GOD BLESS MY SWORD

Tier: A
Djinn: Gremory
Theme: Gravity
Type: Offensive / Warrior
Range: long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahanghir must be in full equip and flood his wings with magoi while performing the attack
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 10 stamina | 10 magoi
Description:
With a burst of magoi and stamina Jahanghir unfurls his wings propelling himself at blinding speeds in any direction up to 10 meters while swinging his weapon equip to deliver 8 or more lightning fast strikes to his target which seem to land virtually simultaneously. These strikes deal D tier damage each and scale with Jahanghir's weapons and abilities.


Tier: A
Djinn: Gremory
Theme: Gravity
Type: Offensive
Range: long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahangir must be in full djinn equip and reach out towards or touch his target
Scaling: CRUSH! - Scaling will add an instance of A tier damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Jahangir reaches forward and with a grabbing motion and manipulates his djinn passive and aura grabbing hold of any object within the passive or up to 10 meters away from his aura with A tier strength and crushing them with the force of sheer gravity dealing an instance of A tier damage.  This ability moves at A tier speeds.



Tier: A
Djinn: Gremory
Theme: Gravity
Type: Offensive
Range: long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahangir must be in full djinn equip and reach out towards or touch his target
Scaling: hits- Jahanghir can create an additional vortex
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Jahanghir  reaches forward at a target with an open palm and concentrates his magoi and auras around his hand forming it into a cyclone of gravitational forces. This cyclone creates a maelstrom vortex in the shape of an invisible cone, 7 centimeters wide at the tip, and up to 10 meters wide at it's base. With a length of 1-40 meters.

The physical structure of anything caught within this cyclone will be warped and obliterated by the maelstrom of gravitational forces dealing A tier damage.


Tier: A
Djinn: Gremory x WARRIOR
Theme: Gravity
Type: Offensive
Range: medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahangir must be in full djinn equip and swing his weapon at his target
Scaling: hits- Jahanghir can multiply the amount of Hits performed
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 10 magoi l 10 Stamina
Description: Jahanghir concentrates his magoi and auras around his weapon vessel, coating it in a near invisible gravitational field 7 meters thick all around.

Jahanghir then swings his weapon vessel  in any direction at incredible speeds up to 4 times dealing D tier damage that lands virtuously simultaneously.

Gremoria Enchanted:
-Seems unfinished, I only see B-tier total worth of potency being expressed in the effect.
-Swinging the sword is something done after the ability has begun based on the description. So there should be something else as its requirement.

You know what, Ill just drop the last one Duq unless you have any better ideas

Very well, all but the last one 1/2 approved:

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[center][b]Heartless Angel[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Djinn:[/b] Gremory
[b]Theme:[/b] Gravity
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Warrior
[b]Range:[/b] long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jahanghir must be in full equip and flood his wings with magoi while performing the attack
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
With a burst of magoi and stamina Jahanghir unfurls his wings propelling himself at blinding speeds in any direction up to 10 meters while swinging his weapon equip to deliver 8 or more lightning fast strikes to his target which seem to land virtually simultaneously. These strikes deal D tier damage each and scale with Jahanghir's weapons and abilities.


[center][b]Dark Claw[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Djinn:[/b] Gremory
[b]Theme:[/b] Gravity
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jahangir must be in full djinn equip and reach out towards or touch his target
[b]Scaling:[/b] CRUSH! - Scaling will multiply the instances of A tier damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Jahangir reaches forward and with a grabbing motion and manipulates his djinn passive and aura grabbing hold of any object within the passive or up to 10 meters away from his aura with A tier strength and crushing them with the force of sheer gravity dealing an instance of A tier damage.  This ability moves at A tier speeds.



[center][b]Gremoria  Exorcism[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Djinn:[/b] Gremory
[b]Theme:[/b] Gravity
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jahangir must be in full djinn equip and reach out towards or touch his target
[b]Scaling:[/b] hits- Jahanghir can multiply the amount of vortices
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Jahanghir  reaches forward at a target with an open palm and concentrates his magoi and auras around his hand forming it into a cyclone of gravitational forces. This cyclone creates a maelstrom vortex in the shape of an invisible cone, 7 centimeters wide at the tip, and up to 10 meters wide at it's base. With a length of 1-40 meters.

The physical structure of anything caught within this cyclone will be warped and obliterated by the maelstrom of gravitational forces dealing A tier damage.


change the scaling of dark claw, theres no multiplication scaling. in the description, you either want to immobilize them with the gravitational force or go for damage. If so, make it more clear as to which you are going for.

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Gremoria Exorcism - drop the extra words on the scaling and just leave it to hits.

Scalings are edited. Creation Review has everything else.

We will stick here for any official communication regarding your abilities.

Unfortunately, this is the current decision at this time. You can either stick with the A-tier damage aspect, the A-tier immobility aspect, or split it down the middle with B-tier ability damage and B-tier based immobility (3 limbs for 3 posts). The mentioning of A-tier strength is the issue, you're adding a comparative tier to the act of holding a target in place, there's no need to mention that. You're also putting a comparative speed to it when there's no need for this ability in question to have a speed attached to it. By leaving it the way that it is, I am unable to approve this ability at this time.