Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done)

Kerum Kosha · 1 Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 01:58 pm

Kerum Kosha

D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(60/60)
Stamina:

(140/140)

Well here is my attempt at abilities (sweat drop) don't destroy me to badly!!

D Rank Abilities:

C-Rank Abilities:

Last edited by Kerum Kosha on 18/01/17, 06:00 pm; edited 3 times in total

Rima Fahim · 2 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 04:28 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Let's see here...not going to lie, these don't seem that bad actually. Of course, there are some issues here and there since you are new, but let's fix those up together. ^^

General
On each skill, just change the sustain part to either 0 or - (With this you normally just put either 0 or -, the numbers you were seeing was how many times you can sustain the abilities before it goes on cooldown.)
When you put something for scaling, just put what your scaling. Damage,ect,hits,w/e
Feint
Okay, I'm not going to lie to you. This ability would honestly be better as just a basic action, which would also cost no stamina. However, if you REALLY want this as an ability just tell me. I'll see if I can help you forge it into a fantastic ability.~
Block
This ability looks fine as is, but you need to state in the requirements/drawbacks that you won't be able to block intangible attacks, such as fire, lightning, ect. Also in the description, please write down that you are able to only block a single D-Tier attack.
Dive
Yep, it would be supplementary indeed. ^^
For scaling though, like I said in the general part all you need to do on this would be put "Range" however, I just wanted to let you know that you would actually go 5m extra per scaling, not 1m.~
Blade Spin
Yep, damage would be correct.
You should specify that the spin attack would hit anything in a 1m radius around him. Other than that, this move looks fine.~
Sword Spiral
This ability looks fine, but again before it's approved you'll have to change the sustain part to 0 or - and change the scaling to "Hits"

Kerum Kosha · 3 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 04:38 pm

Kerum Kosha

D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(60/60)
Stamina:

(140/140)

I fixed everything except feint, i have no idea what to replace it with (cries)

Rima Fahim · 4 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 04:51 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

The following abilities have been APPROVED. If you need help with deciding on an ability to replace feint, feel free to get in contact with either me or Diana. ^^ However, if anyone can find things wrong that I wasn't able to, there is a chance the abilities will be temporarily revoked to make those changes.

I made some small edits to block and dive, stating block scaled with damage, and dive's range to medium. I also readded a range section to block, and added the not being able to block intangible abilities.~

Code:: [center][b]Block[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Defensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Kerum must be holding one of his blades upside down and the dull end up against his arm. This ability will not work against intangible attacks. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] Kerum spins one of his blades so it is facing down the dull end resting on his arm. This allows him to block attacks using the blade and his arm for added stability and control. It can only block a single d-tier attack. [/list] [center][b]Dive[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b]Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Medium [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] There has to be room to either side of Kerum for him to do this as well as have a good firm footing. [b]Scaling:[/b]Range [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] Kerum pushes off the ground to dive and roll to the side rolling back up to his feet ready. This covered roughly 3m distance. [/list] [center][b]Blade Spin[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b]Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Kerum must be in a crouched stance with both swords in his hands. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] Kerum gets into a stance and then takes a step pivoting with great strength slashing out in a circle to hit enemies and objects surrounding him. Hit does D-tier damage, this hits everything in the 1m range.[/list] [center][b]Sword Spiral[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Kerum has to have room to jump towards them, so at least 1m away. His arms have to be bent in the right positions for the spiral to work effectively. If he does not have a bladed weapon in both hands this attack does not work. [b]Scaling:[/b] Hits. [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Cost:[/b] Base: 20 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] Kerum launches himself forward and into the air in a spiral motion swinging his blades hands held outward bent slightly. The ability is preformed in fluid motions; allowing the user to continue spinning hitting them multiple times in rapid succession. This technique strikes total of once without scaling dealing C-tier damage."[/list]

Kerum Kosha · 5 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 05:57 pm

Kerum Kosha

D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(60/60)
Stamina:

(140/140)

I swapped out feint :D

Rima Fahim · 6 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 06:01 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Diagonal Slahs APPROVED! If anyone else can find something wrong with the ability, feel free to undo the approval and fix it.~

Code:: [center][b]Diagonal Slash[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be able to slash diagonally in order to pull it off. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post. [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] This is a well timed and placed diagonal slash trying to get past an opponents typical stance. Hits once, and deals D-tier damage.[/list]

Ariel · 7 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 08:17 pm

Ariel

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(175/175)

Diagonal Slash
- Your requirement doesn't really serve the purpose of the requirement section. It's too vague.
  
  So you're trying to head into the direction of what could limit your ability to perform the diagonal slash. Instead of being really vague, be specific. Maybe you can only do it with both hands on the handle. This example specifies what exactly you have to be doing. If you just say you have to be able to do a diagonal slash, what does that tell us? It's too vague to tell us anything. You've got to dig deeper besides basically saying you can't do the ability. Why can't you do the ability?

Kerum Kosha · 8 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 08:28 pm

Kerum Kosha

D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(60/60)
Stamina:

(140/140)

The two handed requirement sounds good, I shall add that :D

Ariel · 9 Re: Kerum's Starter Abilities (Done) 18/01/17, 08:44 pm

Ariel

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(175/175)

Approved. Next time make sure you remember to edit your original post.)

Code:: [center][b]Diagonal Slash[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be grasping handle with both hands. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage [b]Sustain:[/b] 0 [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post. [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list][*]This is a well timed and placed diagonal slash trying to get past an opponents typical stance. Hits once, and deals D-tier damage.[/list]