Lance's spell training II

Name: Flaming Strike
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
Element: Fire
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: A bright light emits from Lances staff as he swing it through the air, swing utilizes the heat in the air in order to cause a crescent like flame shoot out from the staff. The flame is about 10 meters in diameter and travels at 15 m/s. It deals C-tier damage and creates 2nd degree burns to his opponents.

Name: Flame Burst
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
Element: Fire
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description:A bright light emits from the orb on Lance's staff and a burst of flames comes out. The burst is a flamethrower like attack and has a 10m long, 2 meters wide and 3 meters tall. The flame burst flies at the enemy at 15 m/s and tries to engulf them in flames. If they get engulfed it causes 2nd degree burns to numerous parts of the opponent's body.

Name: Combustion
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
Element: Fire
Class: Supplementary
Range: Single Person
Duration: 2 Posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He has to cast the spell multiple times in order to use it on more than one ally and it moves towards the ally at 15 m/s. The allies attacks now cause first degree burns and a D-rank damage when they hit an enemy with their weapon.

Name: Flame Hit
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
Element: Fire
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: A bright red light flashes from his staff as a snake like flame comes out from the staff and tires to strike the opponent. The flame travels at speeds of 15 m/s and it is 10 meters long and 5 meters in width. The flame causes 2nd degree burns to the part of the body it strikes and and causes C-tier damage. It disappears after it strikes.

Name: Fiery Aura
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi / 10 Sustained
Element: Fire
Class: Offensive
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: Lance conjures a bubble of heat 15 cm from his skin that spreads in a 5-10 meter around him, dealing C-tier fire damage to anything within it. If sustained, the user may use this ability again or reform it.

Durations are how long abilities last for. This can be listed only as 'Instant', '1 post' or 'sustained'. No other word/number should be posted here. The duration is not how long the ability lasts, but how long it can be used for. Instant duration is as soon as you use the ability. One post duration is throughout the post. Sustained duration is re-using it over the course of several posts.

That last thing to keep in mind about sustained abilities are their cool-down amounts. When you sustain a D or C-Tier ability, it will have an additional cool-down timer. Filling this part out for D-Tier should say '2 posts or sustain+1', and filling it out for a C-Tier should say '3 posts or sustain+1'. You will use whichever cool-down is larger.


Scale is in diameter. Intelligence maximum scale ability for a C-Tier is 10 meters. Make sure to fix all of your abilities with the incorrect scale mentioned (20 meters and 15 meters):
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2486-ability-guidelines-important#11816


Firey Aura:
This is about as close to defensive as I've ever seen. If you changed it to 'forces flames and fire away from his body', it would work like regular clashing rules. What this ability is trying to do atm is change the systems rules.


Combustion:
This needs a number of allies, based on Amount for C-tier. You need to put in a travel speed from which it moves from you to them. You will also need to put in the actual tier of damage that it adds to the weapon (Ex.: D-Tier, since you have it on multiple allies for this ability.)

Yeah Bump... Sorry it took so long.

I was wondering what to do about Fiery Aura... I sort of took a chance with it so if it wont work that's perfectly fine by me. So is there anyway that I can maybe fix it so that it works or do I just get rid of it over all and think of a new ability?

You didn't fix any of the durations like I asked, so I fixed them below.


Flaming Strike: By only providing 1 measurement (Diameter) you have made this ability a sphere and not a crescent strike. Even if it says crescent, the result will be a sphere. Just an fyi, if you choose to retain the wording how it is.

Flame Burst: You only provide 1 measurement, which is length. You'll need width and height, or diameter, as well as the length.

Firey Aura: I reworded it so that you could have it work similarly to how you wanted it to before; it will clash with anything that it comes in contact with and follow normal clashing rules.

Combustion: Reworded it so that it would deal damage. If you simply want to change the type of damage it would deal, it would be supplementary. If it actually allows something to deal damage, it would be offensive. Increased its effectiveness to C-tier.

Flame Hit: You only have 1 dimension for size on the snake. How large, in diameter, is it?


The below are ready for training if you are okay with them:

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[b]Name:[/b] Flaming Strike
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright light emits from Lances staff as he swing it through the air, swing utilizes the heat in the air in order to cause a crescent like flame shoot out from the staff. The flame is about 10 meters in diameter and travels at 15 m/s. It deals C-tier damage and creates 2nd degree burns to his opponents.

[b]Name:[/b] Fiery Aura
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi / 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Using the Magoi around him, Lance starts radiates and pushes heat/fire away from him at 15 m/s, dealing C-tier  fire damage to anything within 50 cm of his body.

[b]Name:[/b] Combustion
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He has to cast the spell multiple times in order to use it on more than one ally and it moves towards the ally at 15 m/s. The allies next attack that lands or clashes deals an additional C-rank damage through flames.

fixed

Approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Flaming Strike
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright light emits from Lances staff as he swing it through the air, swing utilizes the heat in the air in order to cause a crescent like flame shoot out from the staff. The flame is about 10 meters in diameter and travels at 15 m/s. It deals C-tier damage and creates 2nd degree burns to his opponents.

[b]Name:[/b] Flame Burst
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]A bright light emits from the orb on Lance's staff and a burst of flames comes out. The burst is a flamethrower like attack and has a 10m long, 2 meters wide and 3 meters tall. The flame burst flies at the enemy at 15 m/s and tries to engulf them in flames. If they get engulfed it causes 2nd degree burns to numerous parts of the opponent's body.

[b]Name:[/b] Combustion
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Single Person
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He has to cast the spell multiple times in order to use it on more than one ally and it moves towards the ally at 15 m/s. The allies attacks now cause first degree burns and a D-rank damage when they hit an enemy with their weapon.

[b]Name:[/b] Flame Hit
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from his staff as a snake like flame comes out from the staff and tires to strike the opponent. The flame travels at speeds of 15 m/s and it is 10 meters long and 5 meters in width. The flame causes 2nd degree burns to the part of the body it strikes and and causes C-tier damage. It disappears after it strikes.

Adjusted the wording of fiery aura and made the scale 5-10 meters. You can make it smaller if you would like. Edit and bump when you are done.

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[b]Name:[/b] Fiery Aura
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi / 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Lance conjures a bubble of heat 15 cm from his skin that spreads in a 5-10 meter around him, dealing C-tier fire damage to anything within it. If sustained, the user may use this ability again or reform it.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t3952-the-way-of-a-wizard-training#22123

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[b]Name:[/b] Flaming Strike
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright light emits from Lances staff as he swing it through the air, swing utilizes the heat in the air in order to cause a crescent like flame shoot out from the staff. The flame is about 10 meters in diameter and travels at 15 m/s. It deals C-tier damage and creates 2nd degree burns to his opponents.

Trained and complete

Approved ^^ Add to your vault~`

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t3952-the-way-of-a-wizard-training#22548

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[b]Name:[/b] Flame Burst
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]A bright light emits from the orb on Lance's staff and a burst of flames comes out. The burst is a flamethrower like attack and has a 10m long, 2 meters wide and 3 meters tall. The flame burst flies at the enemy at 15 m/s and tries to engulf them in flames. If they get engulfed it causes 2nd degree burns to numerous parts of the opponent's body.

Trained and Complete

Approved~ Add to your vault.

Your wordcount is 493 words long and it needs to 500 so please edit so you reach the amount.

Hmmm the word counter said it was like 510. sorry about that, my bad xD

Approved, add to your vault.

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[b]Name:[/b] Combustion
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Single Person
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He has to cast the spell multiple times in order to use it on more than one ally and it moves towards the ally at 15 m/s. The allies attacks now cause first degree burns and a D-rank damage when they hit an enemy with their weapon.

training approved by voucher, add to vault~
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p90-ability-vouchers#25393

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[b]Name:[/b] Flame Hit
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from his staff as a snake like flame comes out from the staff and tires to strike the opponent. The flame travels at speeds of 15 m/s and it is 10 meters long and 5 meters in width. The flame causes 2nd degree burns to the part of the body it strikes and and causes C-tier damage. It disappears after it strikes.

[b]Name:[/b] Fiery Aura
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi / 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Using the Magoi around him, Lance starts radiates and pushes heat/fire away from him at 15 m/s, dealing C-tier  fire damage to anything within 50 cm of his body.