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1 8 Starters. on 09/06/18, 02:40 am

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Rat Rope
Tier: D
Class: Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a minimum of 30 rats, occupies the use of the tail of the rats, each rat add 15cm to the rope length. The cue is pointing his pointer fingers together, then separated for scaling. Direction can be determined manually or by pointing.
Scaling: Range (up to more 5M per 10 stamina)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 10
Description:

    His rats stack up and form a line, using their tails to fasten to the body of the rat behind them, forming a rope of at least 5M long. The rope is sturdy enough to support 8's body weight across the entire distance of the rat rope.


Rat Tunnel
Tier: D
Class: Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a minimum of 10 rats working together, digging at d-tier speeds. With ten additional rats, the tunnel can be completed at a speed comparable to a dog running with their digging.
The rats requires a gesture to determine direction. The cue is a whistle of specific note and adjustable length for scaling.
Scaling: Range (up to 10M per 10 Stamina)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 10
Description:

    A group of rats work together to create a tunnel into the ground measuring 3M in diameter, up to 10M long.


Rat Platform aka Rat-Form
Tier: D
Class: Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a minimum of 40 rats, occupies the use of the tail of the rats. The cue is a single palm face down, then swiping his hand to determine scaling.
Scaling: Speed (1 additional rank of speed per 10 stamina)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 10
Description:

    The rat make a mobile platform about 4 SQ M, where he can stand or lay on, also works on water, by allowing the rats on the end use their tails as propellers. They travel in sync at D-tier speed.


Rat Tail Whip
Tier: D
Class: Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The rat must coil its tail before attacking. The cue is a snap, and the scaling cue is the motion of the wrist.
Scaling: Damage (1 additional rank of damage per 10 stamina)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 10
Description:

    A rat curls its tail into a coil and then whips it out at an enemy at a length of 30 cm for D-tier damage.


Rat Trap Slip
Tier: C
Class: Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires at least least 10 rats. Takes 1 minute per meter per detection rank. The cue is forming a circle with his thumbs and pointers, and separating them for distance and the time held for scale.
Scaling: Rank (Detects Traps at 1 additional rank higher.)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 20
Description:

    Ten rats separate in a radius of .5M around Alexander and go searching for mechanical traps up to D-tier, using their whiskers to identify shapes and snoot sense to separate traps from their camouflage. They travel out up to a 10M radius, and set off D-tier traps with their tail. When scaled, a single rat waits besides each trap.



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2 Re: 8 Starters. on 12/06/18, 12:17 am

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Rat Tunnel: What about this takes two seconds per meter? We don't use actual speed measurements for abilities. Also for the shape of the tunnel, it would be better to describe it as 3m wide in diameter to make it certain that it's round.

Rat Tail Whip: You need to include the damage of the attack in the description of the attack.


Rat Trap Slip: FOr this ability I'm gonna need clarification on some things. First, what is the radius in which the rats form when they surround you at first? Also if they're going to set off certain traps it would have to be traps of the abilities tier, so it would only bust D-tier traps. And what do you mean in the abilties description when you say D-tier bait?


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3 Re: 8 Starters. on 12/06/18, 09:14 am

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Bump. Thanks for the tips.


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4 Re: 8 Starters. on 13/06/18, 01:39 am

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For rat tunnel, if you want to focus on the speed you can put in the description that the rats dig at moderate speeds, comparable to a dog running with their digging speed.


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5 Re: 8 Starters. on 13/06/18, 01:25 pm

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bump. Thanks.


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6 Re: 8 Starters. on 14/06/18, 11:06 am

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Just noticed that rat trip slip is missing its Tier letter, and you have the cost set up to be a D-tier but you already have four and have yet to make one of them your C-tier unless that was your intention for that ability. If so fix the appropriate tiers and costs for your abilities so you have your 4 dtiers and 1 ctier


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7 Re: 8 Starters. on 14/06/18, 12:19 pm

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Bump


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8 Re: 8 Starters. on 18/06/18, 10:28 pm

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Starters approved, fixed some wording issues and your cool downs for you.
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[center][b]Rat Rope[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a minimum of 30 rats, occupies the use of the tail of the rats, each rat add 15cm to the rope length. The cue is pointing his pointer fingers together, then separated for scaling. Direction can be determined manually or by pointing.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range (up to more 5M per 10 stamina)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
His rats stack up and form a line, using their tails to fasten to the body of the rat behind them, forming a rope of at least 5M long. The rope is sturdy enough to support 8's body weight across the entire distance of the rat rope.[/list]

[center][b]Rat Tunnel[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a minimum of 10 rats working together, digging at d-tier speeds. With ten additional rats, the tunnel can be completed at a speed comparable to a dog running with their digging.
The rats requires a gesture to determine direction. The cue is a whistle of specific note and adjustable length for scaling.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range (up to 10M per 10 Stamina)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A group of rats work together to create a tunnel into the ground measuring 3M in diameter, up to 10M long. [/list]

[center][b]Rat Platform aka Rat-Form[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a minimum of 40 rats, occupies the use of the tail of the rats. The cue is a single palm face down, then swiping his hand to determine scaling.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Speed (1 additional rank of speed per 10 stamina)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The rat make a mobile platform about 4 SQ M, where he can stand or lay on, also works on water, by allowing the rats on the end use their tails as propellers. They travel in sync at D-tier speed.[/list]

[center][b]Rat Tail Whip[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The rat must coil its tail before attacking. The cue is a snap, and the scaling cue is the motion of the wrist.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage (1 additional rank of damage per 10 stamina)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A rat curls its tail into a coil and then whips it out at an enemy at a length of 30 cm for D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Rat Trap Slip[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires at least least 10 rats. Takes 1 minute per meter per detection rank. The cue is forming a circle with his thumbs and pointers, and separating them for distance and the time held for scale.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Rank (Detects Traps at 1 additional rank higher.)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ten rats separate in a radius of .5M around Alexander and go searching for mechanical traps up to C-tier, using their whiskers to identify shapes and snoot sense to separate traps from their camouflage. They travel out up to a 10M radius, and set off C-tier traps with their tail. When scaled, a single rat waits besides each trap.[/list]


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