he does not care about the presence of other people around him. One of the most beloved things in the world for Khonsu is the fight: brawling, coliseum competitions, wars… Don’t matter the type of conflict, he only sit and watches with he’s eyes glowing… Unless he jumps into the battle too! As he doesn’t care about injuries or scars in his body, a fight is the most exciting form of fun to him as a person. At the point he only care about losing his members, like legs and arms, as by that way he probably never can fight again. Anyway, he acts as a crazy and stupid guy that likes joking, taunting and fighting other people only for his own fun and pleasure, ignoring any other opinions about him.[/i]

[b]Likes: [/b]


[i][b]Fighting - [/b]As I tell previously, fighting is the most fun thing in the world to Khonsu, as it watches or as it grabs into the battle too.

[b]Sense of Humor - [/b]Khonsu loves joking and taunting his enemies and friends too, he makes jokes even when serious.[/i]

[b]Dislikes: [/b]

[i][b]Tyrants and Stupid people - [/b]Khonsu hates any living creature that don't appreciate the good of a casual life and don't gives the right respect to other peoples life. Tyrants of royal families is the most hated people for him.

[b]Cats - [/b]For some reason, Khonsu hates cats and any other feline species. Keeping some distance from that animals.[/i]

[b]Aspirations: [/b]

[i]Although his personality, Khonsu have a serious aspiration: he wants to make all people in the world learn more about one another, to create an world pure and good, without non sense wars and fights only for fun. A world without tyranny and without arrogance, that no one is different from another: a world that all living creatures are kings, kings of their own life and destiny. A world without depravity. Without fear of slavery. A world of hope.[/i]

[b]Phobias/fears: [/b]

[i]He have some fear about cats and other felines that he never tells to anyone, as he family was devoured by lions when he was only a child. He not have some stupid attacks of fear when see these animals, but prefer some distance from them, as he tells to other people that he only “hates” that fluffy creatures. Until the actuality, Khonsu keeps having some nightmares with his dead family in a jail with hungry lions.[/i]

[b]Face-Claim: [/b]Rider(Fate/Prototype: Fragments).

[b]Hair Color: [/b][i]Brown.[/i]

[b]Eye Color:[/b] [i]Golden[/i]

[b]Height: [/b][i]179 cm[/i]

[b]Weight: [/b][i]65kg[/i]

[b]Appearance: [/b]

[i]Khonsu is a brown haired guy, with golden and wild eyes that resamples some pride and fun, that same eyes are a contrast with his smile, that looks like a taunt to anyone he meets. He normally shows as his figurine some metal rings that cover he’s torso, and a white cover and scarf, that hide he’s face from the other people. He has a more dark skin as usual in his country. He uses a metal cover on his legs and black pants too and shows no shirt. The most important characteristic of him is he’s athletic body trained with years of fighting lessons.[/i]

[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] [i]White Rukh[/i]

[b]Special Features:[/b] [i]-x-[/i]

[b]History:[/b]

[i]Khonsu life was not so easy them the other peoples think. Born as a slave in Qishan, he’s family teaches martial arts to the wealthy family, and as payment for their job, they was treated like no more them wild animals. Normally they didn’t even eat half a meal, living aside jails and jails of wild beasts. He’s father was the strongest man Khonsu meets, capable of broke bones of animals with extremely easily, venerated on his clan as the incarnation of the perfect warrior. But… Some enemies even the perfect warriors can defeat. As he grows, Khonsu watches his father fall in battle for plagues and diseases, one after the other, taking his body into a critical condition. Watching his servant die, his family owners only disapprove the capability and resistance of them, saying only that they’re “stupid creatures without own life, only mere objects without utility”. As that, they’re thrown to the lions as mere meat slices. Thanks to a frame from his mother, Khonsu was able to escape, but not before seeing his entire family dying to the hungry beasts. Hiding himself and training the abilities taught to him by his father, the young boy traveled through the desert, through storms and wild animals, until he reached his objective: Khonsu’s original country, Heliohapt. Incapable to sustain itself, Khonsu grown up as a thief, getting anything it could use to pay his water and food. But he never stops smiling. The royal guard and soldiers always hunted him for his crimes but they were incapable of getting the young, as they easily fall in his jokes and taunts, turning into mere stupid guys with weapons. He created his own imperium, keeping other minor bandits away from his territory and hiding himself in any place dark and good to see the sky. Actually, Khonsu is one of the most infantile peoples in the entire Heliohapt, showing to anyone his smile and joking every time when awake. Although, he ever shows some goodness, giving food to other people without sustainability to pay that, specially the little children that lives in the streets like him lived, as he some times steal remedies to orphans.[/i]

[b]Role-Play Sample: [/b]

[i]Khonsu was taking care. A royal announcement, ahn? Nice! The guards were in their palces, with swords and spears in hand… He needed to be quite quickly on this service… His eyes flied though the people gathered there. Gold coins, some jewels like rings, necklaces and earrings. He gives a smile hided by his white scarf. He mingled with crowd… His hands working fast, taking only what was easier to carry with him… With some minutes passed and a bag full of some gold and jewels he exited with some care. He walk with calm, the king’s words was been heard but Khonsu’s brain just not even care with it… After all... He had the money![/i][/justify]

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