Ku's abilitys

Name: Multi-Purpose Vines
Tier: D
Cost: 10|5
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain +1
Description: Ku summons 1 - 5 roots out of the ground at 10m/s that are 5 meters long. The vines then grab a target and slam them HARD on the ground to inflict D-tier damage. This ability may be sustained.


Name: Healing
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meter
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Ku summons a 2 meter healing orb that travels at 10 m/s to a target within 10 meters of herself. This orb heals D-tier damage over two posts.

Name: Spriggan
Tier: D
Cost: 10|5
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters.
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 or sustain+1
Description: Ku summons two 1.20 meter tall Spriggans within ten meters of herself. These form at 10m/s and can be directed freely by Ku to move at 5 m/s to anywhere within 10 meters of herself. The Spriggans have claws to attack an opponent, inflicting D-tier damage. This ability may be sustained.

Name: Gravity Lift, Stage 1
Tier: C
Cost: 20 on cast; 10 sustain
Element: Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or Sustain+1
Description: A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control THE FORCE of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

Name: Plant manipulation
Tier: D
Cost: 10|5
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain +1
Description: Ku can use this powers to control 5 plants around her, causing them to grow at 10 m/s up to 5 meters large. The plants whip around at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier damage to opponents. This ability may be sustained.

Are you finished with your abilities? I see 1 is missing.

Once you are finished, bump this thread and I will grade them.

Yes tha ti true Garret i heard defensicve spells are only possible for strength so i had to take away a few spells but just thougth of something else.

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Just a couple of things, then. Spells don't have 'face claims', though you are welcome to post the image in your posts when you use them if you would like to so that people can visually see what you want it to look like.

Range: This is how far an ability can move before it loses functionality. This should only have a number and the word 'centimeter' or the word 'meter' after it. There should only be 1 such number here.

Multipurpose vines:
This is offensive and supplementary, because it can attack and it can be used for other things. D-Tiers cannot be offensive/supplementary. You may have it attack, or you may have it grab people and the like. Keep in mind that you would only be able to immobilize 1 limb with this spell per person it grapples. You must list a number of how many roots she creates with her spell, as it cannot be 'a couple'. For D-Tier you can have a range between 1 and 5 roots maximum.


Healing:
You need to say how fast the bubble moves, and what size the bubble is.


Spriggan:
An ability may have only 1 means of dealing damage. You must choose whether it is from clawing something, or from shooting out a green ball of energy. The maximum range it would reach cannot extend beyond the range from you (ex.: your Spriggan is 10 meters away. It cannot shoot an ability further out than it, as the energy would dissipate). This also needs to have a speed added into the description.


Plant manipulation:
Same thing as the Multipurpose vine ^_^. This one needs to have a speed added into the description.


Feel free to post any questions if you're confused at all.

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the vines had a speed of 10 m/s and well theni iwill jsut use them offensive and when i upgrade them into C i also make them supp is that alright maby?

Multi purpose vines: Element would simply be “Life” you do not need to include the plant part. Range would simply be 10 meters. The length of the vines would be listed under description. For the description, remove the “can use them as she pleases.” This is an offensive spell, meaning they can ONLY deal damage at this tier. Any later plans for them should not be included here. They would not be able to parry attacks, she can only use them to attack. You would need to specify HOW they attack to deal damage. Do they whip at opponents, slashing them? Do they slam them into the ground hard enough to cause damage? You can only pick one.


Healing: For range, I would suggest allowing it the maximum range of 10 meters, rather than limiting it to only people within 1 meter of yourself, but this is totally up to you. You need to give a size of the bubble, it cannot say “as big as the target.” You also need to include how long it takes to heal the total damage. In this case, it is over 2 posts. Consider wording the description as follows:

Ku summons a 1 meter healing orb that travels at 10 m/s to a target within 10 meters of herself. This orb heals D-tier damage over two posts.

Spriggan: Element would simply be life, no need to include Plant. No need to include a “face claim” for the creature, this is something you would include in your RP post, not in the ability. You need to include the size of the Spriggan (up to 5 meters). You are nerfing their movement speed, I would suggest against this. Consider rewording the description as follows:

Ku summons two 1 meter tall Spriggans within ten meters of herself. These form at 10m/s and can be directed freely by Ku to move at 10 m/s to anywhere within 10 meters of herself. The Spriggans have claws to attack an opponent, inflicting D-tier damage.

Plant manipulation: ] Element would simply be life, no need to include Plant. This must be made more specific to say it attacks, as it is an offensive spell. If you are changing the size of anything, you need to specify how much you are altering it. You need to specify how many plants you can control. You need to state what type of attack you can have them use. Again, any future plans for the ability should not be listed here.

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are the re more things i have to change ? ^_^
ty for all the help btw :D

You still had a lot of fluff in the abilities, I have rewritten them and included them below. If these are acceptable, please paste these into your original post and bump the thread.

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[b]Name:[/b] Multi-Purpose Vines
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10|5
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]  10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Ku summons 1 - 5 roots out of the ground at 10m/s that are 5 meters long. The vines then grab a target and slam them hard on the ground to inflict D-tier damage. This ability may be sustained.


[b]Name:[/b] Healing
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b]  10 meter
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ku summons a 2 meter healing orb that travels at 10 m/s to a target within 10 meters of herself. This orb heals D-tier damage over two posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Spriggan
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10|5
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]  10 meters.
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ku summons two 1.20 meter tall Spriggans within ten meters of herself. These form at 10m/s and can be directed freely by Ku to move at 10 m/s to anywhere within 10 meters of herself. The Spriggans have claws to attack an opponent, inflicting D-tier damage. This ability may be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control THE FORCE of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

[b]Name:[/b] Plant manipulation
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10|5
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Ku can use this powers to control 5 plants around her, causing them to grow at 10 m/s up to 5 meters large. The plants whip around at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier damage to opponents. This ability may be sustained.

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