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Stop the Beast (new job)

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1Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 12:04 pm

Killua

Killua
D-Tier
D-Tier

Job Name: Stop the Beast
Job Rank: C-Tier
Job Location: Magnostadt
Job Rewards: 100 XP + 7000 Huang
Job Prerequisites: N/A
Job Overview: A once tamed beast has killed its master and is now free and causing chaos in Magnostadt. Two magicians have been tasked with the job of taking the rampant creature down before it hurts anyone else.

Enemy:

Enemy Name: Talon
Rank: C-Tier
Needed damage to take down: B-Tier
Description: This creature is a small bear-like beast with think, strong fur. The fur is covered by a heat resistant substance. The substance turns Talon's fur dark brown. The creature also has sharp claws and long fangs. This animal can deal C-tier damage
Abilities:
Weak Heat Resistance:Talon's fur can ignore most D-tier damage.

Afterimage: Talon can create an afterimage to either escape or attack. One he uses Afterimage it can not be used again for three posts.



Last edited by Killua on 20/03/15, 12:27 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Re: Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 12:19 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Under Description of the enemy, you must have the amount of base damage the creature can do (in this case, it would be C-tier damage)

For a single enemy in a job, the amount of damage to take the enemy down must be double the tier of the job (in this case, it would need to take B-tier damage to defeat)

The passive on the creature must be more specific, something like "Ignores D-tier heat damage", the creature should also have at least 1 active ability.

Would this job be repeatable or reserved as a 1 time only job?

3Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Re: Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 12:28 pm

Killua

Killua
D-Tier
D-Tier

Fixed.

4Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Re: Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 01:22 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

you never specified if it was repeatable or a 1 time only deal, so I am making it reserved for you and Riku. I also fit the enemy to more specific abilities. If the changes are acceptable, please bump.

Code:
[b]Job Name:[/b] Stop the Beast [Reserved]
[b]Job Rank:[/b] C
[b]Job Location:[/b] Magnostadt
[b]Job Rewards:[/b] 100 XP/7,000 Huang
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] N/A
[b]Job Overview:[/b] A once-tamed beast has killed its master and is now free and causing chaos in Magnostadt. Two magicians have been tasked with the job of taking the rampant creature down before it hurts anyone else.

[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Talon
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] B
[b]Description:[/b] This creature is a small bear-like beast with think, strong fur. The fur is covered by a heat resistant substance which turns Talon's fur dark brown. The creature deals C-tier damage with its sharp claws and long fangs and moves at 7 m/s.
[b]Abilities:[/b]
[i]Weak Heat Resistance[/i] - Talon's fur can ignore D-tier heat damage.

[i]Afterimage[/i] - Talon moves at 15 m/s to dodge an attack, creating an afterimage. 3 post cool-down.



Last edited by Ariella Negri on 20/03/15, 01:24 pm; edited 1 time in total

5Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Re: Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 01:24 pm

Killua

Killua
D-Tier
D-Tier

Oh, sorry. This a one time job. Everything else is great.

6Stop the Beast (new job) Empty Re: Stop the Beast (new job) 20/03/15, 01:25 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

jpb approved, will be posted shortly

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