Lances Starting abilities

Name: Fire ball
Tier: D-tier
Cost:10 Magoi
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The caster creates five Fire balls by pouring magoi into a location within two meters at 10 m/s. The Fire Balls move at 10m/s toward up to five targets, dealing D-Tier damage to each if successful. The Fire Balls can be up to one meter diameter each.

Name: Sunny Day
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive/ Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and the sun seems to glow a bit brighter as a sphere of heat is generated. The sphere grows up to 5m in diameter and lasts for two posts. For these two posts Lance is able to move the sphere at 10m/s within the spells range. This spell can also dehydrate people inside of it causing a D-tier Damage in the form of dried out skin and eyes.

Name: Heat Mirage
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall at 10 m/s. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision.

Name: Control Flames
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive/ Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and flames appear floating before him. Lance can then move any flames within a 10 meter radius of up to D tier fire in a manner of his choosing, at a rate of 10 m/s. Should something come into contact with these flames, it would deal D tier damage. He can only control one flame with up to a five meter diameter.

Name: Slice of Flames
Tier: C -tier
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1-3 posts
Cool-Down: 3-4 posts
Description: Lance creates up to five whips of heat, each 1.5 meters in diameter and 10 meters long, which can slice through the air at speeds of up to 15 m/s. Each whip deals D-Tier damage and can deal up to C-Tier damage per target. If sustained, the caster can deal up to C-Tier damage once per post and control the whips using the same physics as an actual whip.

Fireball: How many fireballs do you make? Include that they will only deal D-Tier damage per target (i.e, three hit one target, two hit another = Both receive D-Tier)
How fast do the fireballs form in front of the caster?

Heat Mirage: What is the range of the ability?
How fast does the magoi travel from the staff to start forming the wall?
Please put the sustain cost.

Sunny Day: What speed does the heat/absorption of heat travel?
You can't buff your damage with an ability.
As a D-Tier ability, the effects of the dehydration would have to be mild and have a clear duration, provide a clearer description. (Asking Yaku about this move)
Please put the sustain cost.

Control Flames: How many flames can you control?
Please put the sustain cost.

Slice of Flames: Please put the sustain cost.
Please choose up to five small whips or one larger whip. If you choose five, they deal C-Tier damage if all of them hit. If half hit, they deal D-Tier damage. If you choose one, it would deal C-Tier damage.

Sunny Day
-You would be hitting yourself with this ability as it currently is worded.

Aside from that, Diego more or less got everything that I noticed.

Ok I tried my best to add what you asked although I am a bit confused about the sunny day thing:

As a D-Tier ability, the effects of the dehydration would have to be mild and have a clear duration, provide a clearer description. (Asking Yaku about this move)

Can you help me word this more.... effectively? (Sorry for the troubles... I am usually like this when I start out on these things but after a while I get the hang of it...)

Well, D-tier damage is basically a sunburn so for dehydration it would probably just lightly dry out their skin and eyes. But they way you have Sunny Day worded, it would still hit you as well as everyone around you. Better wording would be:

Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and the sun seems to glow a bit brighter as a sphere of heat is generated. The sphere grows up to 5m in diameter and lasts for two posts. For these two posts Lance is able to move the sphere at 10m/s within the spells range. This spell can also dehydrate people inside of it causing a D-tier Damage in the form of dried out skin and eyes.

Fire ball
-What size are the fire balls?

Heat Mirage
-Please note the speed at which this spell leaves your staff and moves to the targeted area.

Control Flames
-Instead of saying to use flames nearby to make the spell bigger, please just list the size of the spell which can be determined by looking at the scale section of the ability guidelines.
-You should also just mention being able to create your own flames instead of saying you need fire already present.

Slice of Flames
-Remove the bit about choosing to make five or one. Just leave it at five and then wrap them together to make one whip IC since you can control their movements.

Ok edited thanks again for looking at this

Fireball

1. Change the duration to instant~

Fireball and Control Flames

1. I think 5 meter radius per fireball is wayyyyy too much. I mean, even a 1 meter radius fireball will already block your line of sight, imagine 5 of them lol xD(You don't have to change this if Yaku says you can have it at 5 meter radius. This is just my opinion~)

Fire Ball
The fire balls should all be smaller so the total scale is 5m. Not the scale of each. So yeah each one should only be 1m, but it should also be diameter. Not radius

Control Flames
The scale should only be a single 5m diameter area of flames. Not radius and not 5 of them.

Slice of Flames
I told you to remove the mention of the single whip and to join wrap all your whips together IC if you wanted to use a single one.

Edited

Below you will see revisions of the spells, with the most efficient wording. I think these keep to the same spirit as you were looking for, while fixing what was left.

Lance Knighthunter wrote:Name: Fire ball      
Tier: D-tier    
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: 1 post    
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff as Five Fire balls appear before him in a line. Lance thrusts his staff forward and the Fire balls fling towards the thing that Lance was aiming at. The Fire balls travel at about 10 m/s and do D-tier Damage per target they hit (three hit one target, two hit another = Both receive D-Tier). It takes a matter of one second for each fire ball to form so it takes five seconds to cast the spell. The fire Balls are around 1 meters in Radius each.

Name: Fire ball      
Tier: D-tier    
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 1 post    
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The caster creates five Fire balls by pouring magoi into a location within two meters at 10 m/s. The Fire Balls move at 10m/s toward up to five targets, dealing D-Tier damage to each if successful. The Fire Balls can be up to one meter diameter each.  

Lance Knighthunter wrote:
Name: Heat Mirage
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain  
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters  
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts  
Description: A bright red light emits from his staff as he heats up the air in front of him and creates a mirage-like wall to obscure the view of whatever is on the other side of the heat wall. The wall expands to the size of 5 meters x 5 meters. Is takes a matter of 10 seconds for the wall to finish forming. The spell travels at speeds of 10 m/s

Name: Heat Mirage
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain  
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters  
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts  
Description: The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall at 10 m/s. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision.

Lance Knighthunter wrote:
Name: Control Flames
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive/ Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts  
Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and flames appear floating before him. Lance can then move any flames within a 10 meter radius of up to D tier fire in a manner of his choosing, at a rate of 10 m/s. Should something come into contact with these flames, it would deal D tier damage. He can only control up to one flame with a five meter diameter.

Name: Control Flames
Tier: D -tier
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive/ Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts  
Description: A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and flames appear floating before him. Lance can then move any flames within a 10 meter radius of up to D tier fire in a manner of his choosing, at a rate of 10 m/s. Should something come into contact with these flames, it would deal D tier damage. He can only control one flame with up to a five meter diameter.

Lance Knighthunter wrote:
Name: Slice of Flames  
Tier: C -tier
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 3 posts    
Cool-Down: 4 posts
Description: Lance creates up to five whips of heat, which can slice through the air at speeds of up to 15 m/s. If the whips hit something, they do C-tier damage in the form of 1st degree burns. Should Lance miss with the spell during his first post, he may sustain the spell in subsequent posts to manipulate the whips with similar physics of an actual whip at a speed of 15 m/s, changing the trajectory of the attack and giving him another opportunity to strike the opponent. Lance may create 5 whips at 1.5 meters in radius and 10 meters long.

Name: Slice of Flames  
Tier: C -tier
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1-3 posts    
Cool-Down: 3-4 posts
Description: Lance creates up to five whips of heat, each 1.5 meters in diameter and 10 meters long, which can slice through the air at speeds of up to 15 m/s. Each whip deals D-Tier damage and can deal up to C-Tier damage per target. If sustained, the caster can deal up to C-Tier damage once per post and control the whips using the same physics as an actual whip.

I feel like I just cheated... oh well... edited xD

Approved!

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[b]Name:[/b] Fire ball      
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier    
[b]Cost:[/b]10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post    
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates five Fire balls by pouring magoi into a location within two meters at 10 m/s. The Fire Balls move at 10m/s toward up to five targets, dealing D-Tier damage to each if successful. The Fire Balls can be up to one meter diameter each.

[b]Name:[/b] Sunny Day  
[b]Tier:[/b] D -tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/ 5 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/ Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and the sun seems to glow a bit brighter as a sphere of heat is generated. The sphere grows up to 5m in diameter and lasts for two posts. For these two posts Lance is able to move the sphere at 10m/s within the spells range. This spell can also dehydrate people inside of it causing a D-tier Damage in the form of dried out skin and eyes.

[b]Name:[/b] Heat Mirage
[b]Tier:[/b] D -tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain  
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters  
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts  
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall at 10 m/s. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision.

[b]Name:[/b] Control Flames
[b]Tier:[/b] D -tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/ Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts  
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from the big orb on his staff and flames appear floating before him. Lance can then move any flames within a 10 meter radius of up to D tier fire in a manner of his choosing, at a rate of 10 m/s. Should something come into contact with these flames, it would deal D tier damage. He can only control one flame with up to a five meter diameter.

[b]Name:[/b] Slice of Flames  
[b]Tier:[/b] C -tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1-3 posts    
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3-4 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Lance creates up to five whips of heat, each 1.5 meters in diameter and 10 meters long, which can slice through the air at speeds of up to 15 m/s. Each whip deals D-Tier damage and can deal up to C-Tier damage per target. If sustained, the caster can deal up to C-Tier damage once per post and control the whips using the same physics as an actual whip.