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1EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty EL Drago Gets some new moves on 18/05/15, 04:58 am

Lagi

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Name: Zappa Beam
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15 Magoi
Beast Type:Legend
Class: Offensive
Range: 30
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description:  El Drago fires off a blast of lightning magic from any point of his body in the form of a cone that's 15 meters in diameter at 15 m/s. The lightning travels as far as 30 meters dealing B-Tier internal/external lightning damage. By sustaining this ability, El Drago can fire another one.


Name: Shocking String
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15 Magoi
Beast Type:Legend
Class: Offensive
Range: 30
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description:  El Drago can conjure a string of lighting that can be in the dimensions between 10-15 meters in length and  3 meters in width  at 20 m/s in either of his hands, maintain it's string like function to be used as a whip.  The string does B rank lightning damage and when sustained, el drago can either maintain the current form of the string, change the form, or conjure it in another hand. The lightning whip is held by a connection of lightning particles which are generated slightly above the scales of his hands, which is why el drago doesn't take damage from it because he isnt essentially holding it.

Name: Dragonic Arts-Flurry
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15 Magoi
Beast Type:Brute
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description:  El Drago throws out four punches at 20 /s that deal D rank damage each. The range of each punch is 10 meters and can either throw the jabs one at a time or double fisting for each fist to do c rank damage. This move is an opener and can mixed in with basic attacks.

Name: Lock Out
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15 Magoi
Beast Type:Legend
Class: Supplementary
Range: 30
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description:   El Drago sends out a electric pulse  in the form of a cube in the size of 15 meters at 20 m/s,  travelling as far as 30 meters. The electrical current actually attacks the neural impulses of the affected, sending false electrical signals to their nervous systems and causes disorientation for the next three posts. Post count resets if hit again.



Last edited by King Lagi on 20/05/15, 11:13 pm; edited 3 times in total


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2EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 18/05/15, 03:26 pm

Azix Niraj

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First, you are using the wrong ability template for Domination. The correct one can be found here.

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For Shocking String, you say the ability is shaped like a string, but the dimensions you gave are for a square.

For Dragonic Arts-Flurry, the range would be close since El Drago doesn't have body manipulation to extend his limbs. Unless his body is a twig and he has ten meter long arms and hands combined.

I'm checking with the rest of staff for Fake Out. An ability like that hasn't been attempted before, so I'll update the thread when I hear back.


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3EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 19/05/15, 02:37 am

Lagi

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edits have been made, whats the verdict on fake out


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4EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 19/05/15, 09:11 am

Ariella Negri

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Dragonic Arts-Fake Out: As none of his passive traits indicate his scales could produce a sound capable of anything like this, he would require sound magic to do this. Also, you cannot write into an ability that it "interrupts any pending abilities". This would go off of clashing rules, not the spell itself.


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5EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 20/05/15, 05:10 pm

Lagi

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edited :D


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6EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 20/05/15, 06:31 pm

Merrze

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Okay everything seems to be in order unless I missed something, Pre-Approved. Please wait for approval from a staff member. ^-^


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7EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 20/05/15, 09:08 pm

Vardreth

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Lightning String:
1 issue with this is that you are giving the lighting solid form, which isn't possible with lightning magic by itself (Lightning + Strength could do it). I don't know if you intended on using it as an actual sword, either, but I feel it's necessary to mention that if you grab onto it you would normally take damage from it as well.

So you'll essentially need to remove the 'solid' part of the ability.


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8EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 20/05/15, 11:14 pm

Lagi

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edited


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9EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 21/05/15, 12:01 am

Vardreth

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Lol. Approved for training:

P.S. I forgot to mention that your physical attacks, the punches, cannot travel 10 meters because El Drago doesn't have detaching rocket arms lol. I fixed that in the abilities below.


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[b]Name:[/b] Zappa Beam
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] El Drago fires off a blast of lightning magic from any point of his body in the form of a cone that's 15 meters in diameter at 15 m/s. The lightning travels as far as 30 meters dealing B-Tier internal/external lightning damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Shocking String
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] El Drago can conjure a string of lighting that can be in the dimensions between 10-15 meters in length and 3 meters in width at 20 m/s, which hovers over either of his hands and uses it like a whip for B-Tier lightning damage. When sustained, El Drago can either maintain the current form of the string, change the form, or conjure it in another hand.

[b]Name:[/b] Dragonic Arts-Flurry
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  El Drago throws out four punches at 20 /s that deal D rank damage each. This move is an opener and can mixed in with basic attacks.

[b]Name:[/b] Lock Out
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 30
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  El Drago sends out a electric pulse in the form of a cube in the size of 15 meters at 20 m/s, traveling as far as 30 meters. The electrical current actually attacks the neural impulses of the affected, sending false electrical signals to their nervous systems and causes disorientation for the next three posts. Post count resets if hit again.


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10EL Drago Gets some new moves Empty Re: EL Drago Gets some new moves on 21/05/15, 07:50 am

Azix Niraj

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Training(Purchased): https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t4464-el-drago-gets-some-new-moves#23089

Approved~ Add to vault:

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[b]Name:[/b] Zappa Beam
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] El Drago fires off a blast of lightning magic from any point of his body in the form of a cone that's 15 meters in diameter at 15 m/s. The lightning travels as far as 30 meters dealing B-Tier internal/external lightning damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Shocking String
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] El Drago can conjure a string of lighting that can be in the dimensions between 10-15 meters in length and 3 meters in width at 20 m/s, which hovers over either of his hands and uses it like a whip for B-Tier lightning damage. When sustained, El Drago can either maintain the current form of the string, change the form, or conjure it in another hand.

[b]Name:[/b] Dragonic Arts-Flurry
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  El Drago throws out four punches at 20 /s that deal D rank damage each. This move is an opener and can mixed in with basic attacks.

[b]Name:[/b] Lock Out
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 Magoi
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Legend
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 30
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  El Drago sends out a electric pulse in the form of a cube in the size of 15 meters at 20 m/s, traveling as far as 30 meters. The electrical current actually attacks the neural impulses of the affected, sending false electrical signals to their nervous systems and causes disorientation for the next three posts. Post count resets if hit again.


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