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1Fluffy's Abilities Empty Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 12:43 pm

Merrze

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Name: Elastic Tongue
Tier: C
Cost: 15 (Half-Cost ability)/15
Role:Assassin
Range: 15m
Duration: sustain
Cool-Down: 3 posts +1 sustained
Description: Fluffy shoots his tongue out to 5 meters at 20m/s doing C-tier damage, this can be sustained.

Name: Roaring Inferno
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Role: Assassin
Range: 20m
Duration: sustain
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Fluffy shoots a ball of fire 7m in diameter at 25m/s a second dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.

Name: Scorching Chomp
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Role: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: sustain
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Fluffy fills his mouth with fire then bites his opponent at 20m/s dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.



Last edited by Merrze on 23/02/15, 01:12 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 12:45 pm

Ariella Negri

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You only get 1 Half-cost C-tier ability

3Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 12:45 pm

Merrze

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one sec I'll edit that

4Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 12:49 pm

Merrze

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fixed

5Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 12:55 pm

Ariella Negri

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Elastic Tongue: The cool-down would be 3 posts or sustain+1, need to include how far his tongue can stretch, based off scale. In this case, 5 meters.

Roaring Inferno: CD would just be 5 posts. For the description, it would be "Dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns." Include the range in the description.

Scorching Chomp: CD would just be 5 posts. For the description, it would be "Dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns."

6Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 01:08 pm

Ariella Negri

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you forgot to change the second one to b-tier burn damage and you did not add scale into the first one, changed it below, along with other minor formatting edit. Please make sure to read all suggested edits. If these are acceptable, please paste these edits in and bump so Azix can confirm everything.

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[b]Name:[/b] Elastic Tongue
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 15 (Half-Cost ability)/15
[b]Role:[/b]Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 15m
[b]Duration:[/b] sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts +1 sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots his tongue out to 5 meters at 20m/s doing C-tier damage, this can be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Roaring Inferno
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Role:[/b] Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots a ball of fire 7m in diameter at 25m/s a second dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Scorching Chomp
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Role:[/b] Brute
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]  5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy fills his mouth with fire then bites his opponent at 20m/s dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.

7Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 01:13 pm

Merrze

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Bump and added in

8Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 01:14 pm

Ariella Negri

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~approved for training

9Fluffy's Abilities Empty Re: Fluffy's Abilities 23/02/15, 01:29 pm

Azix Niraj

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