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1 Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 08:50 am

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Spring Hop
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
Scaling: Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
Description:

    By expanding and contracting her leg/foot muscles appropriately, Ahdia's leg begins snap and bend to her will. This leaves her with a much more animal-like leg, and a cloven-hoof as a foot.With this reconstructed limb, she is now able to able to use it to spring 5-meters in any direction. Upon the first leap, her reformed leg will go back to normal.


Guillotine Drop
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely. The user must also be airborne at the time.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
Description:

    Once airborne, Ahdia is able to transform the backside of her leg into a blade-like weapon. She will then raise her leg above her head, and attempt to slam it down into her target, dealing D-Tier slicing damage. Upon making contact with something, her reformed leg will go back to normal.


Sticky Bullet
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Head - The user must be given a small window of time to let the oil-like substance settle in their mouth.
Scaling: Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
Description:

    By temporarily changing the properties of her saliva, Ahdia is then able to transform it into a sticky oil-like substance. She will then proceed to fire a 60cm glob of it directly out of her mouth, launching it as far as 10-meters away. If hit dead-on by the bullet of oil, the target's body will then be covered with the sticky substance for a total duration of 1 post, unless scaled.


Snap Back
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and attempt to deliver a strong left/right hook to their opponent.
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
Description:

    By temporarily dislocating the joints in her arm, Ahdia attempts to deliver a strong left/right hook that extends slightly longer than her normal attacks, taking the enemy by surprise and dealing D-Tier damage in the process. After the attack is through, her joints will pop back into place.


Iron Reaver
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10 Stamina
Description:

    By constricting and honing the muscles in her fingertips, Ahdia is able to hone her nails into razor-sharp claws. These claws then allow Ahdia to deal C-Tier damage with them, and will last a total duration of 2 posts.


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[center][b]Spring Hop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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By expanding and contracting her leg/foot muscles appropriately, Ahdia's leg begins snap and bend to her will. This leaves her with a much more animal-like leg, and a cloven-hoof as a foot.With this reconstructed limb, she is now able to able to use it to spring 5-meters in any direction. Upon the first leap, her reformed leg will go back to normal.[/list]

[center][b]Guillotine Drop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely. The user must also be airborne at the time.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Once airborne, Ahdia is able to transform the backside of her leg into a blade-like weapon. She will then raise her leg above her head, and attempt to slam it down into her target, dealing D-Tier slicing damage. Upon making contact with something, her reformed leg will go back to normal. [/list]

[center][b]Sticky Bullet[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Head - The user must be given a small window of time to let the oil-like substance settle in their mouth.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By temporarily changing the properties of her saliva, Ahdia is then able to transform it into a sticky oil-like substance. She will then proceed to fire a 60cm glob of it directly out of her mouth, launching it as far as 10-meters away. If hit dead-on by the bullet of oil, the target's body will then be covered with the sticky substance for a total duration of 1 post, unless scaled.[/list]
 
[center][b]Snap Back[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and attempt to deliver a strong left/right hook to their opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By temporarily dislocating the joints in her arm, Ahdia attempts to deliver a strong left/right hook that extends slightly longer than her normal attacks, taking the enemy by surprise and dealing D-Tier damage in the process. After the attack is through, her joints will pop back into place.[/list]

[center][b]Iron Reaver[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By constricting and honing the muscles in her fingertips, Ahdia is able to hone her nails into razor-sharp claws. These claws then allow Ahdia to deal C-Tier damage with them, and will last a total duration of 2 posts.[/list]



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2 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 09:55 am

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These are ready to be looked at!


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3 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 11:55 am

These are pretty good so far, but there are a few things that need to be fixed.

Iron Reaver - From what I understand, this ability basically allows you to deal D-Tier damage on top of a basic attack...? First of all, you can't create D-Tiers abilities with dual types. You got to free up a C-Tier ability or above in order to do that.

Oil Bullet - This should be Offensive.

Friction Slap - Any time you use this ability, even if you haven't happened to have hit anything or anyone, you will receive damage equal to the damage you would deal. So if you scaled this ability once, you would receive C-TIer damage to your hands.


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4 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 12:07 pm

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Fixed, I think. I switched my C-Tier to Iron Reaver, instead of Friction Slap. Instead of receiving D-Tier damage each time I use it, it should only cause minor burns to me now, right? Also, I wasn't sure if the damage from Iron Reaver being on top of basic damage is okay, so I just left it as-is until you tell me otherwise. ^^


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5 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 05:02 pm

The burns are what causes the damage, so no, you would still receive damage.
As for Iron Reaver, I'm going to say no, you can't stack the damage. I mean, if you performed a basic attack then you did Iron Reaver, it would be fine, but you can't do them simultaneously.


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6 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 05:29 pm

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Alright, I think I'm done?


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7 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 09:05 pm

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I decided to just change the following skills to the following, hopefully they are more acceptable.

Oil Bullet --> Sticky Bullet
Friction Slap --> Snap Back


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8 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 09:45 pm

Keep in mind you would get burned even if you didn't successfully ignite something.


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9 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 19/06/17, 10:06 pm

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I decided to scrap that concept, for now. If you could grade my new ones, that'd be great. ^.^


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10 Re: Ahdia's Starting Abilities on 20/06/17, 04:06 am

Approved
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[center][b]Spring Hop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By expanding and contracting her leg/foot muscles appropriately, Ahdia's leg begins snap and bend to her will. This leaves her with a much more animal-like leg, and a cloven-hoof as a foot.With this reconstructed limb, she is now able to able to use it to spring 5-meters in any direction. Upon the first leap, her reformed leg will go back to normal.[/list]

[center][b]Guillotine Drop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Leg - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely. The user must also be airborne at the time.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Once airborne, Ahdia is able to transform the backside of her leg into a blade-like weapon. She will then raise her leg above her head, and attempt to slam it down into her target, dealing D-Tier slicing damage. Upon making contact with something, her reformed leg will go back to normal. [/list]

[center][b]Sticky Bullet[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Head - The user must be given a small window of time to let the oil-like substance settle in their mouth.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By temporarily changing the properties of her saliva, Ahdia is then able to transform it into a sticky oil-like substance. She will then proceed to fire a 60cm glob of it directly out of her mouth, launching it as far as 10-meters away. If hit dead-on by the bullet of oil, the target's body will then be covered with the sticky substance for a total duration of 1 post, unless scaled.[/list]
 
[center][b]Snap Back[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and attempt to deliver a strong left/right hook to their opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By temporarily dislocating the joints in her arm, Ahdia attempts to deliver a strong left/right hook that extends slightly longer than her normal attacks, taking the enemy by surprise and dealing D-Tier damage in the process. After the attack is through, her joints will pop back into place.[/list]

[center][b]Iron Reaver[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Arm - The user must endure minor discomfort, and be given enough time to transform the limb entirely.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By constricting and honing the muscles in her fingertips, Ahdia is able to hone her nails into razor-sharp claws. These claws then allow Ahdia to deal C-Tier damage with them, and will last a total duration of 2 posts.[/list]


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