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1Nima's creatures Empty Nima's creatures 31/08/22, 11:30 pm

Nima Karpoche

Nima Karpoche
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Name: Dache
Tier: D
Type: Normal
Species: Tufted Ground Squirrel
Appearance:
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Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Terrestrial Glue Glands
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Tufted Ground Squirrel | Available soil or stone nearby.
Trait Description: A special adaptation this small rodent has developed as a means of self defense and even for hunting in some extreme cases. Special glands at the base of the claws, fangs, and along the tail produce a viscous secretion with adhesive properties that fast dries upon exposure to open air. The squirrel mats soil, minerals or stones over these secretions quickly forming earthen layers over themselves. As the fluid hardens it can form durable structures out of the soil. These can be used to lengthen the reach of their claws, shield themselves from attacks, or even turn their tails into rocky clubs.
Trait Effect: This trait grants Dache access to abilities that produce this special glue

Trait Name: Surface Swim
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: -
Trait Description: The user can quickly displace the ground with their claws allowing them to easily burrow into soil.
Trait Effect: Capable of burrowing at D-tier speeds.

Trait Name: Sudden Fuzzy
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: -
Trait Description: In order to protect himself further from damage, Dache can enact a vast amount of fuzzy fur all around his form.
Trait Effect: Reduces damage of blunt force attacks by D-tier, as they have a hard time getting through the fuzz and slow down on contact. He can still be grabbed/grappled but the protection is still active as long as the fuzz is.



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2Nima's creatures Empty Re: Nima's creatures 01/09/22, 12:04 am

Zion

Zion
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Okay, very broad and vague. Unfortunately I'll have to ask you to narrow the beasts traits down and be more specific with the "how" which is gonna limit your versatility, but everything you have can also be rolled into one trait to free up room for more stuff if you'd like. Here is an example trait, feel free to use it or just base future traits off it:

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[b]Trait Name:[/b] Terrestrial Glue Glands
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Tufted Ground Squirrel | Available soil or stone nearby.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] A special adaptation this small rodent has developed as a means of self defense and even for hunting in some extreme cases. Special glands at the base of the claws, fangs, and along the tail produce a viscous secretion with adhesive properties that fast dries upon exposure to open air. The squirrel mats soil or stones over these secretions quickly forming earthen layers over themselves. As the fluid hardens it can form durable structures out of the soil. These can be used to lengthen the reach of their claws, shield themselves from attacks, or even turn their tails into rocky clubs.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] This trait grants Dache access to abilities that produce this special glue

Fire and poison are overdone so I went with an "earth elemental" approach with this one. It also grants you options for possibly molding your own tools as well such as molding a temporary key to get you past a locked door. Or perhaps you will use it for camouflage or setting up traps by quick crafting spikes.

As you can see, this covers claws, fangs, and even your tail all in one trait. But it's focused in on a single "element" and goes into the details about what it is, how it works, and what it could be used for in that beasts' daily life.

3Nima's creatures Empty Re: Nima's creatures 01/09/22, 12:51 am

Zion

Zion
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I made some minor edits with your second two traits. If you're happy with them, consider this 1/2 approved! If you do, DM me and we can hammer it out.

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[center][img]https://i.imgur.com/5It84WT.png[/img][/center]
[b]Name:[/b] Dache
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Tufted Ground Squirrel
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[img]https://i.imgur.com/xra1acm.jpg[/img]
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Terrestrial Glue Glands
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Tufted Ground Squirrel | Available soil or stone nearby.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] A special adaptation this small rodent has developed as a means of self defense and even for hunting in some extreme cases. Special glands at the base of the claws, fangs, and along the tail produce a viscous secretion with adhesive properties that fast dries upon exposure to open air. The squirrel mats soil, minerals or stones over these secretions quickly forming earthen layers over themselves. As the fluid hardens it can form durable structures out of the soil. These can be used to lengthen the reach of their claws, shield themselves from attacks, or even turn their tails into rocky clubs.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] This trait grants Dache access to abilities that produce this special glue

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Surface Swim
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] -
[b]Trait Description:[/b]  The user can quickly displace the ground with their claws allowing them to easily burrow into soil.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Capable of burrowing at D-tier speeds.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Sudden Fuzzy
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] -
[b]Trait Description:[/b] In order to protect himself further from damage, Dache can enact a vast amount of fuzzy fur all around his form.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Reduces damage of blunt force attacks by D-tier, as they have a hard time getting through the fuzz and slow down on contact. He can still be grabbed/grappled but the protection is still active as long as the fuzz is.

4Nima's creatures Empty Re: Nima's creatures 01/09/22, 11:19 pm

Merrze

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Looks good to me 2/2 Approved!

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