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1Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Ariella's stealth abilities 22/10/14, 10:30 pm

Ariella Negri

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Name: Slice and Dice
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Chained Dagger
Class: Offensive
Range: 3m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Ariella holds the ball on the chained dagger and swings the dagger around at 25 m/s in a 1-3 meter radius from herself, dealing B-tier slicing damage to anything at the end of the dagger.


Name: Get Over Here
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Chained Dagger
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 3m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Ariella uses the ball and chain on the end of the dagger to wrap around a single limb up to 3 meters away and drags her opponent closer to her at 25 m/s before using her dagger to deal C-tier damage.


Name: Slash and Bash
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Chained Dagger
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Ariella holds her dagger in one hand, swinging the ball end of the chain around at 25 m/s and aims it at an opponent’s face before stabbing the opponent’s body with the dagger. The ball and dagger each deal C-tier damage.

Name: Leaping Steps
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Ariella dashes and leaps at 20 m/s, taking 1 meter leaps in a direction of her choice up to 5 times. She is able to use the environment to leap off of and can change directions with each leap.

Name: Rapid Blend
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Ariella blends into her surroundings, adjusting her clothing appropriately at 20m/s and simultaneously using the environment to hide her movements and blend into the people around her.



Last edited by Ariella Negri on 23/10/14, 11:07 am; edited 1 time in total

2Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 23/10/14, 01:24 am

Vardreth

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Rapid Blend:


With Liber's ability 'Vanishing Steps' as the reference, we're having 'weapon type' be 'body'. I moved your 'movement' part of it. That would be a speed buff, which would require Magoi Manipulation. Donning and changing your 'costume' to blend into the crowd and change your appearance, however, is a short burst of movement that your speed descriptor can be moved over to.

If you want to keep it as just 1 post, that's fine, but Liber has his as a sustain to last longer. The sustain is necessary for it to last longer than a post as a disguise would be considered under the 'invisibility' rules.

Mind you, if you want to make a disguise technique that you could use indefinitely, you could have a technique with a long prep time (such as 30 minutes), and have its duration the entire thread or perhaps longer; this isn't a combat-based ability, and would follow the idealism behind spells such as my Sound Inscription and Yaku's Ice Note thingy, which lasts IC months. It would be more like applying makeup and stuff to disguise who you actually are.



Get Over Here:


Simply added the distance to the technique in the ability description. I'm adding this to the approved for training abilities at the bottom of the post, but feel free to change it and let me know if you feel that is necessary.



I approved Slash and Bash, but I would like to make note that if the opponent is not within arms reach of you, you will not be able to hit him with the ball with the current wording because there is no range listed on how far your ball travels (as opposed to when you throw it to wrap it around a limb). Therefore it's my assumption that the ability does not make use of the length of the chain.



Leaping Steps:


Everyone makes these mistakes with jumping abilities. The distance traveled is equal to scale, and since we're using Stealth, the scale of C-Tier would be 5 meters. Since you have a 5 time leap, and the numbers rule has you divide the amount into the scale/effectiveness of an ability, this means that each leap can only be 1 meter. Secondly, and I think this is actually a mistake I have on a both of my characters, range should be listed as 'close' instead of the actual distance you can travel. This is because you don't actually separate your body from itself and have it travel a distance away from yourself. I'm pretty sure I have it wrong on my character as Garret, as well as on Kirby XD.



The following are approved as written below. Of course, feel free to mix and match whatever you would like and make edits to post for re-approval.

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[b]Name:[/b] Slice and Dice
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 3m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella holds the ball on the chained dagger and swings the dagger around at 25 m/s in a 1-3 meter radius from herself, dealing B-tier slicing damage to anything at the end of the dagger.


[b]Name:[/b] Get Over Here
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 3m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella uses the ball and chain on the end of the dagger to wrap around a single limb up to 3 meters away and drags her opponent closer to her at 25 m/s before using her dagger to deal C-tier damage.


[b]Name:[/b] Slash and Bash
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella holds her dagger in one hand, swinging the ball end of the chain around at 25 m/s and aims it at an opponent’s face before stabbing the opponent’s body with the dagger. The ball and dagger each deal C-tier damage.

3Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 23/10/14, 11:07 am

Ariella Negri

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bumped

4Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 23/10/14, 11:15 am

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Approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Slice and Dice
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 3m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella holds the ball on the chained dagger and swings the dagger around at 25 m/s in a 1-3 meter radius from herself, dealing B-tier slicing damage to anything at the end of the dagger.


[b]Name:[/b] Get Over Here
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 3m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella uses the ball and chain on the end of the dagger to wrap around a single limb up to 3 meters away and drags her opponent closer to her at 25 m/s before using her dagger to deal C-tier damage.


[b]Name:[/b] Slash and Bash
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella holds her dagger in one hand, swinging the ball end of the chain around at 25 m/s and aims it at an opponent’s face before stabbing the opponent’s body with the dagger. The ball and dagger each deal C-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Leaping Steps
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella dashes and leaps at 20 m/s, taking 1 meter leaps in a direction of her choice up to 5 times. She is able to use the environment to leap off of and can change directions with each leap.

[b]Name:[/b] Rapid Blend
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella blends into her surroundings, adjusting her clothing appropriately at 20m/s and simultaneously using the environment to hide her movements and blend into the people around her.

5Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 30/10/14, 08:27 pm

Ariella Negri

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6Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 30/10/14, 08:52 pm

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Approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Rapid Blend
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella blends into her surroundings, adjusting her clothing appropriately at 20m/s and simultaneously using the environment to hide her movements and blend into the people around her.

7Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 05/11/14, 10:59 pm

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8Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 05/11/14, 11:15 pm

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Approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Leaping Steps
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella dashes and leaps at 20 m/s, taking 1 meter leaps in a direction of her choice up to 5 times. She is able to use the environment to leap off of and can change directions with each leap.

9Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 06/11/14, 05:27 pm

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10Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 06/11/14, 06:17 pm

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11Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 06/11/14, 09:45 pm

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Approved:


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[b]Name:[/b] Get Over Here
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 3m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella uses the ball and chain on the end of the dagger to wrap around a single limb up to 3 meters away and drags her opponent closer to her at 25 m/s before using her dagger to deal C-tier damage.


[b]Name:[/b] Slash and Bash
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Chained Dagger
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella holds her dagger in one hand, swinging the ball end of the chain around at 25 m/s and aims it at an opponent’s face before stabbing the opponent’s body with the dagger. The ball and dagger each deal C-tier damage.

12Ariella's stealth abilities Empty Re: Ariella's stealth abilities 08/11/14, 07:24 pm

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Ability Voucher Training Approved:


Name: Slice and Dice
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Chained Dagger
Class: Offensive
Range: 3m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Ariella holds the ball on the chained dagger and swings the dagger around at 25 m/s in a 1-3 meter radius from herself, dealing B-tier slicing damage to anything at the end of the dagger.

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