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Noah's Starting Abilities [Finished]

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Noah

Noah
C-Tier
C-Tier

Name: Flora Resurgence
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters + 5 meters every post after
Duration: 3 Post
Cool-Down: 4 Post
Description: Noah causes all flora in the area around him to grow at an accelerated rate as well as allowing plants to live even in areas that would be impossible (extreme heat or extreme cold) This will only work in areas that is not being currently effected by magic to change the temperatures only naturally occurring places. Through this spell he can grow nearly any plant known to man minus those that are poisonus. This is a useful spell for getting plants to make food with or even minor healing medicines(should be noted that plants used for healing will not actually heal in any sort of combat like thread more so for casual situations) This can cause already existing plants to double in size every post and just makes those that he grows only 1.5x their normal size. These plants cannot be used for direct defense but can cause obstacles (ex: makes trees that make running in a direct line more difficult or lots of ivy that can trip people) All the plants he makes can be killed by any D tier attack.

Name: Life Assessment  
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary sensing
Range: Within a 10 meter range
Duration: Single Post
Cool-Down: 3 Post
Description: Noah will be able to tell the conditions of the life forms in a certain area. This means he can see where damage is to that area as well as the cause of such damage. While this magic is mainly used to help sense damage and treat others it also allows him to sense those in that 10 meter radius as longas the person is not using an ability that concels their presence that is C rank or higher.

Name: Gravity Lift, Stage 1
Tier: C
Cost: 20 on cast; 10 sustain
Element: Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

Name: Rosary Spores
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Element: Life
Class: Offensive/ Supplmentary status effecting
Range: 20 meters
Duration: 2 Post
Cool-Down: 5 Post
Description: Noah slams his staff into the ground causing a reddish mist to form. This red mist is actually mini spores that hold to compounds of the Rosary Pea, a deadly plant that will cause extreme vomiting in those that inhale it. While ingesting a real rosary pea can cause death these spores will only make an enemy vomit uncontrollably for two post dealing D tier internal organ damage but will cause them to pretty much be to incapacitated for those post due to constantly throwing up. These spores will cover a 20 meter radius at a speed of 15 m/s.The spores blow away from Noah so that he is not effected if a wind base spell C tier or higher is used on it it can either blow the spores away completely or blow them at Noah causing him to get sick himself.

Name: Caladium Garden
Tier: B
Cost: 30
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: instant
Cool-Down: 6 Post
Description: Noah will wave his staff around causing a flurry of green and pinkish red flower petals to appear. These petals from the plant known as caladium or more commonly known as the angle’s wings. The petals will cover a 30 meter radius. The petals will activate their deadly side effects when a person touches the petals. The petals will cause the lungs of a person to instantly take B tiered damage making it extremely difficult to breathe or do any strainous activity. These spread over the 30 meter radius at a speed of 20 m/s. The petals can be blown away compeltely by a B rank wind base ability or even blown back at Noah causing him harm. Attacks melee base are useless against this spell unless they have an armor like effect all other attacks B rank or above will destroy this spell.



Last edited by Noah on 03/03/14, 11:21 pm; edited 16 times in total

Noah

Noah
C-Tier
C-Tier

Alrighty my starting abilities are finished and ready to be checked!

Taiyo

Taiyo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Flora Resurgence:

- How big can these plants grow? Nice spell.

- Lower cool down to 2, since it's a D rank, and supplementary.

- Please state that this can't be used as a defense to make things clearer/ :3

Life Assessment Approved.

Gravity Lift Approved.

Rosary Spells Approved. Haha. Funny spell.

Caladium Garden:

- 1 Spell of equal or higher ranked can cancel

Bump When Done.

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Rosary Spores: I don't really see how a D rank spell should have such a large range and leave anyone who breaths it in completely incapacitated for two turns. You also don't explain how your own character isn't affected by these spores meaning you would be threatened by its effects just as much as anyone around you. That kind of makes casting this in a 20m radius a personal death sentence as you'd be at the epicenter of all these spores.

-Please change the range or the severity of the spores(A D rank paralysis effect should only affect one limb. 2 turn Incapacitation is just unfair)

-Please add in something that explains how you aren't affected. Maybe the spores swirl around you giving you a sort of "eye" in the storm?

Caladium Garden: This spell is godmod as it instantly causes B tier internal damage. Change it so the hit isn't instant and there is some chance for your opponent to react.

Noah

Noah
C-Tier
C-Tier

Added the stuff Tayio, Yaku rosery spores dont stun they just make it a challenge to do anything since you are throwing up and they are a C tier spell and follow the C tier abilty guidlines. Added that the spells can hurt me if I'm touched. As for the final spell it doesnt autohit at all. If you are touched it deals damage C tierr just to the inside of the body rather than the outside. Honestly if a B tier ability hit the area on the body where the lungs were located it would deal worse damage since it would rip the skin and shatter the chest plate causing bone shards to just stab it over and over and over along with the heart and all that jazz.

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

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