Yong-sun's Starting Traits

Flow of the Apex Predator
Tier: C
Requirement: Must have a physical combat class.
Description: Yong-sun has developed his own, unique, and much better named style based off of his father's style, the "Flow of the Green Demon". The Flow of the Apex Predator is a fluid martial art that gears the style more towards monster hunting. Retaining the emphasis on flexibility that his father's style possesses, it forsakes the bare-handed defensive capabilities of it, adding in evasive maneuvers and precise strokes of his weapon. Coupled with a thrusting weapon of great range, its effects are magnified against larger creatures.
Effect:

• Martial Artist: Can perform advanced flips and other acrobatics without the use of abilities.
  
• Can balance on almost any footing/surface.
  
• Tiger Hunter: Additional tier of damage when fighting beasts, as well as creatures that move in more than two legs.
  
• In the Shadow of a Colossus: Additional skill when climbing the bodies of very large creatures.
  

Blood, Sweat and Tears
Tier: C
Requirement: Must have a physical combat class.
Description: From a young age, Yong-sun has brutally trained his body, in order to develop his own fighting style. After so much hellish training, his body is in peak condition! Capable of maintaining a healthy jog for well over several hours, as well as execute feats of great physical skill, he is adept at breaking the limits of his body. Muscle growth is, however, controlled, lest it affect flexibility.
Effect:

• Kicking Up the Dust: Can travel at a jogging pace through most terrain as comfortably as one would walk.
  
• Tactical Sprint: The character can sprint as fast as a horse and can maintain these speeds for a few minutes. At this level they are equal to a D-tier fanalis in speed.
  
• Athletic Frame: Limited strength when compared to a similarly-trained fighter, relying on cutting or thrusting weapons and skill for damage.
  

So for Flow of the Apex Predator you have too much for C tier traits.
You're pretty much making the Perfect balance trait with different words which is fine, however the added tier of damage is not going to work out the ways it is worded. IF you want to deal a higher tier in damage from a trait it would only be Basic attacks which are attack that cost no magoi or stamina to use. In doing this you pretty much would need a trait of that Tier to deal that Tier of damage, so you start out dealing D as a Human, you can spend 2 points to give you C tier strength thus giving you a higher Tier of damage than you have now. The bit about the additional skill remove it, as we discussed in discord you said

Yong-Son wrote:Ok. The name is a reference. And I just figured Yong-sun would be trained in keeping his footing/climbing onto creatures way larger than him.

Which you pretty much already doing with the perfect balance trait.

For the next one

Yong-Son wrote:Athletic Frame: Limited strength when compared to a similarly-trained fighter, relying on cutting or thrusting weapons and skill for damage.

I'm not too sure what you're getting at? Seems like you're limiting your strength but sort of giving yourself like a proficiency bonus of some sort with these weapons?


Make the changes, if you have question ask in discord, when you are done with the edit or remake them put it back in the to-be-graded section in discord.

Keep in mind, some of these things seem like profession perks. So I would suggest going check out the professions before doing any changes to your traits, look at like Diana's or Lagi's Professions see what bonus they get and how they did it, you may walk away with more going that route and saving your trait points for Magoi/stamina traits or strength/speed traits.