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1Azazel's spells 2 Empty Azazel's spells 2 on 05/12/20, 12:01 pm

Azazel

Azazel
C-Tier
C-Tier
Flight
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel taps his staff on the ground and mutters the words "Volant".
Scaling:  Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10/5
Description:

    Azazel mutters the spell "Volant" and is given the power to fly using his strength magic. His clothes rustle as he takes flight.


Flight Advance
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel taps his staff on the ground and mutters the words "Volant Superior".
Scaling:  Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel mutters the spell "Volant" and is given the power to fly using his strength magic. His clothes rustle as he takes flight. This version allows him to move with B rank speed.


Fire Arrow Seeker
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires Azazel to point his staff and mutter the spell "Firaga Quivera Indagator" has to stay in sight.
Scaling: Damage/Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 20/10
Description:

    Azazel creates a .10 meter long arrow of pure fire from his staff and sends it at the enemy with a radius of forty meters. The arrow will follow the target using strength magic as long as Azazel can see them for one posts at which the arrow will smash into whatever is in front of it.


Gravity Orb
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel aims his staff at his enemies and mutters the spell "Gravitus Orbis"
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20/10
Description:

    Azazel creates a 65cm round sized black orb with two smaller orbs on each side with a white ring around it. He throws it up and forward where it hovers over a group of enemies with a radius of 1.9 meters in diameter. Anyone under the orb within a 30 meter area will feel a intense gravity field slam onto their shoulders, those weaker than the rank are forced to the ground where they can feel bones dislocating and flesh being badly bruised!


Fire Trap Triple
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel taps his staff on the ground and mutters the words "Firaga Hiddenia Triplex". Does not work if the ground is wet
Scaling: AoE/Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 20/10
Description:

    Azazel taps the ground with his staff and mutters the incantation "Firaga Hiddenia Triplex" and three small flames 0.9 meters high appear in front of him but spread further out. Anyone who steps on the flames are engulfed in a 2 meter high flame for four seconds for C tier damage, causing bad 2nd degree burns..


Fire Mine
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel taps his staff on the ground and mutters the words "Ignis Meum"
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20/10
Description:

    Azazel taps the ground with his staff and mutters the incantation "Ignis Meum", it creates a 0.61 meter rune in front of Azazel, those who step on it are engulfed in a intense fiery explosion 1 meter wide, causing  2nd degree burns and flesh to be ripped open.


Telekinetic Orb
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel mutters the incantation "Vis Ager" while tapping the ground once with his staff.
Scaling: Defense/Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel taps the ground with his staff and mutters the incantation "Vis Ager" and creates a 3 meter perfectly round invisible orb that only those who can see the rukh can see, the orb around him protects him from damage once his Borg is broken.


Orb Bullet triple
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel aims his staff at his enemies and mutters the spell "Vivamus Fermentum Bullet Triplex"
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 20/10
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff at his enemies and mutters the incantation "Vivamus Fermentum Bullet Triplex" and fires off three fast moving  black orbs that strike with C rank damage. Each orb is 0.229 meters in size.


Fire Ball Shower
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel raises his staff and creates a red magic circle in the sky over his enemies and mutters the incantation "Ignis Pluviam"
Scaling: AoE/Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel raises his staff to the sky and creates a glowing red magic circle over his enemies, the circle glows and unleashes thirty, "67cm" sized fireballs down onto the enemy in a 35 meter radius. Azazel can hold the spell by adding the cost to it again for another shower. Those struck receive B tier damage and 3rd degree burns, can also ignite on fire anything flammable in the area.


Inferno
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel points his staff forward and mutters the spell "Infernus"
Scaling: Damage/Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff forward and mutters "Infernus" A red magic circle appears in front of him and unleashes a roaring wave of pure fire, it travels thirty meters and has a width of 10 meters. Those caught in the inferno are burned with 3rd degree burns, clothes are burned away, and flammable objects are ignited.


Gravity Orb Superio
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel points his staff upward and mutters the spell "Gravitas Orbios Superior"
Scaling: Damage/Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff upward and mutters the spell "Gravitas Orbios Superior" fires four 65cm sized black orbs out of his staff, taking up the points of the compass N, S, E, W, in a full 75 meter circle. The orbs vibrate and release a crushing force of intense gravity downwards, causing all those of same rank to feel enormous pressure on their bodies that can cause slowness, bone breaking, and skin tearing, those under the rank are crushed to the ground, stuck as their bones are shattered and their flesh ripped.


Heavy Bullet Storm
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel points his staff forward and mutters the spell "Viribus Bullet tempestas"
Scaling: Damage/Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff forward and mutters "Viribus  Bullet Temestas" Several purple orbs appear around him and fire up to fifteen solid black balls each 75cm's in size that upon impact cause intense blunt damage. This is enough to bring down a charging horse or shatter the bones of anyone they hit. Those lower than the rank face serious possibility of death or hospitalization.


Fire room
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel points his staff forward and mutters the spell "Infernus Locus"
Scaling: Damage/AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff forward and mutters "Infernus Locus" A red magic circle appears around a 30 meter area and let's loose a burning inferno that surrounds allies and keeps enemies out, the wall of fire is 15 meters high. Those who try to get in can have clothes burned away and armor super heated, causing third degree burns instantly.


Strength wall
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Defense
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Azazel points his staff forward and mutters the spell "Lapidum"
Scaling: Defense/AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    Azazel aims his staff forward and mutters "Lapidum", using strength magic, Azazel pulls a solid stone wall 10 meters high and 40 meters wide, and 10 meters thick, protecting those on the other side



Last edited by Azazel on 13/12/20, 04:59 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Azazel's spells 2 Empty Re: Azazel's spells 2 on 08/12/20, 07:41 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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Flight: You have scaling set as an area for a self casting spell, also please describe the visual effects of when u fly, I.E. clothes rustle when the spell activates, you may also choose to put the magic is invisible to all but those who can see ruhk.

Gravitas Orbis: Please give dimensions, also it can't do that much damage also list the max range it may travel, please. "D-tier - Attacks of this level are relatively negligible in destructive force. They can cause bruising, small cuts, and minor burns. The only way to really subdue or kill an opponent with these types of attacks is by dealing a mass number of them or targeting a vital point with several." See under COMBAT here https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6470-combat-systems. Lastly please define what you mean by Area for scaling. It's not a premade scaling option.

Fire Arrow Seeker: Please set max range, how is it tracking? Normal fire spells would be unable to do so.

I'll stop grading here, there are more errors that follow these listed above. On top of these comments, please add sustain cost to all spells which is half the cost. Check out the Template example again if needed to get an idea of what I'm talking about. Review your other spells and resubmit on discord when you have done so.


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3Azazel's spells 2 Empty Re: Azazel's spells 2 on 10/12/20, 12:50 pm

Azazel

Azazel
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Edits made

4Azazel's spells 2 Empty Re: Azazel's spells 2 on 11/12/20, 09:44 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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So for sustain in the template u put 0. For cost put i.e. 20/10 magoi to represent 20 cost 10 to sustain.
Again you need sizes for all ur projectiles and likewise spells that make any shape


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5Azazel's spells 2 Empty Re: Azazel's spells 2 on 13/12/20, 03:01 pm

Azazel

Azazel
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Edits made

6Azazel's spells 2 Empty Re: Azazel's spells 2 on 14/12/20, 02:24 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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Fire Trap Triple: how far do the flames go out from you?
Orb Bullet triple: Keep in mid doesnt matter if 1 or all 3 hit this spell will only do C tier damage.
Fire Ball Shower: "Azazel can hold the spell by adding the cost to it again for another shower." Remove this.
Gravity Orb Superio: Make Offensive/Supplementary as it does damage and Debufss speed, you will also need to note that the Damage will be C tier and the debuff will be C tier. If u want it to do damage you need to removed the mentions of slowness


Review the rest of the spells as well and make sure they are good.


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