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Rami Naeem

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CZIGUS (CHEE-gooz)
Cosmic Light Beings
A race of beings made out of light. Many would relate the talents of this race to necromancy; however what the Czigus do is a little bit more complex than that. They have the ability to live inside the body of a person who is dead and control the body of someone who is alive. When living in the body of a dead person they have a time limit of up to 2-3 years to live in said body before it disintegrates and they have to find a new host. As a Czigus they cannot live on their own, so most of their lives they are constantly living other people's lives not fully having their own identity. Czigus gain all the knowledge of the body they are residing in from what the person tasted throughout their life, their experiences, their mentality, so on and so forth. When the body that a Czigus is residing in disintegrates they keep all of the knowledge from that person and bring that information into their new host and the cycle repeats itself until they can't find a new body. Once that happens a Czigus only has 3 days to find a new one before they themselves die.


Brief History  
Czigus are a race of secrets. They are so reserved from others even themselves that they never expose who they really are to anyone. The reason for that is because their actual bodies are harvested for crafting materials by Reggs which is why they are always in constant hiding. Half of the time to Czigus don't even know they are talking to one another because of how afraid they are from the rest of the world; they act like and talk like the body of the person they are living in. No one knows that they are speaking to a Czigus, not even a Czigus themselves.
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Altamones (AHL-tuh-mohns)
Divine Magis
Spell casters, wizards, witches and warlocks can never compare to an Altamone. By being able to control nearly eight elements at a time such as Fire, Lightning, Water, Earth, Air and Ice even elements like Dark, Light, Time, Gravity and Space this is a race to be reckoned with. How a Altamone is able to harness multiple elements is by utilizing Sacred tomes that only they are able to read. These tomes have been scattered all through the world of Gavenia and if an Altamone finds one of an element that they do not have they are able to read the tome and gain the knowledge of said tome and its element that is has. For lower level Altamones they must hold on to these books until they become a high enough level to where they do not need them to use their abilities. If an Altamone has 8 elements already and finds a tome of an element they do not have they are able to sacrifice one of their current tomes and replace it with the one they had just found. For Example: If an Altamone Finds a Water tome and wants to Replace one of their Current elements such as Air, the books themselves perform a spell on the Altamone making them forget everything they knew about Air and gain knowledge about Water.


Brief History  
Altamone's tend to do well when it comes keeping to themselves. They avoid conflict as much as possible but sometimes in a world of war influence gets the best of you which is understandable. When the disappearance of David Padilla occurred sacred tomes were discovered several weeks later that could only be read by certain individuals, and the moment those individuals touched their first tome their physical appearance changed all together as well as their mentality causing them to be nose deep in their tomes and shutting out the rest of the world. The tomes that the Altamones hold can be found almost anywhere from desert caves, town libraries, forests and the ocean as well.
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Vanutei (VAH-noo-TAE)
Fissure Walkers
Many would call these people 'Mother Nature's Disciples'. They are so connected to the earth and the land animals that live amongst it that they are able to communicate with the animals and plants alike. An interesting fact about this race is they have two forms; Their regular every day form, called their Herba form and their second form called their Terra Form. Their Terra Form is an ability they only use when the situation ultimately demands it. When "going terra" the Vanutei conjure and earth spirit to take their place and turn into giant stone golems that range from 25-60ft in height. Each Golem is unique to its Vanutei and has cracks in their bodies that radiate the color of the Vanutei's aura. Vanutei are mainly calm beings until aggravated or pushed into a corner. Many Vanutei reside together because they believe that the world will be peaceful once more and tend to not altercate with fights and such. They are known to be peacekeepers and will do whatever it takes to make sure the peace remains if someone or something is trying damage or take it.


Brief History  
When people of this race discovered who and what they were everything about their mentality to the way they dressed changed. They view themselves as protectors of the earth and have been that way since the day their powers were discovered. They are as humble as they can be and tend to make sure everyone is in a good mood because it's what the world needs. Since the war has started the Vanutei have been doing little to nothing in participation with the war however they are offering their services as guards and sheltering those affected. Many people believe the Vanutei think they are better than others, which isn't the case because they view everyone as equal individual, titles mean nothing to them.


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Exatiaz (EHKS-zah-tee-ahz)
Disciplinary Gladiators
This race needs no guns, no swords, no weapons at all to fight in combat because their physical body is a weapon in itself. By creating spine swords, vein whips, even eye ball grenades this race takes thinking outside the box to a whole new level. Their passive regeneration ability makes them heal 10 times faster than any other race and are considered to be immortal only because some can take out their hearts and have another one grow back while they are in the process of taking out the original one. Some people from this race are even known to shoot the bones from the tips of their fingers as if they are bullets and there hand being the gun. This race's options of weaponry are practically limited and limitless at the same time.


Brief History  
When the Exatiaz race was born a lot of people called them freaks and didn't entirely treat them with a lot of respect like they did other races, it is because of the neglect they received from the other races that the Exatiaz only will ever trust their people and only their people unless given a reason to cut the other races some slack. You have races that can control elements, others who can control the bodies of the dead and living and a race that can communicate with land animal life and plants, then you have a race that can pull their entire spine from their back and launch eye ball grenades in whatever direction they want. It is because they are slightly so different from the other races that it was hard for others to adjust to living in the same world with people who used their bodies as a weapon.
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REGG (REHG)
Machina Steam Punks
A race of technologically advanced, steam punk geniuses. Reggs have been known to create weapons and machines ranging from standard guns and swords to mecha-war suits and arm laser canons. With their minds the possibilities of what they can make and when they can make it are constantly limitless. They have been known to start one of the first black markets in the world of Gavenia and are actively becoming a wealthier and wealthier race as days go by.


Brief History  
When the Reggs were looked down upon by the rest of the world because they were thought to have no powers. Nearly 95% of them all moved to the southern portion of the region to create a new life for themselves. When moving to the southern portion of the region they created their first city which they called "Hun City"; their home. The Reggs then formed an organization known as the Monarchs who want to kill all people with special abilities and what not. In just 3 years' time they went from being 35% of the world's population to 55%. Massive genocide, war, and even raids and rapes were created by this organization mainly because of how they were treated by a select few races do to not having flashy powers. They were tormented, teased, and ran out of their homes which was the drive that pushed them to become a cold, sinister, manipulative race.


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Corleiks (KOHR-leeks)
Spirit Warriors
The race of spirit warriors. This race starts off by finding a spirit companion than can be found in just about any item from a sock to a great sword and everything in between. Corleiks normally start off with one main spirit that they make an unbreakable spiritual connection with. Every spirit they find after their first one are considered 'support spirits' spirits that can be left go if the Corleik feels as if its best to release them; They cannot under any circumstances get rid of their first spirit for if they do they die, if their first spirit dies the Corleik dies as well and vice versa. A Corleik can hold up to four spirits at a time and when they become 75% bonded and connected to their first initial spirit they are able to fuse two other spirits to the first one to create a Spirit Templar, which is more or less like a permanent Evolution for their first spirit. The Templar still counts as one spirit in itself and meaning that they can carry 3 more spirits right after it, however they only need one spirit to fuse to the Templar to permanently evolve it into a Spirit Dragoon which is the final form/phase of their first spirit. Their spirits emit themselves from the Item almost looking like a ghost with a spirit tether connected to their Home Item. Once a spirit reaches Dragoon level the tether is removed and they can move freely with their Spirit Warrior. When a Corleik utilizes their spirit in battle by summoning it from its item, the item turns into a weapon for the Corleik to use while in battle.
Brief History
Corleiks are the youngest race to discover their powers. They were first mistaken for Reggs due to not showing that they had any powers. About a decade or so after the other races discovered their powers the Corleiks finally bloomed. Once the Reggs started the genocide and war killing a large portion of the other races, it was the Corleiks primarily who took a stand to counteract the Reggs and their mission. Since the Corleiks are such a young race their history isn't at all long, but they created an organization they call the GBW and they believe everyone should live on Gavenia without having to worry about anything but happiness. Although the war is now four years in they understand that force will have to be brought in order for the peace to return.



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Padilla Legend Creatures




Ruco (Roo-koh)  
Web winged manta rays with a singular eye on their underside. The eye generates when they fly through a cloud collecting every ounce of electricity that it can before shooting it off to it nearest victim. The can shoot it off to an ally and cause a lightning ring which is a deadly attack that creates a large lightning strike to singe and burn anything within the circle 
 

Hunica (Hue-nee-kah) 
Tiny fuzz balls that have large eyes in the middle of them. When they cluster they become giant bombs and explode if they sense a threat. They normally travel in groups. 


Nihj (Nai-hij 
Small Caterpeetle insects that excrete a liquid ooze from their outer shell. The Ooze can be used as an energy supplement and can be used to heal even the most fatal of wounds (unless it's a severed head) the ooze can heal anything just as long as the host of the wound is still breathing. 
Kredus (Cray-duhs)  
Fluffy monkey creatures that when scared, upset, or hurt become rather vicious and dangerous. Caution when approaching these animals.  
Xy (Zai)  
Gastly three tailed foxes that cast nightmares on you stunning you for a post. the foxes have white masks on with red markings on them. Each fox appears with flames on the tip of each tail different colors per fox.
  

Wermu (Wur-moo)  
The largest living mammal of its time. The Wermu is known as the Titan of the sea. Weighing in at roughly over 98 short tons (196000lbs) this monstrous being can swallow whole a full grown blue whale if said species existed anymore. The Wermu carries on its back a rocky shell that can inhabit an entire city of 40,000 people. Imagine the size of this beast. Its only natural however that a being of this size could live on a massive planet. Males are rare two find and are in fact a fraction larger than the female which is the size stated above earlier.  
Garg (Garhg)

Garg's are flying serpents that have no eyes and no mouth. Their sense of smell and hearing exceed all other animals and kill their prey by constricting them and draining their aura.  

Pulm (Poolm)  
A giant saber-tooth tiger, reptile breed. Babies are normally six feet in length and 3 feet in height while adults are generally double that. In their fangs they hold a very deadly venom that is hard to remove from the body cause it spreads quickly. They also are extremely fast runners  


Fumaha (Foo-mah-haw)  
A land/water mammal that not only can breath in air but it also can breath underwater. It's body can self adapt to the environment that it is in if the environment is mostly air based or water based. when on land it is slightly furry with a pur white coat. its eyes shift from solid black to solid silver. When its mouth is open it has extremely sharp teeth. When underwater it develops gills and webbed feet. its eyes glow a luminous blue color and its teeth grow 5 inches in length. It eats sea food on land and land food in the sea.
  

Yark Yark(Yahrk Yahrk)

Melon sized white and orange bird creatures with a small outer mouth appearance but if they spot you they purposely expand their mouth opening it by a foot and a half letting out a ear shattering scream that hurts you and aggrivates near by creatures and causes them to attack you.  

Olik (Oh-lihq)  
This being comes from a parallel world. It loosely resembles a salamander, and it has a tail ending in an eye. Its body is skeletal, yet it has functioning organs.
  

Owlouce (Ow-loohs)  
furry ball shaped owl/mouse hybrid. They always travel in groups and are known as guiders. if provoked they summon a large spirit to attack you. this spirit is linked with them. defeat it you defeat them.
  

Cybana (Sai-bah-nuh)  
Mechanically anti gravity jellyfish that have escape the lab of Korsu and have scattered all over Southern Odrea and Laikaido ocean. They can shock and cut you. 


Lugrim (Luh-grehm)

A giant skeletal golem species. These large beasts are said to once be Core form Vanutei's as the wear the skull of their former titan self as a helmet. They are a rather friendly species however when aggravated can be high dangerous because they cut ties with all emotions except anger and rage by this time you must either run, kill, or try to handicap them.  

Margina (Mahr-GEE-nah)  
Creepy crawlies with wings. Margina's are spider like creatures with moth like wings. There webs can hold nearly anything. They are mostly found in the desert and running into one of their sand traps is a pain. They're venomous.  


Greep(GUH-reep)
A bunch of deadly sludge monsters with turtle like shells. They are mainly sleeping and only feed at night. If awakened during their slumber their sludge bodies slightly spill out of their shell in order for them to move and attack. If struck by one of these beasts you will be poisoned and stunned.

Carfu(KAHR-foo)
Large round feathery birds with no wings but long legs. They basically look like feather balls with two large sticks lodged in the bottom of them. They are used for transportation for they can run extremely fast and are known as the 2nd speediest creature out there. Don't let their appearance fool you because they can carry over 1200lbs. Babies can carry over 700lbs.
  

Lolini (Loh-lee-nee)
Five tailed fox/wolf creatures with antlers that resemble those of a deer. They are naturally friendly but are extremely territorial. Their colors change per season. Autumn they have a orange circular patch of fur on their forehead while the rest of their body is light brown. The tips of their tail are Orange as well. During winter their light brown coat switches to black for females and white for males. The circular patch and tail tips are a light blue color. During the spring their fur is a salmon color. The circle and tail tips stay blue. In the summer their fur turns a beautiful light green color for females and a vibrant orange color for males. The circle and tail tips are white. Males have the horns females do not. 
 

Aju(AH-joo)
They are tiny brown rhino/armadillo hybrids. These frightening creatures can go from being the size of an egg to the size of boulders. They attack on site and when they do see you they expand to boulder size and will roll you out if you do not move. Normally travel in clusters of 6.
  

Keilwa(KAEL-wah)
Large skeletal bats that only awaken when they since life is nearby. They naturally drain life whenever life is present and when life is present their skeletal appearance changes into large full flesh and fur bats. These bats still have skeletal heads just the rest of their body is functioning with life.  

Andy (AHN-dee)
Andy's are creatures that take the form of whoever they manage to touch. You never know where one might be which is why their known appearance is unknown. They can be anyone or anything.  


Nator(NAH-tohr)
A highly dangerous creature. Not as dangerous as the wermu but definitely not something you'd want to face alone. It is known as the titan of the sky as it resides in the sky. It has the head of a jaguar and the body of a dragon. It carries itself with the wind not with wings. This creature has no home as it travels wherever it pleases. Encountering it could definitely be a random occurrence. 

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Osiris Naeem - Male - 22 - REGG
  · Main Character
  ·   Short, ruffled, feather like white hair. Olive tan skin, hazel green eyes with the Regg symbol branded on his chest from peck to peck stretching to his belly button.

  ·   Tall, slightly muscular.

  ·   He is blunt, cocky and doesn't follow directions quite well. He tends to adapt to situations on his own terms.

  · Has a pet Pulm whose name is Isis. She has black fur with a few tan spots scattered about. 
·Osiris possess chakram blades. The base of the weapon is a perfect circle that is a foot and a half long all around. The outside of the circle holds five long sharp dagger like shapes used for combat both offensive and defensive. The weapon harnesses a safe zone for being able to hold it without being cut. Osiris possesses two of these unique weapons. The dagger directly across from "safe zone" is a customized laser pistol with the trigger located in the safe zone. An interesting trait about the safe zone is that it can turn the weapon its self into a yo-yo of sorts. There are two triggers. One for the yo-yo and one for the pistol. The weapons can mechanically shrink to bracelet size and can be worn around his wrists. 

Dezerae Nadira Castillo - Female - 23 - CORLEIK
  · Main Character
·  Long, wavy, maroon hair usually hangs freely but occasionally is put in a pony tail. Her hair can be mistaken for a deep purple. Olive skin tone. Vibrant purple eyes.
· Average height for females. Hour glass figure.
·       Consistant, stoic sometimes, angry other times, violent as well. Always trying to prove a point. Has few friends, never been in love but many lovers.

  ·  Has a pet Lolini she has named Koala.
· Dezerae possess a bayonet knife with a serpent engraved on the blade. It is her spirit item with the her spirit partner Lazar trapped inside

Victor Del Kuni - Male - 36 - VANUTEI  

  · Main Character
· Has brown hair, braided back in a wolf tail style. Vivid forest green eyes. Light tan skin tone.
· Extremely tall, built well.
·  Stern sometimes but normally relaxed and carefree the majority of the time. Tries to find other solutions before resulting to violence. Generally hates fighting.

Anya Vexen - Female - 25 - ALTAMONE
  · Main Character

  ·  Dark, reddish brown, straight hair that barely stretches past her chin. Polar white eyes and sea mist blue skin.

  · Above average female height, somewhat curvy and evenly proportioned.

  · Extremely knowledgeable, short spoken, often quiet, always in her books, rather friendly, hidden power house.

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Chapter 1 - Drunken Memories

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Chapter 2 - Sleepless Nights

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Chapter 3 - Violence is Bliss

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Chapter 4 - Subtle Pain

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