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1 A.styx's starters on 12/09/16, 04:26 pm

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Limb Growth
Tier: C Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplamentary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Takes One post per limb growth or shrinking.
Scaling: 20 Per post
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 2 Stamina
Description:

    The user can grow his limb up to 3 meters larger than it's original length or width, his limbs grow within one post, causes.The appearance should not be altered during transaction.

    The scaling cost for this is a 20 stamina scaling cost per post, the user's hand is able to grow a extra meter from it's original size.


Claw Release
Tier: D Tier
Class: Body Manipulation
Type: Supplamentary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must be within range to stab the enemy
Scaling: 0
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina
Description:

    User grows claws that may stretch up to .5 of a foot in length and up to a inch in width, they cut with a strength of D tier and have a durability of D tier.


Abscond
Tier: D Tier
Class: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Solid footing
Scaling: 0
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 stamina
Description:

    User uses the strength within his/her legs to jump up to 3 meters backwards in one direction.



Last edited by A.Styx on 15/09/16, 11:30 am; edited 2 times in total

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2 Re: A.styx's starters on 12/09/16, 06:10 pm

Duquin

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You get 5 starters total, one of which is C-tier.

General Edits:
You put "0" for the scaling on all of these. But that section is supposed to be for a scaling type. For example, damage scaling(increase the tier of damage you deal or block by one tier for every 10 magoi invested). You pick the type of scaling you want the ability to have.

Limb Growth:
You list this as offensive, but there is no attack described. Sounds more supplementary to me.

Lose the durability buff or the limb growth. Can't have both on a D-tier ability.

Claw Release:
Once again this ability sounds more supplementary than offensive. The reason why is that the description only depict creating the claws. It doesn't explain a specific attack with them. So with the current wording it essentially is a damage buff for your basic attacks.


Abscond:
Remove mention of blocking or avoiding while airborne. That stuff isn't really related to the ability.

You can alter this so you can jump in any direction if you wish.

Decrease 5m down to 3m.


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3 Re: A.styx's starters on 12/09/16, 06:27 pm

A.Styx

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4 Re: A.styx's starters on 15/09/16, 11:31 am

A.Styx

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Edited, added a scaling ability to C tier ability

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5 Re: A.styx's starters on 15/09/16, 08:17 pm

Duquin

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You're killing me, Styx Sad

"20 per post" is not a type of scaling. Please read the ability systems page and familiarize yourself with the different types of scaling. Scaling is always based on intervals of 10 magoi investments and for each 10 magoi invested, some aspect of your ability is improved.

But you don't calculate how much magoi is being invested during the approval process. You only list the type of scaling(what aspect of your ability is improved and by how much with each scaling investment). Then in a thread, you will chose whether or not to use scaling and how high you wish to scale it. Then you calculate how much extra magoi/stamina the scaling you added costs and you add that to the base cost of your ability in order to get the total cost.

If you are still having trouble understanding this, please pm me to ask questions about scaling.




Once you have a better grasp on scaling, please add a scaling type to each of your abilities.


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