Guaiwu The Red Ogre, Miracle General [Resubmit]

Name: Guaiwu The Red Ogre
Tier: A-Tier
Damage Required to Defeat: A-Tier
Description: A fanalis former bandit leader who was defeated and saved on the brink of death by Trently. His bandit group was absorbed into Trently's guild and now he and Trently have begun to be friends, having somewhat of a mentor and student relationship. He is grateful to Trently for giving him a new and better path in life and will support Trently's aspirations best he can. Guawei has a temper but he tries to not let it take over him. He is a rough and rugged personality with a rare kindness to only certain people. His fighting style is purely using his body and nothing else. The fanalis man is 6'6 with a very muscular frame. He is a body manipulator.
Weapons: None
Traits:

Trait Name: Iron Body
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Must be Body Manipulator.
Trait Description: Through excessive training of one's body, the character has developed a more resilient body that reduces damage taken.
Trait Effect: The character's body is resistant to damage of A-Tier and below. Damaging abilities that hit him are reduced by a single tier.

Trait Name: The Red Ogre's Will
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Must be Body Manipulator.
Trait Description: Through extensive training of one's body, the character has developed a trait that triggers at will of the character.
Trait Effect: The character's become four 12cm black claws, teeth become sharp and pointed, and a 24cm black horn sprouts from the top center of his head. He can deal A-Tier ability damage with his claws, teeth, and horn. This trait lasts for two posts, and only may be used once per thread. It takes a short moment to transform, about a couple seconds.

Trait Name: Perfect Balance
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: Must have a Physical Combat Class
Trait Description: Being nimble and flexible are valuable traits, but they aren't very useful without the balance to use them properly. The character with this trait is very in tune with their sense of balance allowing them to almost always land on their feet, perform advanced acrobatics, and balance on even the smallest of footholds.
Trait Effect: Can perform advanced flips and other acrobatics without the use of abilities. Can balance on almost any footing/surface.

Abilities:

Ogre Impact [A-Tier]: Guaiwu punches a target with his right fist, his punch near lightning speed and making impact with the target. The target inflicted with damage will suffer A-Tier blunt damage and shattering of bones and be knocked back 10m far.

Acrobatic Dodge [A-Tier]: Guaiwu jumps into the air 10m far up and lands 10m away in near lightning speed, manipulating the muscles in his legs and making them larger to dodge acrobatically so quick.

Iron Armor [A-Tier]: Guaiwu manipulates the iron in his body to coat his body in an A-Tier layer of iron that will protect him against A-Tier damage.

Arm Catapult [A-Tier]: Guaiwu grabs a target with his right arm with A-Tier grasping that requires A-Tier strength to escape and throws tbe target 20m far with A-Tier strength.

Man Disarmed [A-Tier]: Guaiwu lunges for a weapon of a close target with lightning speed and pries it out of their hands with A-Tier strength force, throwing it aside 15m far.

Can you please add the original or clarify what is I being changed?

Iron Armor protects the entire user's body instead of one selected limb.

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[b]Name:[/b] Guaiwu The Red Ogre
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Damage Required to Defeat:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Description:[/b] A fanalis former bandit leader who was defeated and saved on the brink of death by Trently. His bandit group was absorbed into Trently's guild and now he and Trently have begun to be friends, having somewhat of a mentor and student relationship. He is grateful to Trently for giving him a new and better path in life and will support Trently's aspirations best he can. Guawei has a temper but he tries to not let it take over him. He is a rough and rugged personality with a rare kindness to only certain people. His fighting style is purely using his body and nothing else. The fanalis man is 6'6 with a very muscular frame. He is a body manipulator.
[b]Weapons:[/b] None
[b]Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Iron Body
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Must be Body Manipulator.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through excessive training of one's body, the character has developed a more resilient body that reduces damage taken.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The character's body is resistant to damage of A-Tier and below. Damaging abilities that hit him are reduced by a single tier.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] The Red Ogre's Will
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Must be Body Manipulator.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through extensive training of one's body, the character has developed a trait that triggers at will of the character.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The character's become four 12cm black claws, teeth become sharp and pointed, and a 24cm black horn sprouts from the top center of his head. He can deal A-Tier ability damage with his claws, teeth, and horn. This trait lasts for two posts, and only may be used once per thread. It takes a short moment to transform, about a couple seconds.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Perfect Balance
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] C
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Must have a Physical Combat Class
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Being nimble and flexible are valuable traits, but they aren't very useful without the balance to use them properly. The character with this trait is very in tune with their sense of balance allowing them to almost always land on their feet, perform advanced acrobatics, and balance on even the smallest of footholds.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Can perform advanced flips and other acrobatics without the use of abilities. Can balance on almost any footing/surface.

[b]Abilities:[/b]

[b]Ogre Impact [A-Tier]:[/b] Guaiwu punches a target with his right fist, his punch near lightning speed and making impact with the target. The target inflicted with damage will suffer A-Tier blunt damage and shattering of bones and be knocked back 10m far.

[b]Acrobatic Dodge [A-Tier]:[/b] Guaiwu jumps into the air 10m far up and lands 10m away in near lightning speed, manipulating the muscles in his legs and making them larger to dodge acrobatically so quick.

[b]Iron Armor [A-Tier]:[/b] Guaiwu manipulates the iron in his body to coat his body in an A-Tier layer of iron that will protect him against A-Tier damage.

[b]Arm Catapult [A-Tier]:[/b] Guaiwu grabs a target with his right arm with A-Tier grasping that requires A-Tier strength to escape and throws tbe target 20m far with A-Tier strength.

[b]Man Disarmed [A-Tier]:[/b] Guaiwu lunges for a weapon of a close target with lightning speed and pries it out of their hands with A-Tier strength force, throwing it aside 15m far.