Next Set Of BM moves.

Tier: C-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must open his glands along his arms, and shoulders as well as underneath his armpit.
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier)
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 stamina ; 10 sustain
Description:

• Taavetti, manipulating his open glands would release an medium size of sweat. Underneath him would become an puddle, and using said puddle to spin himself. Creating an decent height size of 5m whirlpool of sweat spreading away from his body 5 meters with him as the center. Anything around would receive C-tier damage, and a small push back of 3 meters.
  

Sweat-Nami: It kinda confuses me why you have the first part in the description, unless it was a technique based off splitting or a variation based off being used in combo with another move there should only be one description for the ability.

Sweat slicer: Is it 3m in length, make sure to specify, also if so thats alot of sweat and make sure to include when you're using body manip to produce more of something like sweat or tears.

Hellish Leg: An issue with this ability is that it's a cross class ability, you need to include that it uses both of your classes in the description. The light would not be able to leave images or nightmarish images of your past. If you wanted a supplementary aspect you would need to mention that in the ability type, and if then light magic is about creating illusions, or just using light, but the illusions are images, not projections from one's memories, fears or past. That would be along the lines of nightmare magic or clairvoyance.

Blood Curdle:
Be aware that this is damaging you, you tearing apart your own flesh, you would do atleast C-tier damage, but honestly, the damage is more comparable to B-tier or A-tier even.

Jagged Bone: Keep in mind that this is still damaging you, you can harden parts of your skin if you want a defensive or hardened part, but the things inside your body like bones and blood will be damage if you cut parts open and shift them outside of your body.

Winged Missle: You can't have 6 feather missles if you want them to each do B-tier damage, it has to be split amongst parts. Secondly, if you wanna use light magic in this you would have to make it a cross class abiltiy utilizing light magic, which you would then have to include in the description and the classes for the ability. B-tier speeds aren't really a thing so including that in your ability isn't going to change anything. Also that scaling doesn't make any sense, that would make it a whole new ability, you can only scale things already in the ability.

Edit.

Winged Missle: Having six feathers splits this ability into parts, the part limit for B-tier abilities is 4, plus the feathers have to equal up to the ability in the amount of damage and 6 D-tier feathers would do more than B-tier damage.

Edited

All approved for training!

Voucher approved, add to vault :)

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[center][b]Sweat-Nami[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must open his glands along his arms, and shoulders as well as underneath his armpit.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina ; 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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[*]Taavetti, manipulating his open glands would release an medium size of sweat. Underneath him would become an puddle, and using said puddle to spin himself. Creating an decent height size of 5m whirlpool of sweat spreading away from his body 5 meters with him as the center. Anything around would receive C-tier damage, and a small push back of 3 meters.
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[center][b]Sweat Slicers[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must open his sweat glands by rotating his arms clockwise.
[b]Scaling[/b]: Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 10 sustain
Description:
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Manipulating the sweat pouring out of his arms. He creates slicers on both his elbows 3m in length, and throws them 5m forward off his arm in a fluid motion. Each slicer deals D-tier cutting damage.[/list]


[b]Hellish Leg[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulation + Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must be in possession of his wand, and must have stretched.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Imaginary Hits: For every number of hits, or projectiles that double, and land it will also leave imprints of images for every 10 stamina/5 magoi invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 5 magoi | 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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 Pre-stretching beforehand, and concentrating light magic upon his legs giving them a fire affinity. Being able to send stretched out kicks off the ground, or in the air from 5-8 meters, the user would deal C-tier damage, with D-tier burns from concentrated light. Using Scaling, the light effect would leave the person hit by the legs in a illusion of random images in them for 1 post.[/list]

[b]Inverse Style: Blood Cruddle[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulation
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must tear his skin starting from his middle finger down half his forearm.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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 The user would cut a line down his forearm, ripping the surface for 'd-tier' damage to himself. Ripping the skin would allow the user push blood out from the open wound. As blood covered his hands, and arm, he would crystallize both arms into jagged blades of blood, allowing him to deal ‘c-tier’ damage for 2 post . Unless scaled or broken by higher tier strength.[/list]

[b]Inverse Style: Jagged Bone[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must tear his skin starting from his middle finger down half his forearm.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Defense: The tier of damage blocked/parried will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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  The user would cut a line down his forearm, ripping it for 'd-tier' damage to himself. Ripping through the skin, he would reveal a layer of harden skin that is soaked in  hard blood and some bone, acting as bracers allowing him to guard in multiple ways against ‘c-tier’ damage or lower. The braces last 2 post, before revert into the ripped skin. [/list]


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[b][u]1/5 B-tier [/u][/b]

[b]Winged Missile[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator + Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must reveal, and grow his wings to their full form.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Imaginary Hits: For every number of hits, or projectiles that double, and land it will also leave imprints of images for every 10 stamina/5 magoi invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina |5 magoi |15 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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 The user reveals his six large wings, and expand them out casting a shadow of blinding light. As the wings extend, the user would flex allowing the light to gloss over the wings, than shooting four individual feathers (12in - 30.48cm) out, from a range of 15 meters away. The user can direct them towards desired target each feather dealing D-tier damage alone. A trail of light magic trails behind each one that only magicians may see, anyone caught in the trail would receive D-tier burns for whatever part of body, hair, etc touches them. [/list]
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