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1Next Phase Empty Next Phase 22/12/15, 03:22 pm

Kaveh Issa

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Solid Flame [Heat + Strength]; Restricted (Founder: Kaveh Issa)
By combining flames and giving them a physical form through strength magic, the user creates constructs that emit intense flames.

Name: Repel
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Element: Strength - Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Cool Down: 3 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: Kaveh creates an intense gravitational pull behind his target, that pulls them up to 10 meters away from Kaveh’s position, giving the appearance of them being repelled from him, at 20 m/s.

Name: Pull
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Element: Strength - Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Cool-down: 3 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: By honing in on his gravitational pull on a certain object or person, Kaveh can pull his target 10 meters closer to him at 20 m/s.

Name: Soldier of Flames
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Element: Heat and Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Cool Down: 3 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: By using his strength magic to give shape and form to an incredible mass of flame. The resulting warrior stands at 180 cm in height and is equipped with a sword and shield. This soldier acts as a puppet for Kaveh in certain battles and situations. The soldier is formed and moves at a constant 15 m/s.



Last edited by Kaveh Issa on 23/12/15, 09:43 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 22/12/15, 10:47 pm

Vardreth

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The only issue is with the magic type; it looks like it is dealing D-Tier damage as a its bonus effect. Combination magic is not supposed to be able to deal damage as part of its bonus effect. It is only supposed to be capable of supplementary/utility abilities.

3Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 23/12/15, 01:10 am

Kaveh Issa

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Fixed, brah

4Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 23/12/15, 08:57 am

Noir Ecryola

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Soldier of Flame : You need to add the speed

That and i think you are good to go ^^

5Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 23/12/15, 09:45 pm

Kaveh Issa

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Done

6Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 23/12/15, 11:00 pm

Noir Ecryola

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Pre-approved ^^

7Next Phase Empty Re: Next Phase 24/12/15, 10:33 am

Ariella Negri

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approved for training~

made a minor edit to the magic type of the last one to include the combination magic type~

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[b][u]Solid Flame [Heat + Strength]; Restricted (Founder: Kaveh Issa)[/u][/b]
[i]By combining flames and giving them a physical form through strength magic, the user creates constructs that emit intense flames.[/i]

[b]Name:[/b] Repel
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Strength - Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh creates an intense gravitational pull behind his target, that pulls them up to 10 meters away from Kaveh’s position, giving the appearance of them being repelled from him, at 20 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Pull
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Strength - Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] By honing in on his gravitational pull on a certain object or person, Kaveh can pull his target 10 meters closer to him at 20 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Soldier of Flames
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Solid Flame [Heat + Strength]
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] By using his strength magic to give shape and form to an incredible mass of flame. The resulting warrior stands at 180 cm in height and is equipped with a sword and shield. This soldier acts as a puppet for Kaveh in certain battles and situations. The soldier is formed and moves at a constant 15 m/s.

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