|Done| Calamity Ant Knight & Calamity Ant Worker

Ant Knight

Pheromones:
I already explained to you how to write this in DMs. As it stands it doesn't make sense. What is a pheromone base attack at D-tier level? This doesn't give any information on what it actually does. Your description doesn't explain much either. Check your DMs and fix it according to the instruction you were already given.

Hard Exoskeleton:
This trait should not be granting abilities. This is a trait to grant the chitin armor so it should proved a natural armor durability. But this can't be a perfect armor covering the entire body. Make sure to detail the places that are armored vs the body parts that don't have this extra defense.

Enhanced Strength:
-A D-tier trait can't grant you C-tier damage. By taking a D-tier enhanced strength it lets you bet our other D-tier beasts without any strength traits. But your base damage would still be D-tier.
-Your description should not be mentioning system mechanics like tiers.


Worker Ant

Hard Exoskeleton:
-There is no health system.
-The proper way to do this trait was explained above.

Formic Acid:
-This trait would only grant access to acid based abilities. There should be no tier mentioned as the tier of abilities if governed by your class.

Dig:
-Again, traits that grant access to certain types of abilities aren't tier locked.
-As this trait stands, it would require the ant use an active ability to perform any sort of burrowing movement. I recommend saving the ability enabling trait for now and making the base burrowing movement trait first. But ultimately it is up to you.

Solomon's Proxy wrote:Ant Knight

Pheromones:
I already explained to you how to write this in DMs. As it stands it doesn't make sense. What is a pheromone base attack at D-tier level? This doesn't give any information on what it actually does. Your description doesn't explain much either. Check your DMs and fix it according to the instruction you were already given.

Hard Exoskeleton:
This trait should not be granting abilities. This is a trait to grant the chitin armor so it should proved a natural armor durability. But this can't be a perfect armor covering the entire body. Make sure to detail the places that are armored vs the body parts that don't have this extra defense.

Enhanced Strength:
-A D-tier trait can't grant you C-tier damage. By taking a D-tier enhanced strength it lets you bet our other D-tier beasts without any strength traits. But your base damage would still be D-tier.
-Your description should not be mentioning system mechanics like tiers.


Worker Ant

Hard Exoskeleton:
-There is no health system.
-The proper way to do this trait was explained above.

Formic Acid:
-This trait would only grant access to acid based abilities. There should be no tier mentioned as the tier of abilities if governed by your class.

Dig:
-Again, traits that grant access to certain types of abilities aren't tier locked.
-As this trait stands, it would require the ant use an active ability to perform any sort of burrowing movement. I recommend saving the ability enabling trait for now and making the base burrowing movement trait first. But ultimately it is up to you.

Thank you for your grading, and edits have been made!

1/2 Approved with these edits:

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[b]Name:[/b]The Calamity Ant Knight
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b]|Swarm 6|
[b]Species:[/b] The Calamity Ant Knight {Insect }
[b]Appearance:[/b] Creus's apart of the special bread known from ancient times as The Calamity Ant Knight. Unlike the  Calamity Ant Insect Queen. The Calamity Ant Knight has bright red exoskeleton with pale lavender eyes. The appropriate size is 0.5 - 1.5 meters long, with the traditional six insectoid limbs, three on each side of her body. On top of ant  head is  two antenna, which is used to talk with it kind and her tamer.

The Calamity Ant Knight is the offspring of Brood of The Calamity Ant Queen . The number within this size of this swarm is only 6 at this time due to bigger size.

[b]Beast Traits:[/b]
1/2 Approved if Changes are acceptable

[spoiler="Trait Info"]
[b]Trait Name:[/b]Pheromones
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]|D - Tier-|
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ants Knights |
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The Calamity Ants Knights are able to release pheromone trails as a means of communicate within their colonies. These trails are simply markers left behind by The Calamity Ants Knights to mark either friends or foe.  These trails are produce from  the Calamity Ants Knights  hindgut with is there hind.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]The Calamity Ants Knights are able to apply Pheromones during basic actions such as movement and attacks to exchange information with other ants. Other ants may detect these signals up to 20m away.
 
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Hard Exoskeleton
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]|D - Tier-|
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ant Knight|
[b]Trait Description:[/b]The Calamity Ant Knights are known for their hard exoskeleton. Which is called a chitin. Often times, the chitin provides additional protection for knights. Such areas are the Calamity Ant Knight's round head, which has mandibles hard exoskeleton. The Calamity Ant Knights  also have armored mid-thorax, and armored abdomen. However, there are unarmored area located along either limbs or Calamity Ant Knights underbelly. 
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Grants the armored sections D-tier armor durability.

[b]Trait Name: [/b]Enhanced Strength
[b]Trait Tier: [/b]D-tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ant|
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Calamity Ant Knights is able to increase the strength of his entire body, making him able to D- Tier .
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allow the Calamity Ant Knights to lift twice their own body weight with ease.
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[b]Name:[/b] The Calamity Ant Worker
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b]|Swarm - 6|
[b]Species:[/b] The Calamity Ant Worker {Insect }
[b]Appearance:[/b] Joan's apart of the special bread known from ancient times as The Calamity Ant Worker. Unlike the  Calamity Ant Knight. The Calamity Ant Worker has dull red exoskeleton with pale lavender eyes. The appropriate size is 1m -1.5 meters long, with the traditional six insectoid limbs, three on each side of it body. On top of ant  head is   two antenna, which is used to talk with it kind and her tamer.

The Calamity Ant Worker is the offspring of Brood of The Calamity Ant Queen . The number within this size of this swarm is only 6 at this time due to bigger size species.

[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[spoiler="Trait Info"]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Hard Exoskeleton
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]|D - Tier-|
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ant Knight|
[b]Trait Description:[/b]The Calamity Ant Knights are known for their hard exoskeleton. Which is called a chitin. Often times, the chitin provides additional protection for knights. Such areas are the Calamity Ant Knight's round head, which has mandibles hard exoskeleton. The Calamity Ant Knights  also have armored mid-thorax, and armored abdomen. However, there are unarmored area located along either limbs and they Calamity Ant Knights underbelly.  
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Armored areas have D-tier armor durability.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Formic Acid
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]|D - Tier-|
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ant Worker|
[b]Trait Description:[/b]  The worker class Calamity Ant is known to spit a Formic Acid at a target, or foes. The Formic Acid is hazards , and can cause irritation of eyes and nose, sore throat, cough, chest tightness, headache and confusion.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] It allows Calamity Ant Worker to  register Formic Acid based attacks.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Dig
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]|D - Tier-|
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]|Calamity Ant |
[b]Trait Description:[/b]The Calamity Ants overall species are known for their distinctive abilities as natural subterranean species. The Calamity Ants are able to dig for the purpose of building and maintaining the ant colony. Such things help control the nest's internal temperature and protect the nest from predators or other intruders that might damage or destroy the nest. Another application is that it allows the Calamity Ant to sneak up on them or attack them using this method, as it has both offensive and defensive abilities.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Can register Digging based abilities.

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Changes made

Since they don't cover the entire body, I need you to understand that its better against single-targeted attacks than aoe's because aoe's will undoubtedly hit the underbellies and other exposed parts. As long as you understand that.

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Trait Name: Enhanced Strength
Trait Tier: D-tier
Trait Requirement:|Calamity Ant|
Trait Description: Calamity Ant Knights is able to increase the strength of his entire body, allowing the Calamity Ant Knights to lift twice their own body weight with ease.
Trait Effect: This grants this creature strength tiers equal to D-tier.

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unfortunately for
Trait Name: Dig>> certain movements are registered as separate tiers.

Example

Spoiler:

^ The act of burrowing itself was registered as a movement, we unfortunately don't get anything for free. so with how you have it, I need you to understand that you wont be able to burrow outside of abilities at this point.

if u understand and make the small edit to ur strength trait, we are good

Lagi wrote:Since they don't cover the entire body, I need you to understand that its better against single-targeted attacks than aoe's because aoe's will undoubtedly hit the underbellies and other exposed parts. As long as you understand that.

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Trait Name: Enhanced Strength
Trait Tier: D-tier
Trait Requirement:|Calamity Ant|
Trait Description: Calamity Ant Knights is able to increase the strength of his entire body, allowing the Calamity Ant Knights to lift twice their own body weight with ease.
Trait Effect: This grants this creature strength tiers equal to D-tier.

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unfortunately for
Trait Name: Dig>> certain movements are registered as separate tiers.

Example

Spoiler:

^ The act of burrowing itself was registered as a movement, we unfortunately don't get anything for free. so with how you have it, I need you to understand that you wont be able to burrow outside of abilities at this point.

if u understand and make the small edit to ur strength trait, we are good

edits made!

2/2 then, hopefully, there won't be any issues in the future.