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1Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Adam Doron(Done!) on 01/01/15, 06:14 pm

Killua

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Adam Doron(Done!) Kotaro

Name: Adam Doron

Country Affiliation: Magnostadt

Race: Human

Tier: D-Tier [Novice]

Specialization: Intelligence

Magic Type: 1st Type: Heat/Fire

Age + Birthdate: 11, March 19

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Developing

Personality: Normally Adam is a happy, playful, and friendly kid. He becomes trusting and a bit open to those he likes and who have earn his trust. His trust is not something he gives easily, it takes time. As a child Adam has a mischievous/curious side which can get a little inappropriate. Adam sometimes enjoys the freedom and comfort of naturism.

If he encounters new people he usually observes them  for a while, deciding whether they are friendly or not. He will carry on normally while the observation phase is ongoing. If the newcomer can earn Adam's trust they will be moved into Adam's friends list. If the person is deemed an enemy Adam will go on the defensive and try to get away.

When surrounded by friends Adam is more open and is more playful and understanding. He loves to play chess, tag, and a number of other games. He also loves to train with friends. Another activity Adam loves more than playing is reading and learning. If there is a book or just about anything he hasn't he will try to get his hand on it. Magic is by far the most interesting thing to Adam. He will try learning everything about magic he can.  

If Adam runs into a known enemy depending on who it is Adam might attack or run. If the enemy is too powerful Adam will try to stun his opponent and hide his retreat. If the enemy is ether as strong or just a little stronger than Adam is, he will fight if forced to.

Likes:

Exploring: Adam loves to explore new places. He loves to learn about his environment.

Training: Adam loves to train. Training improves everything about him, he also love the feeling of getting stronger and better.

Sleep: Adam likes to sleep a lot. Sleep is so comforting and relaxing for him. Sleep is also a great way to use a lot of time in what feels like only a short amount.  

Dislikes:

Disrespectful people: Adam highly dislikes people who disrespects others.

Unnecessary conflict: Adam doesn't like fighting much less when there is no need for it.  

Slavery: Adam believes that all people should be free, except criminals.

Aspirations:

Becoming a powerful magician: Adam desperately wants to become a master of magic. This desire was formed by events in his past. Adam feels the need to become stronger so he can beat the man who killed his father.

Revenge: Adam trains himself very hard for the day when he can avenge his father and get revenge on the man who violated him. He eats, dreams, and lives for that fateful day.

Knowledge: Adam seeks knowledge. He wants to know as much as possible about everything, especially magic. Knowledge is power to many,  and Adam desires to join those who have vast knowledge. Adam became enthralled with knowledge after he watched a man use only words to turn a group of rouge magicians into long standing friends. The rouges came to Adam's town with the intent of destroying in.

Phobias/fears

Failing to get Revenge:  Adam highly fear that he won't be strong enough to get revenge. He sometimes as mini panic attacks whenever this fear crosses his mind. Adam's fear of this came from the memories of the strength of the man as Adam watched the brute kill his family.

Spiders: Adam is has a deep fear, close to a phobia of spiders. Small ones he will kill very quickly. When he encounters larger spiders he freaks out heavily. Spider have cheeped Adam out for as long as he could remember. They are creatures who can craw up walls, jump at you, and can kill you with a bite.

Becoming a Slave: Adam began fearing become a slave when he saw how they were treated. This is also why he hates slavery. When this fear comes to mind or when a slave walks past him, he begins to shake in fear. The fear shortly changes into anger. Most of the time Adam can control himself, other times he attacks the slave master.  


Face-Claim: Kotaro Mochizuki - Black Blood Brothers


Hair Color: Dark brown

Eye Color: Ocean blue

Eyes: Cross shaped pupils

Height: 143.51cm (4.70ft)

Weight: 36.61kg (80.71lbs)

Appearance: Adam is a young Caucasian(?) boy who can be seen wearing the normal Magnostadt academy uniform everywhere. When alone or with those don't care, Adam relaxes in the comfort of Naturism. Adam views the world through ocean blue eyes. His abnormally shaped pupils draw a lot of attention. His dark brown hair had sometime obscured his vision, before he had it cut. Adam stands right at the height of many other kids his age, at 143.51 centimeters. Though he is the same height as the kids around him, he weights a bit more than normal. The extra weight can be attributed to his body training.

Rukh Alignment: White

Special Traits: N/A

History:

Adam was born into the high-middle class Doron family. He was the youngest of three children. Adam had one older brother and one older sister. About one years after his birth, Adam got very sick. Because the disease attacked his eyes, he was completely blind. Over the next few months, many medical magician tried to heal the boy. Nothing at all, not even magic could cure Adam. After being blind and deathly sick for several months, Adam's body began to change. The virus attached itself to an already mutating gene, causing a larger mutation. The mutation grew until both of Adam's eyes had changed forever. A few days after the disease subsided, Adam opened his eyes. Adam's parents noticed that their boy's eyes were no longer normal. The boy's pupils had become cross shaped.

Age Eight

"Flame Shot!" Adam called out. A flame grew around his new staff, then it flew off of his staff. The egg shaped fireball flew through the air a few feet than exploded. His father had taught him this spell. He practices it everyday to master it. Adam always trained in his favorite spot in a nearby forest. Adam had been there for a few hours, practicing with his new spell and staff. His father made the staff for his son's eighth birthday. As the explosion dissipated, Adam saw the Rukh return to their white bird-like forms. When the boy looked up at the sky he saw the sun had gone down a lot. Seeing the night coming, Adam decided to head home. As he walked through the forest he looked at the trees to their Rukh flowing through them. About two thirds of the way back home,  Adam began see more and more dark Rukh.

As he stepped back into his town, black Rukh were flying towards his house. As he felt the evil emanating from these dark birds, he started to run. When he got to his house, he saw the door had been broken in. Adam ran inside to hear screams from his older sister. Adam want through the house and finally finding everyone. He dad lay bloody in a corner, dead. His mother lay unconscious on the floor, naked and bruised. His eldest sibling was not in the room, he was elsewhere. Then he barely spotted his sister, underneath a man. Adam lunched at the man atop his sister. He managed to hit the man's head. He man was stunned for a moment. The man spun around and hit Adam hard.  The boy's breathe was taken away by the pain, soon after which he passed out.

When Adam awoke, he found himself in the same state as his mother. He couldn't remember anything past the point of passing out. An hour later he stumbled up onto his feet. The moment he stud, his entire body shook in tremendous pain. Adam fell to the ground once more. He decided to stay there. About ten minutes after he fell, he older brother came running into the room. Adam's brother looked around the room for a few seconds. As soon as Adam's brother spotted Adam, the older boy ran to him. After embracing lightly for a few seconds the man came back. The eldest child launched the man hitting him with his whole body. As the man fell, Adam was picked up and carried away.

         
A New Home

Adam and his brother had walked through a forest for weeks. The found a way out as well as a large wall. Adam saw a line of people waiting in front of two men. One man held a book, the other held a huge hammer. Adam watched as the huge hammer came down a young teen, but instead of being squished the teen was suddenly protected by an ball of energy. Adam watched as the ball was formed by the teen's Rukh. Seeing nowhere else to go Adam's brother pushed him into the line. The line shrunk quickly. Adam was all of a sudden in front of the line. He looked up with tears at the man with the book. As soon as the man saw Adam's eyes he gasped but then calmed down. Then the hammer flew down.

Not wanting to die and remembering the ball of energy, Adam focused on that ball. He closed his eyes waiting for the hammer, it never came. A thud and spark sound brought Adam back. He looked around to see the ball of energy had protected him. When he didn't more one of the men gently pushed him beyond the wall.

Adam tried to get free and go back to his brother, but he couldn't. When the man went back, Adam ran back to his only family. He smacked against an invisible wall. When he looked at the "open" gateway he saw a wall of Rukh preventing him from leaving. When he turned away in defeat Adam saw the teen use a magic spell in front of a woman. After the spell faded the woman called out something Adam didn't understand. It sounded like, " 2nd Kodor," or something like that. When Adam approached she looked at him. She instantly knew that Adam would need more information about this place.      

The woman explained what Kodors were and what kind of place Magnostadt was. Adam was thrilled and preformed his "Fire Shot" magic spell. The woman told him that he was a 3rd Kodor. Adam tried again but same result. He walked over to a group who were standing in front of huge entrance. All of a sudden the group was enveloped in a green bobble and began moving into the huge tunnel. Adam's new life was about to begin.


Role-Play Sample:

After becoming a student at the Magnostadt academy, Adam often goes to the forest he and his brother hiked through to find a new home. A week ago Adam went out again to look for his lost brother. He still did not want to believe that his brother was dead. As Adam walked through the forest, he started going further and further into the dark wooded space. Suddenly He heard a deep growl. Adam spun around to see a large bear growling at him. He froze in fear, his eyes widen and his breathe shallow. The bear pawed towards the new Adam "statue". Out of the corner of his eye, Adam saw a young bear cub peer out from behind its mother.

Adam looked back at the mother bear to see that she had stepped back a little, moving in front of her cub again. Adam then realized that he had entered the bear's territory, and that she had a cub with her. She's only defending herself and her cub. As Adam thought this he started to calm down. When he had completely calmed down, Adam began change the feel of his presence through his Rukh. His Rukh slowly changed from the frantic, scared state to a state where they gave off a kind and friendly presence. A few moments later the mother bear stopped growling and slowly approached Adam. The large bear sniffed the boy. As the bear breathed in his scent, Adam didn't move at all. After a minute the bear turned around and left. Adam then returned to his academy dorm.



Last edited by Killua on 10/03/15, 04:04 pm; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Adding the finished product!)

2Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 09/03/15, 09:36 pm

Killua

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It's done and ready for review! Is there anything I need to change or add?

3Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 11:13 am

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Looks pretty good, but you will probably have to register abilities to 'see with the rukh' even though you're blind. I'm waiting on follow-up from the rest of the staff to reach a consensus.

Some players have Sensory Network abilities, which allows them to see and sense the approach of others around them. It wouldn't be very fair to them if other characters could get it without having to use an ability.

Mind you, there are Social Abilities that don't take up stamina/magoi which you could use for the most part, and then normal abilities while in combat.

Still waiting for the others to decide on that, first, though. You may choose to edit away the special trait in order to skip this deliberation, as everything else looked good to me.


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4Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 11:35 am

Killua

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Well, Adam was only blind until the virus subsided. Are social abilities like passive abilities? I was going to make Adam's ability to see the Rukh a passive ability. Should I begin to make his abilities now or wait?

5Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 01:21 pm

Ariella Negri

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if he is no longer blind, then seeing the rukh would not be a special trait, as ALL magicians can see the rukh.


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6Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 01:41 pm

Killua

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That's true. I edited it where it said that his seeing the Rukh was special. Anything else?

7Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 03:25 pm

Ariella Negri

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everything else looks good, i think, but i do want to point out where you say:
to see a mixture of red(angry) and blue(defensive) Rukh

This is not technically correct. The rukh do not behave like an aura, the color of the rukh is determined by the magic type being utilized. Red rukh is a sign of heat magic, blue rukh is a sign of water magic.

Oh, could you actually include an image of your character, please?


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8Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 04:03 pm

Killua

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Fixed!

9Adam Doron(Done!) Empty Re: Adam Doron(Done!) on 10/03/15, 06:26 pm

Ariella Negri

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application approved, please do the following:
Create a vault: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f10-vault
Create a starter staff/wand: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f86-staff-creation
Create your starter abilities: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f8-abilities

Coding for your character sheet for your vault is below:
Code:
[img]http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc94/VampiressEclipse/Black%20Blood%20Brothers/Kotaro.jpg[/img]
Name: Adam Doron
Country Affiliation: Magnostadt
Race: Human
Tier: D-Tier [Novice]
Specialization: Intelligence
Magic Type: 1st Type: Heat/Fire
Age + Birthdate: 11, March 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Developing
Personality: Normally Adam is a happy, playful, and friendly kid. He becomes trusting and a bit open to those he likes and who have earn his trust. His trust is not something he gives easily, it takes time. As a child Adam has a mischievous/curious side which can get a little inappropriate. Adam sometimes enjoys the freedom and comfort of naturism.

If he encounters new people he usually observes them  for a while, deciding whether they are friendly or not. He will carry on normally while the observation phase is ongoing. If the newcomer can earn Adam's trust they will be moved into Adam's friends list. If the person is deemed an enemy Adam will go on the defensive and try to get away.

When surrounded by friends Adam is more open and is more playful and understanding. He loves to play chess, tag, and a number of other games. He also loves to train with friends. Another activity Adam loves more than playing is reading and learning. If there is a book or just about anything he hasn't he will try to get his hand on it. Magic is by far the most interesting thing to Adam. He will try learning everything about magic he can.  

If Adam runs into a known enemy depending on who it is Adam might attack or run. If the enemy is too powerful Adam will try to stun his opponent and hide his retreat. If the enemy is ether as strong or just a little stronger than Adam is, he will fight if forced to.

Likes:

Exploring: Adam loves to explore new places. He loves to learn about his environment.

Training: Adam loves to train. Training improves everything about him, he also love the feeling of getting stronger and better.

Sleep: Adam likes to sleep a lot. Sleep is so comforting and relaxing for him. Sleep is also a great way to use a lot of time in what feels like only a short amount.  

Dislikes:

Disrespectful people: Adam highly dislikes people who disrespects others.

Unnecessary conflict: Adam doesn't like fighting much less when there is no need for it.  

Slavery: Adam believes that all people should be free, except criminals.

Aspirations:

Becoming a powerful magician: Adam desperately wants to become a master of magic. This desire was formed by events in his past. Adam feels the need to become stronger so he can beat the man who killed his father.

Revenge: Adam trains himself very hard for the day when he can avenge his father and get revenge on the man who violated him. He eats, dreams, and lives for that fateful day.

Knowledge: Adam seeks knowledge. He wants to know as much as possible about everything, especially magic. Knowledge is power to many,  and Adam desires to join those who have vast knowledge. Adam became enthralled with knowledge after he watched a man use only words to turn a group of rouge magicians into long standing friends. The rouges came to Adam's town with the intent of destroying in.

Phobias/fears

Failing to get Revenge:  Adam highly fear that he won't be strong enough to get revenge. He sometimes as mini panic attacks whenever this fear crosses his mind. Adam's fear of this came from the memories of the strength of the man as Adam watched the brute kill his family.

Spiders: Adam is has a deep fear, close to a phobia of spiders. Small ones he will kill very quickly. When he encounters larger spiders he freaks out heavily. Spider have cheeped Adam out for as long as he could remember. They are creatures who can craw up walls, jump at you, and can kill you with a bite.

Becoming a Slave: Adam began fearing become a slave when he saw how they were treated. This is also why he hates slavery. When this fear comes to mind or when a slave walks past him, he begins to shake in fear. The fear shortly changes into anger. Most of the time Adam can control himself, other times he attacks the slave master.  


Face-Claim: Kotaro Mochizuki - Black Blood Brothers
Hair Color: Dark brown
Eye Color: Ocean blue
Height: 143.51cm (4.70ft)
Weight: 36.61kg (80.71lbs)
Appearance: Adam is a young Caucasian(?) boy who can be seen wearing the normal Magnostadt academy uniform everywhere. When alone or with those don't care, Adam relaxes in the comfort of Naturism. Adam views the world through ocean blue eyes. His abnormally shaped pupils draw a lot of attention. His dark brown hair had sometime obscured his vision, before he had it cut. Adam stands right at the height of many other kids his age, at 143.51 centimeters. Though he is the same height as the kids around him, he weights a bit more than normal. The extra weight can be attributed to his body training.

Rukh Alignment: White

Special Traits: N/A

History:

Adam was born into the high-middle class Doron family. He was the youngest of three children. Adam had one older brother and one older sister. About one years after his birth, Adam got very sick. Because the disease attacked his eyes, he was completely blind. Over the next few months, many medical magician tried to heal the boy. Nothing at all, not even magic could cure Adam. After being blind and deathly sick for several months, Adam's body began to change. The virus attached itself to an already mutating gene, causing a larger mutation. The mutation grew until both of Adam's eyes had changed forever. A few days after the disease subsided, Adam opened his eyes. Adam's parents noticed that their boy's eyes were no longer normal. The boy's pupils had become cross shaped.

[center]Age Eight[/center]

"Flame Shot!" Adam called out. A flame grew around his new staff, then it flew off of his staff. The egg shaped fireball flew through the air a few feet than exploded. His father had taught him this spell. He practices it everyday to master it. Adam always trained in his favorite spot in a nearby forest. Adam had been there for a few hours, practicing with his new spell and staff. His father made the staff for his son's eighth birthday. As the explosion dissipated, Adam saw the Rukh return to their white bird-like forms. When the boy looked up at the sky he saw the sun had gone down a lot. Seeing the night coming, Adam decided to head home. As he walked through the forest he looked at the trees to their Rukh flowing through them. About two thirds of the way back home,  Adam began see more and more dark Rukh.

As he stepped back into his town, black Rukh were flying towards his house. As he felt the evil emanating from these dark birds, he started to run. When he got to his house, he saw the door had been broken in. Adam ran inside to hear screams from his older sister. Adam want through the house and finally finding everyone. He dad lay bloody in a corner, dead. His mother lay unconscious on the floor, naked and bruised. His eldest sibling was not in the room, he was elsewhere. Then he barely spotted his sister, underneath a man. Adam lunched at the man atop his sister. He managed to hit the man's head. He man was stunned for a moment. The man spun around and hit Adam hard.  The boy's breathe was taken away by the pain, soon after which he passed out.

When Adam awoke, he found himself in the same state as his mother. He couldn't remember anything past the point of passing out. An hour later he stumbled up onto his feet. The moment he stud, his entire body shook in tremendous pain. Adam fell to the ground once more. He decided to stay there. About ten minutes after he fell, he older brother came running into the room. Adam's brother looked around the room for a few seconds. As soon as Adam's brother spotted Adam, the older boy ran to him. After embracing lightly for a few seconds the man came back. The eldest child launched the man hitting him with his whole body. As the man fell, Adam was picked up and carried away.

         
[center]A New Home[/center]

Adam and his brother had walked through a forest for weeks. The found a way out as well as a large wall. Adam saw a line of people waiting in front of two men. One man held a book, the other held a huge hammer. Adam watched as the huge hammer came down a young teen, but instead of being squished the teen was suddenly protected by an ball of energy. Adam watched as the ball was formed by the teen's Rukh. Seeing nowhere else to go Adam's brother pushed him into the line. The line shrunk quickly. Adam was all of a sudden in front of the line. He looked up with tears at the man with the book. As soon as the man saw Adam's eyes he gasped but then calmed down. Then the hammer flew down.

Not wanting to die and remembering the ball of energy, Adam focused on that ball. He closed his eyes waiting for the hammer, it never came. A thud and spark sound brought Adam back. He looked around to see the ball of energy had protected him. When he didn't more one of the men gently pushed him beyond the wall.

Adam tried to get free and go back to his brother, but he couldn't. When the man went back, Adam ran back to his only family. He smacked against an invisible wall. When he looked at the "open" gateway he saw a wall of Rukh preventing him from leaving. When he turned away in defeat Adam saw the teen use a magic spell in front of a woman. After the spell faded the woman called out something Adam didn't understand. It sounded like, " 2nd Kodor," or something like that. When Adam approached she looked at him. She instantly knew that Adam would need more information about this place.      

The woman explained what Kodors were and what kind of place Magnostadt was. Adam was thrilled and preformed his "Fire Shot" magic spell. The woman told him that he was a 3rd Kodor. Adam tried again but same result. He walked over to a group who were standing in front of huge entrance. All of a sudden the group was enveloped in a green bobble and began moving into the huge tunnel. Adam's new life was about to begin.


Role-Play Sample:

After becoming a student at the Magnostadt academy, Adam often goes to the forest he and his brother hiked through to find a new home. A week ago Adam went out again to look for his lost brother. He still did not want to believe that his brother was dead. As Adam walked through the forest, he started going further and further into the dark wooded space. Suddenly He heard a deep growl. Adam spun around to see a large bear growling at him. He froze in fear, his eyes widen and his breathe shallow. The bear pawed towards the new Adam "statue". Out of the corner of his eye, Adam saw a young bear cub peer out from behind its mother.

Adam looked back at the mother bear to see that she had stepped back a little, moving in front of her cub again. Adam then realized that he had entered the bear's territory, and that she had a cub with her. She's only defending herself and her cub. As Adam thought this he started to calm down. When he had completely calmed down, Adam began change the feel of his presence through his Rukh. His Rukh slowly changed from the frantic, scared state to a state where they gave off a kind and friendly presence. A few moments later the mother bear stopped growling and slowly approached Adam. The large bear sniffed the boy. As the bear breathed in his scent, Adam didn't move at all. After a minute the bear turned around and left. Adam then returned to his academy dorm.


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