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Jumanah Warrior Ability Set

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1Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 20/08/20, 02:57 am

Jumanah Necowl

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Over The Top Slashes
Tier: C Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user has to flip their sword into a back handed hold before commencing the attack
Scaling: Scales for one higher tier of damage for every 10 stamina invested on one of the strikes.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10
Description:

    The user moves their sword into a backhanded hold as she moves forward towards the enemy. they then jumps off to the side roughly to 1.5 meters away from the target. they then side flips with a twirl in mid air while in the air after flipping the user performs the two slashes each being D-tier for a total of C-tier damage.





Take Back
Tier: B Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive | Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The attack defending against must be a physical attack that she can block while getting up close enough to the target to allow her to execute the rest of the move.
Scaling: Scales for one tier higher blocking capability for every 15 stamina invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 3 Posts
Cost: 30 Stamina | 15
Description:

    The user moves toward the enemy that is attacking with a physical strike and jumps at them blocking up to C Tier Attacks with their blade. As they do so they run up the attackers chest, and  back flipping off them up to 2 meters away spinning their sword as they land.





Take A Blow
Tier: C Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must build up speed while spinning to allow them properly slide by the opponent.
Scaling: Scales for one higher damage Tier for every 10 stamina invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10
Description:

    The user will spin like a top on their toes towards the target before dropping to one knee in a slide. Touching one hand to their own belly and extending the other arm out holding their blade back handedly to slash at the opponents mid section at their side for C Tier damage. As their slide would slow to a stop the user now  passed by their opponent will twist their legs and torso to spin back up to their feet and face back towards their opponent.






Low Blow
Tier: C Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be behind the target before beginning this move.
Scaling: Scales for an additional round the target is effected for every 10 Stamina invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10
Description:

    The user runs at the target from behind and performs a no handed frontflip / cartwheel landing in the splits allowing the momentum to keep her sliding on the ground. As they reach next to the opponent they user then slashes at their ankles to slow their running movements by 2 speed tiers for 2 rounds. The user will slide  past the opponent fully before shifting her legs to stand now into a Fú Hǔ Bù like stance as her sliding would come to a halt. She would then hold her sword with her arm extended out towards the opponent while her opposite hand is extended up towards the air diagonally.



Last edited by Jumanah Necowl on 23/08/20, 05:48 am; edited 2 times in total


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2Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 21/08/20, 08:58 pm

Merrze

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Over The Top Slashes: Are you performing two movements here? The way I read it it sounds like you're flipping twice which imo would make the ability supplementary. To keep it offensive I'd just say its a move in which you do that type of slash while in that initial first jump. Something like "while 1.5m in the air after flipping the user performs the two slashes each being D-tier for a total of C-tier damage.

Take Back: Right now this ability feels a little busy, it seems like you're blocking doing damage and moving backward off them with a kick. If its defensive and offensive, you need those both in the ability type. I'd say you block, kicking off them for C-tier block and C-tier damage. If you want to keep all the effects that's fine but your damage will be limited to D-tier and you'll need supplementary in the description. Both options are fine I just wanted to let you know.



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3Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 21/08/20, 11:16 pm

Jumanah Necowl

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I edited the over the top one as you suggested and as for the take back ability I took out the damage but kept the back flipping off of them as well as adding in the supplementary part. After looking at it again it felt a bit busy as well to me so i decided to take the kick part out for the time being but may add it back in in the future if I ever retain the ability to a higher tier.


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4Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 23/08/20, 05:28 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Over the Top Slashes

Just specify in your scaling that it is for damage.

Take Back

Seems fine to me.

Take a Blow

Just specify in your scaling that it is for damage.

Low Blow

Just specify that the users speed is reduced by two tiers. In half, at higher speed tiers, can be too much for a C tier ability.


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5Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 23/08/20, 05:53 am

Diana Corvus

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APROVED FOR TRAINING



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[center][b]Over The Top Slashes[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user has to flip their sword into a back handed hold before commencing the attack
[b]Scaling:[/b] Scales for one higher tier of damage for every 10 stamina invested on one of the strikes.
[b]Sustain:[/b] --
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user moves their sword into a backhanded hold as she moves forward towards the enemy. they then jumps off to the side roughly to 1.5 meters away from the target. they then side flips with a twirl in mid air while in the air after flipping the user performs the two slashes each being D-tier for a total of C-tier damage.[/list]

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[center][b]Take Back[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive | Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The attack defending against must be a physical attack that she can block while getting up close enough to the target to allow her to execute the rest of the move.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Scales for one tier higher blocking capability for every 15 stamina invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] --
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina | 15
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user moves toward the enemy that is attacking with a physical strike and jumps at them blocking up to C Tier Attacks with their blade. As they do so they run up the attackers chest, and  back flipping off them up to 2 meters away spinning their sword as they land. [/list]

Code:
[center][b]Take A Blow[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must build up speed while spinning to allow them properly slide by the opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Scales for one higher damage Tier for every 10 stamina invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] --
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user will spin like a top on their toes towards the target before dropping to one knee in a slide. Touching one hand to their own belly and extending the other arm out holding their blade back handedly to slash at the opponents mid section at their side for C Tier damage. As their slide would slow to a stop the user now  passed by their opponent will twist their legs and torso to spin back up to their feet and face back towards their opponent.[/list]

Code:
[center][b]Low Blow[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be behind the target before beginning this move.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Scales for an additional round the target is effected for every 10 Stamina invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] --
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user runs at the target from behind and performs a no handed frontflip / cartwheel landing in the splits allowing the momentum to keep her sliding on the ground. As they reach next to the opponent they user then slashes at their ankles to slow their running movements by 2 speed tiers for 2 rounds. The user will slide  past the opponent fully before shifting her legs to stand now into a Fú Hǔ Bù like stance as her sliding would come to a halt. She would then hold her sword with her arm extended out towards the opponent while her opposite hand is extended up towards the air diagonally.[/list]


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6Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 26/08/20, 06:41 am

Jumanah Necowl

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7Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 26/08/20, 08:52 pm

Diana Corvus

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APPROVED



You may add the ability to your vault.


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8Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 30/08/20, 05:28 am

Jumanah Necowl

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9Jumanah Warrior Ability Set Empty Re: Jumanah Warrior Ability Set 01/09/20, 01:25 pm

Merrze

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Training approved, make sure to add to your vault


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