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1Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 11:36 am

Neppy

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Removing:


New Moves w/ Replacing

Flight
Tier: D-Ω
Specialization: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must know strength magic.
Scaling: Flight Power
Sustain: -
Cool Down: -
Cost: 30 | 15
Description:

    The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.

    • B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.



Nuplyšęs Galūnių
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must run the item used for casting across the ground.
Scaling: Spread: The spread of the vine through the body, 10 Magoi/stamina the tier of damage increase by one.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi: 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo brings forth rose vines from beneath the ground 8m, away from himself. Coiling around target's limbs, digging through the skin dealing C-Tier damage.


Medis Sienų
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must jab the item used for casting in the ground, and recite the name of ability.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo creates countless wooden branches 2.5 meters in width. Intertwining the branches forming a wide, thick net like web, blocking up to C-Tier damage. The branchs would be weak against fire/blunt attacks higher then the skill.


Nakties Ašarojimas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician [Gravity]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must draw an imaginary circle in the air invoking the ability.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Gravity, Aseo created rift pockets around his opponent(s). The rifts rubbing matter against one another making them 'explode' the space around them causing up to D-Tier damage.


Mistikas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician [Ice]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must draw an imaginary circle invoking the ability.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
Description:

    Controlling water, Aseo gathers water into an orb. Shooting the orb 8m away from himself, changing the state of change to Ice, the surface of the orb on contact dealing D-Tier damage.


Kurčiųjų Kūno
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Sound]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must tap the person there place the spell effect on.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Voicing to the sound, Aseo silences the area around himself. Ranging up to 15 meters, cancelling out noise making him and anything he touches unheard to others. The effect lasts for 2 post after activation.


Kopijavimas Šnabždesys
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Magician [Sound]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Poking the air from top to bottom in the direction of the person.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 Posts
Cost: 30 Magoi : 15 Sustain
Description:

    Voicing to the sound, Aseo creates an low frequency sound wave, sending it towards another from 8 m away. Upon contact dolphin noises present themselves as B-Tier damage is dealt internally to the point of contact.


Žydintys Rožių
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Reciting the name of the ability over the wound.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo channels a faint glow of turquoise color from his wand. Hovering it in the direct of the wound healing internal to minor of C-Tier damage.



Last edited by Aseo Asehi on 09/03/17, 06:46 pm; edited 2 times in total


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2Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 11:42 am

Ariel

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Before I go anywhere, I'd recommend looking at your first two abilities again. You have the wrong cooldowns. Your second ability still has the D-Tier cost.


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3Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 06:28 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Flight - You should use the code below for this ability instead :D I think you are using the older version.

B-Tier Flight:

Medis Sienų - What exactly do you mean at a moderate speed? Also, with an ability like this you need to realize it's not going to block ALL forms of damage, especially being wood it's most likely going to be extremely weak to a couple of elements/forms of attacking, so if you could put some of those weaknesses down, that'd be great.

Nakties Ašarojimas - The way you described it as "rifts" and an "explosion" seems a little off to me when using Strength magic, but I won't dock you for it if you can't think of a better way to describe this "explosion", but it would help if you could think of another way. Also, this is a D-Tier ability, so it's going to deal D-Tier damage.

Mistikas - This seems fine as is, but you might want to explain that you're hardening the water into ice XD, otherwise it seems a tad bit strange.

Kurčiųjų Kūno - What do you mean by "ranging 5 to 15 meters" it should just have a base range. :o

Kopijavimas Šnabždesys - The concept is absolutely ridiculous, however, you're lucky you have me grading this right now, because I will not make you touch this beautiful ability in any shape, form, or way. <3


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4Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 06:47 pm

Neppy

Neppy
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Edited ~


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Nocturnal Gale v.1 423-BF605-76-D0-4-D75-80-E7-B83-DB1711-D97
~[^vault^]~
Nocturnal Gale v.1 52-ADE66-B-93-D2-40-AC-9571-EF82-D3-DA78-D2
~Neph Axca~
Nocturnal Gale v.1 5-E8-D9772-5936-4-ECD-AC02-55939-A629576


5Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 06:58 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Nocturnal Gale v.1 HVhvTYv

These abilities are now ready to be trained!~ Link back the training/buying of these abilities whenever you are ready. ^^

Code:
[center][b]Flight[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Ω
[b]Specialization:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Flight Power
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] -
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.
[list]
[*]B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
[/list]
[/list]

[center][b]Nuplyšęs Galūnių[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Life]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must run the item used for casting across the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Spread: The spread of the vine through the body, 10 Magoi/stamina the tier of damage increase by one.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi: 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Commanding Life, Aseo brings forth rose vines from beneath the ground 8m, away from himself. Coiling around target's limbs, digging through the skin dealing C-Tier damage. [/list]

[center][b]Medis Sienų[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Life]
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must jab the item used for casting in the ground, and recite the name of ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Commanding Life, Aseo creates countless wooden branches 2.5 meters in width. Intertwining the branches forming a wide, thick net like web, blocking up to C-Tier damage. The branchs would be weak against fire/blunt attacks higher then the skill.[/list]

[center][b]Nakties Ašarojimas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Gravity]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must draw an imaginary circle in the air invoking the ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Commanding Gravity, Aseo created rift pockets around his opponent(s). The rifts rubbing matter against one another making them 'explode' the space around them causing up to D-Tier damage. [/list]

[center][b]Mistikas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Ice]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must draw an imaginary circle invoking the ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Controlling water, Aseo gathers water into an orb. Shooting the orb 8m away from himself, changing the state of change to Ice, the surface of the orb on contact dealing D-Tier damage. [/list]

[center][b]Kurčiųjų Kūno[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Sound]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must tap the person there place the spell effect on.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Voicing to the sound, Aseo silences the area around himself. Ranging up to 15 meters, cancelling out noise making him and anything he touches unheard to others. The effect lasts for 2 post after activation. [/list]

[center][b]Kopijavimas Šnabždesys[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Sound]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Poking the air from top to bottom in the direction of the person.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi : 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Voicing to the sound, Aseo creates an low frequency sound wave, sending it towards another from 8 m away. Upon contact dolphin noises present themselves as B-Tier damage is dealt internally to the point of contact. [/list]

[center][b]Žydintys Rožių[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Life]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Reciting the name of the ability over the wound.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Commanding Life, Aseo channels a faint glow of turquoise color from his wand. Hovering it in the direct of the wound healing internal to minor of C-Tier damage. [/list]


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6Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 07:52 pm

Neppy

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A-Tier


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Nocturnal Gale v.1 423-BF605-76-D0-4-D75-80-E7-B83-DB1711-D97
~[^vault^]~
Nocturnal Gale v.1 52-ADE66-B-93-D2-40-AC-9571-EF82-D3-DA78-D2
~Neph Axca~
Nocturnal Gale v.1 5-E8-D9772-5936-4-ECD-AC02-55939-A629576


7Nocturnal Gale v.1 Empty Re: Nocturnal Gale v.1 09/03/17, 07:53 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Nocturnal Gale v.1 HVhvTYv


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