Longzufu A-Tier Dragon

• Please specify how long his tail is, please.
  
• Your wording for his wings make it seem like they're Mr. Potato parts that detach and then reattach. Can you please clarify this part so it's less confusing?
  
• The first paragraph describes Longzufu as an Elder Dragon. Please remove Elder as Longzufu is a dragon (old, but still a dragon).
  
• For Gale Velocity, you can't have A-tier speeds for both running and flying. You need to choose one or the other. I think that running would be the best considering that Longzufu is going to spend more time connected to the earth than in the air.
  
• For Seismic Sense, can you clarify how Longzufu exactly predicts and senses the vibrations? For example, is it like Toph from ATLA where she can "see" with the vibrations? Or can Longfuzu just tell that something is there based on the vibrations and the "weight" behind the vibrations?
  
• In Terraforming Crystal World, you need to state that D-tier damage will destroy the crystals (since they're D-tier crystals). Also, these crystals will fall apart after 2 posts of being created. I know this is a bit of a nitpick, but can you replace p.t with post?
  
• As it is, Geokinetic Regeneration cannot work. How can eating some rocks heal Longzufu? The only way this could work is if Longzufu was made from crystals and actively replaced damaged parts of his body with the crystals.
  
• For Crystal Force, you can only cut up to half the cost of an ability. (ex: you can only supplement 5 stamina for a D-tier ability, 10 for a C-tier, etc etc).
  

• 4m out of his 7m length or just the tail alone is 4m? Also, update Longzufu to include this information.
  
• Alright, that should be fine.
  
• Fluff matters on the site, so we can't allow you to call Longzufu an Elder dragon due to its connotation.
  
• Alright, considering how precise this would be, it's too powerful for a D-tier trait. The other staff and I have agreed on different options you could take with this trait if you do wish to keep it.
  
  
  
  • You shorten the range to 5m above ground and 10m below for precise vibration tracking.
    
  • You keep the 10-15m range, but the sense isn't as strong as Toph's. This means that Longzufu can only tell from which direction the vibrations are coming from. He also cannot tell exactly what is making the vibrations (he can tell the difference between a human and a squirrel, but he can't tell a difference between one human to another unless one is 300 lbs and the other is 120 lbs).
    
  • You keep the 10-15m range with precise vibration tracking (similar to Toph's), but Longzufu is blind in return.
    
  
  
• It disappears as to keep it fair. A lot of these things have timers, so naturally, so would your crystals. For an ic explanation, due to the fact that they just form at Longzufu's presence with the ground, they naturally begin to crumble away after 5 posts (the limit is increased for fairness) because they aren't reinforced like crystals produced by abilities.
  
• Furthermore, delete the information "With the area that Longzufu is in with each passing post (including other pc's/npc's), the amount of crystal material that's produced is a D rank worth of crystal" and "Every two post of the turn player that hold's control of longzufu has passed , +5 meters of crystal created by terraforming is dispersed." Instead, replace it with something along the lines of: "For every post Longzufu spends on the ground (during his tamer's post), D-tier worth of crystal is produce" and "Five posts (of the Beast Tamer's posts) after the creation of the crystal, they crumble into a state that leaves them useless".
  
• When a single instance of D-tier crystal is destroyed, that means you lose 5m.
  
• Terraforming - Crystal World - state that whenever you increase the range of an ability with this trait, the crystals used for it disappear afterward.
  
• As per the agreement between you and Merr, Geokinetic Regeneration can register abilities where damaged flesh is replaced with Crystal.
  

• I just counted your traits and you have 16 worth of trait points. Either remove a D-tier trait or reduce the tier of one of your A-tier traits.
  
• On Seismic Sense, please remove "The Longzufu is able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through physical contact with the ground, enabling him to perceive their surroundings as precisely as second sight" and mentions of anticipating movements. This is a D-tier trait, which means that it isn't that powerful. You need to also clarify that Longzufu can't tell the difference between two similar creatures (ex: a human and another human) unless they're massively different. One last thing that is to be noted is that your Seismic Sense won't sense anyone using hiding traits or abilities that are higher than D-tier.
  
• On Terraforming, there needs to be some sort of decent contact between Longzufu and the ground. You can't have the tip of his tail touch the ground and have it count. It instead needs to be at least all four feet on the ground for a "minute" or so.
  
• "This does not count towards the crystals that are integrated into techniques for the increase of range, that is calculated normally." This needs to go. If the crystals are used, they instantly crumble. If they receive D-tier damage, they are destroyed and therefore unusable. Please edit the trait to reflect this.
  
• For Wing Digger, Longzufu can also dig to 15m below the surface. This means that after 10m, he can no longer sense vibrations. Also, due to his size and speed, Longzufu will cause noticeable tremors in the ground whenever he digs and it'll leave tunnels. Additionally, please explain how riders are safe whenever he's digging. If he's digging underground, you're not going to be safe on top of him.
  
• Upon further revision, due to the fact that this is a D-tier trait, please replace half with a third. Furthermore, you will only be able to shave off up to 50 stamina per thread. Please state this in the trait.
  
• I realize that it grows like grass, Lagi. But I want to know how high up they go vertically. Can they grow on top of each other? Also, please know that if you dig and hit your own crystal, it'll shatter.
  
• You made an error in Geokinetic Regeration. "Most of the healing would involve the replacement missing flesh with those crystals or it's recoating of crystals... This does not include the healing of missing organs or flesh." Please fix this (also, all of the healing is replacing the missing crystal parts of Longzufu, not actual fleshy-flesh). Also, clarify what you mean "the recoating of crystals"? Do you mean the crystals that cover Longzufu's body? If so, they don't act defensive in nature, so you wouldn't need to include the recoating bit.
  

Name: Longzufu
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Normal
Species: Jade Dragon
Appearance:
Hard specs-  Height: 5m, length: 7m, wingspan: 9m, tail: 4 meters

Longzufu takes on a more menacing form than most dragons. Fierce blazing eyes set high within the creature's long, horned skull, which gives the creature a rather menacing looking appearance. Several enormous crystal growths sit atop its head, just above its short, cat-like ears. A row of small crystal growths runs down the sides of each of its jawlines. Its nose has two enormous, warped nostrils and there's a small crystal growth on its chin. Several rows of sharp teeth poke out from the side of its mouth and reveal only a fraction of the terror hiding inside.

A long neck runs down from its head and into a slim body. The top is covered in warped scales and a row of small fan-like growths runs down its spine. Its bottom is covered in coarse skin and is colored much darker than the rest of its body. Four massive limbs carry its body and allow the creature to stand graceful and sturdy. Each limb has 4 digits, each of which ends in massive talons seemingly made of the hardest cut Jade that you ever were seen.

Magnificent wings grow to start from just below its shoulders and end at its hips. The wings are almost butterfly-like, a specialized layer of seemingly color-changing skin from emerald to sage, to makes up most of the wing and jagged edges at the bottom almost give it a feathered look. From the way the wings look, they take on the appearance of shovels of some sort, signifying their purpose of digging.

It's wide tail ends in a mace-like growth and is covered in the same warped scales as its body.

Personality- There's more than meets the eye in the case of Longzufu but if nothing else you should know he's insightful and discreet. Of course, he's also honorable, aspiring and independent, but far less strongly and often mixed with being pedantic as well.

His insight though, this is what he's pretty much known for.  Nobody's perfect of course and Longzufu has rotten moods and days too. His narcissistic nature and hatred don't make for the greatest company, both personally and for others. Fortunately, his discretion is usually there to soften the blows, and he remains open-minded about the ability of human nature being able to change, even if for personal beliefs alone.

Beast Traits:
Trait Name: Land Demon
Trait Tier: A-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: Longzufu, as a dragon, is an apex predator. His body, large and powerful, can move at incredible speeds.
Trait Effect: This beast is capable of A-tier movement speeds (or the equivalent of a B-Tier fanalis) on the ground.

Trait Name: Seismic Sense
Trait Tier: D-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: Longzufu is a ground-based dragon and has developed a sense that allows him to feel vibrations through the earth.
Trait Effect: Longzufu can sense objects or creatures creating vibrations by moving across the earth. While contact on the ground (four legs touching the ground) he has a range of 5m which increases to 10m when completely submerged. Longzufu cannot tell the difference between two similar objects in weight (such as two humans) nor can he sense anything using traits or abilities above D-tier to hide. If Seismic Sense is used in a sandy or muddy environment, his sense becomes fuzzy and he cannot track precise location even when submerged. This trait cannot work in the snow due to it being an earth-based sense.

Trait Name: Crystal Manipulation
Trait Tier: D-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: As a Jade Dragon, Longzufu possesses the unique ability to create green crystals with his body.
Trait Effect: Longzufu can register abilities that revolve around the creation and manipulation of crystals. Crystals utilized with this technique crumble after a single use.

Trait Name: Terraforming - Crystal World
Trait Tier: A-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: Longzufu's presence and contact with the earth can cause a field of crystals to begin to grow around him. With the amount of material present, he can increase the range of his abilities.
Trait Effect: For every post of his tamer that Longzufu spends on the ground (all four feet must be on the ground), 5m of D-tier crystals are produced. They shatter at D-tier damage, crumble naturally after 5 of his tamer's posts, and break apart after a single use. For each D-tier amount of crystal, they increase the range of one of Longzufu's abilities by 5m and increases to 10m when Longzufu is submerged.

Trait Name: Wing Digger
Trait Tier: A-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: Longzufu's wings aren't just for flying; due to their unique build, it allows him to burrow at intensive speeds. When digging underground, it's as if he's swimming through water.
Trait Effect: Longzufu is capable of burrowing up to A-tier speeds (the equivalent of a B-tier Fanalis). He can dig through dirt, sand, and crystals, leaving a tunnel behind him (which supplies him with air; he'll destroy his own crystals if he burrows through him). He can dig up to 15m beneath the surface (but loses vibration sense after 10m). The closer to the surface he is, the bigger the tremors are from his size. He cannot swim through water and suffers a speed reduction of 2 tiers (C-tier speeds) if Longzufu swims through mud. If he attempts to dig through snow, he does so at D-tier speeds and gets D-tier frost damage.

Trait Name: Crystal Force
Trait Tier: D-tier
Trait Requirement: Jade Dragon
Trait Description: Whenever there is excessive crystal in the area, Longzufu can use them to save on energy.
Trait: If there is leftover crystal from Terraforming - Crystal World, then Longzufu can use them to supply as crystals in a stamina based ability. This trait can only be used if Longzufu is on the ground and takes up the single use of a D-tier 5m crystal from his terraforming trait. A single crystal can supply 5 stamina and can only save up to half the price of an ability. Longzufu can only save up to 50 stamina per thread.

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