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1Aseroth Starter Abilites. Empty Aseroth Starter Abilites. 20/10/16, 10:32 am

Aseroth

Aseroth
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Cross Rave
Tier: D Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The User need to have a proper footing before charging toward one direction.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: He adjusted his Weapon in front of himself as a shield, holding the flat side with one hand and tighting his grip with the others. Taking a slight bend in his knees to push off the ground charging forward with the blunt of his blade aiming to hit his opponent with D-Tier Damage.


Basic Guard
Tier: D Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defense
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks:  Taking a denfensive stance, standing still in one stop preparing to take an attack.
Scaling: None
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: Crossing his arms together at the center of his chest, tighting his muscles to not receive deep wounds/cuts from the attack/assault/combo having D-Tier Blocking.

Cross Delta
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Leaping into the air and getting his sword over his head allowing for him to bring it down while vertically flipping.
Scaling: Hits ( How many aerial slashes vertical can land against the other person )
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description: Aseroth leaps upward into the air, lifting his buster sword over his head, flipping forward slashing it downward to deal C-Tier Damage.

Cross Omega
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offense
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Holding his sword inverted parallel to his head, adjusting it with one hand forward and one holding the sword in the position, with a firm footing position.
Scaling: Damage ( Damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina invested )
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: Thrusting the tip of his sawtooth like sword or any weapon in his possession at the time at his opponent aiming at certain limbs with D-Tier damage ( Possibly to increase due to investing more power )  attempt to rip through such limb.

Fanalis Roar
Tier: C
Specialization: Fanalis Racial
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short(3m)
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must inhale a deep breath before roaring.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: -
Description:

    After taking a deep breath, the fanalis lets out a mighty roar to stun and intimidate enemies. The enemy does not suffer any actual paralysis, however, the noise is loud enough to cause pain and will stagger foes using basic actions or lower ranked abilities.



Last edited by Aseroth on 21/10/16, 12:52 am; edited 3 times in total

2Aseroth Starter Abilites. Empty Re: Aseroth Starter Abilites. 20/10/16, 11:35 pm

Diligence

Diligence
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Cross Rave: This move is wouldn't give you a speed boost and would only do D tier Damage. So you can omit that part about being staggered out of the Drawbacks/Requirements. Cool down is 1 post not 2. Your weapon isn't a buster sword either, so a slight edit to the wording will be needed. Just to generalize it for various weapons then I would suggest just saying weapon. Try range for scaling as well unless you can specify what you mean by AoE of the attack. Like does I cause debris or something?

Basic Guard: You will need a drawback or requirement. Every skill needs one. Something like needing to be in a specific stance or can only stand still to block etc. The Cooldown is 1 turn for D tier skills. We don't use movement speeds in skills, so remove that. You know you're using your bare arms, so you'd still basically be cut up etc after an attack. Edited it so you're say tightening your muscles to stop a weapon from cutting to deep or something. It's type would be defensive as well.

Cross Delta: Cooldown is 2 for C tier. Distance of enemy isn't necessarily a viable Scaling. Something like Damage would do you better for this particular skill. We don't use movement speeds in skills.

Cross Omega: Your weapon isn't a buster sword and you'll need something more than needing the weapon as a requirement for the skill. Frontal thrust will need to be explained or changed to something else in regards to the scaling. We don't use movement speeds for skills. Cool down is 1 post.

Make these edits and you'll be good to go Very Happy

3Aseroth Starter Abilites. Empty Re: Aseroth Starter Abilites. 21/10/16, 12:17 am

Aseroth

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Edited the following asked, Hopefully i did it correctly.

4Aseroth Starter Abilites. Empty Re: Aseroth Starter Abilites. 21/10/16, 04:04 pm

Diligence

Diligence
A-Tier
A-Tier

Made a edit in the wording of Basic Guard for you. Also Fanalis Roar is a racial skill that you didn't need to register, simply add it to your vault.

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[center][b]Cross Rave[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The User need to have a proper footing before charging toward one direction.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b] He adjusted his Weapon in front of himself as a shield, holding the flat side with one hand and tighting his grip with the others. Taking a slight bend in his knees to push off the ground charging forward with the blunt of his blade aiming to hit his opponent with D-Tier Damage.

[center][b]Basic Guard[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defense
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]  Taking a denfensive stance, standing still in one stop preparing to take an attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] None
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b] Crossing his arms together at the center of his chest, tighting his muscles to not receive deep wounds/cuts from the attack/assault/combo up to a C-Tier Amount of Damage.

[center][b]Cross Delta[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offense
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Leaping into the air and getting his sword over his head allowing for him to bring it down while vertically flipping.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits ( How many aerial slashes vertical can land against the other person )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b] Aseroth leaps upward into the air, lifting his buster sword over his head, flipping forward slashing it downward to deal C-Tier Damage.

[center][b]Cross Omega[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offense
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Holding his sword inverted parallel to his head, adjusting it with one hand forward and one holding the sword in the position, with a firm footing position.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage ( Damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina invested )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b] Thrusting the tip of his sawtooth like sword or any weapon in his possession at the time at his opponent aiming at certain limbs with D-Tier damage ( Possibly to increase due to investing more power )  attempt to rip through such limb.

[center][b]Fanalis Roar[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Specialization:[/b] Fanalis Racial
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short(3m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must inhale a deep breath before roaring.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b]
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After taking a deep breath, the fanalis lets out a mighty roar to stun and intimidate enemies. The enemy does not suffer any actual paralysis, however, the noise is loud enough to cause pain and will stagger foes using basic actions or lower ranked abilities.[/list]

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