Yakuroro's Traits

Total Points: 11
A-Rank - 4
A-Tier Magician - 4
B-TierWarrior - 3


Trait Name: Enhanced Stamina
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: -
Trait Description: Through training or good genes, the character possesses an unnaturally large pool of stamina to draw from.
Trait Effect: +50 Max Stamina

Trait Name: Nimble Fingers
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: -  
Trait Description: Through years of training, the character has obtained deft hand and finger work allowing them a speed and accuracy with fine motor skills a cut above the average person.
Trait Effect: Can swiftly tie knots or retrieve items on your person in an instant.

Trait Name: Perfect Illusionist
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement:  Must have had extensive exposure to Marax's Perfect Illusion Magic and be an A-tier magician or higher with the required magic types.
Trait Description: Having studied perfect illusion magic to extensive levels, Yakuroro has attained a mastery over the magic type that almost rivals perhaps even Marax. As a result, performing the magic is easier for Yakuroro than most and it is also easier to control.
Trait Effect: Perfect Illusion spells can be performed at one tier lower than most combination magics can be cast(C-tier spells). They can also be cast with such skill that other magicians without a comparable tier trait are incapable of distinguishing between reality and the user's illusions.

Trait Name: Exceptional Strength
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Must be Human or a Magician with a secondary combat class.  
Trait Description: Through extensive training, the character has exceeded the traditional limits of strength for their race.
Trait Effect:The character can now bend steel and shatter iron with their bare hands and deal A-tier damage with their physical strength alone. This level is equal to a B-tier fanalis.

Points Spent: 11
D-tier - 1
C-tier - 2
A-tier(x2) - 8

For Perfect Illusion, you can already cast without words and with minimal staff movement, so you don't really need to use the trait for that aspect.

The only other thing is the comparison to marax in power seems... standoffish? Just don't want you to come off that way

Beyond that, everything is perfect!

Edited the effect of perfect illusionist, how's this?

Perfect! And welcome back.

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[b]Trait Name:[/b] Enhanced Stamina
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] C
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] -
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through training or good genes, the character possesses an unnaturally large pool of stamina to draw from.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] +50 Max Stamina

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Nimble Fingers
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] -  
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through years of training, the character has obtained deft hand and finger work allowing them a speed and accuracy with fine motor skills a cut above the average person.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Can swiftly tie knots or retrieve items on your person in an instant.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Perfect Illusionist
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]  Must have had extensive exposure to Marax's Perfect Illusion Magic and be an A-tier magician or higher with the required magic types.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Having studied perfect illusion magic to extensive levels, Yakuroro has attained a mastery over the magic type that almost rivals perhaps even Marax. As a result, performing the magic is easier for Yakuroro than most and it is also easier to control.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Perfect Illusion spells can be performed at one tier lower than most combination magics can be cast(C-tier spells). They can also be cast with such skill that other magicians without a comparable tier trait are incapable of distinguishing between reality and the user's illusions.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Exceptional Strength
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Must be Human or a Magician with a secondary combat class.  
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through extensive training, the character has exceeded the traditional limits of strength for their race.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]The character can now bend steel and shatter iron with their bare hands and deal A-tier damage with their physical strength alone. This level is equal to a B-tier fanalis.