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Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]

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Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Gravity Increase
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must chant the spell’s name as well as aiming her staff/wand at the target
Scaling:Every 10 magoi poured into the spell will cause the spell to last an additional post
Sustain: 2 post
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi + 10 to sustain
Description:
Hannah will cause the gravity around a single target to increase. This will lower a person’s speed a noticeable amount due to them being heavier than what they are use to. The furthest this spell may work on in 5 meters away, if an enemy leaves this range the magic will dissipate.

Razor Vortex
Tier: B Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah will chant the spells name and aim at either her target
Scaling: Every 10 magoi poured into the spell causes the vortex to grow an additional 5 meters in width
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 Post
Cost: 30 magoi Description:
Hannah will target an enemy within 5 meters of herself. She will cause a vortex of razor type magic to surround the target and trap them in an area of 3 meters in width. The vortex will rip to shred anything within its area causing B tier damage and due to being of the razor magic type, the wounds cannot be healed for three post after damaged.


Razor Cloak
Tier: B Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Self/ Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must chant the spell, if using it on herself she will point her wand at herself or push the butt of her staff downward. If casting on an ally she will point it at them. She must have sight of her target that she is casting the spell on at all times to utilize this spell.
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put into the spell will expand the area that triggers the razors by 5 meters
Sustain: 3  
Cool Down: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi + 15 to sustain
Description:
The magoi will wrap around either Hannah or her target. This will cause nearly translucent razors to emerge the moment a person comes within a meter range of them, razors will extend to the length of the spell's radius, 1 meter unless scaled. The razors will retract the moment that the person leaves the range of the spell. The damage these razors do is B tier in damage. The furthest a person can be from Hannah to have this spell cast upon them is 10 meters. The razors can extend and retract up to 3 times before the spell wears off. Due to the nature of razor magic this wound cannot be healed for three post


Grand Scythe
Tier: B Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah chants the ability’s name and swings her staff like you would a scythe
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put into the spell increases the range of this spell by 5 meters in length
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi
Description:
Hannah will swing her staff ordering the ruhk to form into a nearly translucent scythe like object that cuts everything in its path dealing B tier damage. Due to the nature of razor magic the damage from this magic cannot be healed for the following 3 post. The scythe is 3 meters in length 3 meters in width and only .05 meters thick


Flight

Tier: B Tier
Specialization: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must know strength magic.
Scaling: Flight Power
Sustain: -
Cool Down: -
Cost: 30 + 15 sustain
Description:

    The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.

    • D-tier: The magician has full control over where they fly, however they wobble in the air unsteadily and move at the speed of a leisurely stroll.
    • C-tier: The magician's flight is stable and they have control over their direction. The speed of the flight has increased to rival someone in a dead sprint.
    • B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
    • A-tier: The magician can now fly at incredible speeds covering even great distances within a short amount of time.



Last edited by Hannah Voight on 20/12/16, 07:35 pm; edited 3 times in total


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Please go to your profile and update your magic types to include strength magic.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/u641

You should be able to edit that section without a mod.




Razor Vortex:

Scaling - The standard size/AoE scaling gives you 5m per 10 magoi.


Razor Cloak:

Scaling - Instead of increasing the distance the razors extend out, I'd prefer you increase the distance of how far away the target can be.

Description - Just a suggestion, but I think you should mention this spell can be used on objects as well. You can lay some pretty good traps that way.


Grand Scythe:

Your coding is messed up somewhere.

Description - How big is the scythe dimensions?


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Thank you all, for everything.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

I edited it! And I know about the razor cloak I og had it as a person but I realized it could be a nasty trap :3


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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Sorry you need to do D to C tier magician class training before you can get Btier skills and new magic type 
Staff will not grade this until you do the class training


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Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]  G5OZoqx

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Oh I was hoping to do my class training while training these spells since it would make sense to learn a new magic's spell when learning that magic o.o


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Yes, bump this when your training is finished. You can't train these spells while you train your class because your wordcounts must be separated. You can train them in the same thread, but you'd need to finish your class training wordcount first.

Make sure you are clearly marking where the word count for one training ends, then starting an entirely new wordcount from 0 where the next training begins.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Training has been approved bumping to get a final check!


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

You didn't make the scaling edit to Razor Cloak I suggested. Other than that everything else looks good to me.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Ah guess the wording I opted wasn't the best. Bump


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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]  Approval_zpsoloj6ntd

Approved for training with following edits (I made a small edit for the Razor Cloak's scaling)



Code:
[center][b]Gravity Increase[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must chant the spell’s name as well as aiming her staff/wand at the target
[b]Scaling:[/b]Every 10 magoi poured into the spell will cause the spell to last an additional post
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi + 10 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
Hannah will cause the gravity around a single target to increase. This will lower a person’s speed a noticeable amount due to them being heavier than what they are use to. The furthest this spell may work on in 5 meters away, if an enemy leaves this range the magic will dissipate.

[center][b]Razor Vortex[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah will chant the spells name and aim at either her target
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi poured into the spell causes the vortex to grow an additional 5 meters in width
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi [b]Description:[/b]
Hannah will target an enemy within 5 meters of herself. She will cause a vortex of razor type magic to surround the target and trap them in an area of 3 meters in width. The vortex will rip to shred anything within its area causing B tier damage and due to being of the razor magic type, the wounds cannot be healed for three post after damaged.


[center][b]Razor Cloak[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Self/ Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must chant the spell, if using it on herself she will point her wand at herself or push the butt of her staff downward. If casting on an ally she will point it at them. She must have sight of her target that she is casting the spell on at all times to utilize this spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into the spell will expand the area of effect by 5 meters
[b]Sustain:[/b] 3  
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi + 15 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
The magoi will wrap around either Hannah or her target. This will cause nearly translucent razors to emerge the moment a person comes within a meter range of them, razors will extend to the length of the spell's radius, 1 meter unless scaled. The razors will retract the moment that the person leaves the range of the spell. The damage these razors do is B tier in damage. The furthest a person can be from Hannah to have this spell cast upon them is 10 meters. The razors can extend and retract up to 3 times before the spell wears off. Due to the nature of razor magic this wound cannot be healed for three post


[center][b]Grand Scythe[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah chants the ability’s name and swings her staff like you would a scythe
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into the spell increases the range of this spell by 5 meters in length
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
Hannah will swing her staff ordering the ruhk to form into a nearly translucent scythe like object that cuts everything in its path dealing B tier damage. Due to the nature of razor magic the damage from this magic cannot be healed for the following 3 post. The scythe is 3 meters in length 3 meters in width and only .05 meters thick


[center][b]Flight[/b][/center]

[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Specialization:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Flight Power
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] -
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 + 15 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.
[list]
[*]D-tier: The magician has full control over where they fly, however they wobble in the air unsteadily and move at the speed of a leisurely stroll.
[*]C-tier: The magician's flight is stable and they have control over their direction. The speed of the flight has increased to rival someone in a dead sprint.
[*]B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
[*]A-tier: The magician can now fly at incredible speeds covering even great distances within a short amount of time.
[/list]
[/list]


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Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]  G5OZoqx

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier


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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]  Approval_zpsoloj6ntd

Training approved for Flight, add to vault ^^

Code:
[center][b]Flight[/b][/center]

[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Specialization:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Flight Power
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] -
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 + 15 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.
[list]
[*]D-tier: The magician has full control over where they fly, however they wobble in the air unsteadily and move at the speed of a leisurely stroll.
[*]C-tier: The magician's flight is stable and they have control over their direction. The speed of the flight has increased to rival someone in a dead sprint.
[*]B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
[*]A-tier: The magician can now fly at incredible speeds covering even great distances within a short amount of time.
[/list]


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Hannah's first set of Strength magic and Razor spells [ready to be checked]  G5OZoqx

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p175-ability-vouchers#41392

Grand Scythe, Razor Cloak, and Gravity Increase have all be bought


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Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier

Approved~
Make sure you add these abilities to your vault.

Code:
[center][b]Gravity Increase[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must chant the spell’s name as well as aiming her staff/wand at the target
[b]Scaling:[/b]Every 10 magoi poured into the spell will cause the spell to last an additional post
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi + 10 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
Hannah will cause the gravity around a single target to increase. This will lower a person’s speed a noticeable amount due to them being heavier than what they are use to. The furthest this spell may work on in 5 meters away, if an enemy leaves this range the magic will dissipate.

Code:
[center][b]Razor Cloak[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Self/ Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must chant the spell, if using it on herself she will point her wand at herself or push the butt of her staff downward. If casting on an ally she will point it at them. She must have sight of her target that she is casting the spell on at all times to utilize this spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into the spell will expand the area that triggers the razors by 5 meters
[b]Sustain:[/b] 3  
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi + 15 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
The magoi will wrap around either Hannah or her target. This will cause nearly translucent razors to emerge the moment a person comes within a meter range of them, razors will extend to the length of the spell's radius, 1 meter unless scaled. The razors will retract the moment that the person leaves the range of the spell. The damage these razors do is B tier in damage. The furthest a person can be from Hannah to have this spell cast upon them is 10 meters. The razors can extend and retract up to 3 times before the spell wears off. Due to the nature of razor magic this wound cannot be healed for three post.

Code:
[center][b]Grand Scythe[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah chants the ability’s name and swings her staff like you would a scythe
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into the spell increases the range of this spell by 5 meters in length
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
Hannah will swing her staff ordering the ruhk to form into a nearly translucent scythe like object that cuts everything in its path dealing B tier damage. Due to the nature of razor magic the damage from this magic cannot be healed for the following 3 post. The scythe is 3 meters in length 3 meters in width and only .05 meters thick.


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