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Aayla - The stray warrior KO8lTsM
Name: Aayla
Country Affiliation:Kou Empire
Race: Fanalis
Tier: D-Tier
class: Warrior
Age + Birthdate: 19 years old, exact birthdate unknown
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Aayla for the most part is a very quiet girl, as is customary of most girls who grew up as she did. To those she must speak too (friends, masters, employers, etc) she speaks only what she has too to get her point across. However, she is a very curious girl, so it isn't uncommon for her to suddenly droll into asking a million questions.

While she hates seeing children suffer, she has no issue with the suffering of adults, especially when it comes to a fight. She likes to break her enemies before finishing them off, causing the most bloodshed possible in the process. A real silent sadist.

She is usually incredibly selfish in everything she does. All that matters to her in the moment is her own safety and her own future. If you aren't a friend or employer, she may very well throw you under the bus to get what she wants, or accomplish what she needs to do.

She is by no means a leader. She would much rather follow someone's guidance than to trust her own due to the limited knowledge of her upbringing. Being a mercenary allows her to search for a strong employer or leader to follow.
Likes:
-She loves the thrill of a good fight
-She liked to be led, as she has always had someone to tell her what to do her whole live. She wouldn't know what to do without a master, or a friend to guide her.
-The bloodier the fight, the better. There's a strange, euphoric sense about being covered in your enemy's blood~
Dislikes:
-She dislikes being confined and alone in the dark.
-Doesn't like seeing young children getting hurt
-Spiders freak her the heck out.
Aspirations:
-As of right now, Aayla only wants to find somewhere where she can belong, and feel happy being there. She knew little more than the life of a slave and a mercenary, so is seeking to find something that fits within those lines, without having to go back to being a slave. She wants someone to call her own, though isn't sure if that means an employer, a lover or something different. She simply strives to build herself a better tomorrow by any means necessary.

Maybe one day, she may even become a guard or soldier within the Kou Empires armies... as she prefers to follow someone else's orders, thismay be the ultimate position for her to find herself in.
Phobias/fears:
-While she doesn't mind serving others, Aayla never wants to be a slave again and that is why she fears anyone approaching her with chains, or the overall sound they make.
-The first master Aayla had as a child, was a strange looking human with dark tribal like tattoo's covering the right side of his face and ocean blue eyes. Anyone that has any similarities to her first master frightens her and she'll be sure to avoid them at all costs.
Face-Claim: elsword elesis crimson avenger
Hair Color: Crimson
Eye Color: Yellow
Height: 160cm
Weight: 68kg
Appearance: Aayla doesn't try to hide her body behind leathers or armor, finding that they slow her down, she instead dresses herself in a red, low cut cotton shirt that's open at the back, revealing the scar on her back. She wears black pants of the same material, with two leather belts strapped around her waist to hold her supplies. On her arms, she wears two black and red long sleeve gloves that stop just before her shoulders.
Her hair is usually tied back into a loose kind of pony tail with strands loose next to her bangs. When she fights, this gives her a more wild look to her which helps in scaring opponents.
Rukh Alignment: White Rukh
Special Features: Besides the classic crimson hair of the Fanalis, Aayla has a rather deep looking scar that spreads out over and down her spine, reaching out and almost resembling the mark of a spider.
History:
Like many Fanalis, Aayla was taken from her people at a very young age. She doesn't remember what life was like with her family, nor does she remember faces or voices, or if she had any siblings. All those memories fell into obscurity as she was taken to be a slave within the Kou Empire.

Most of her young life was spent working large fields with many other slaves. The children would work outside harvesting crops, building fences and caring for the livestock.

As an adolescent, Aayla was taken to instead serve her master and his guests. She was made to wear fine clothing to cover her chains, and dressed up to look appealing. While she was too young to be sold into the market for more... adult pleasantries, she was of a fine age to be presented as a potential sale. She would serve by bringing her master his food, or serving his guests tea and over-all being ready to stand by for whatever order was issued to her.

As an adult however, Aayla was brought to market for sale to a new master to serve much more intimate duties. She was stripped in front of all those looking to buy a slave of 'quality' and sold within minutes.

Her new master was nothing like her last. He was driven by greed and lust, and seemed to be easily blinded by those sins. Often, Aayla served her duties with no complaints. She didn't know anything else than how to be a good servant, and so she didn't truly understand that what was happening to her was vile.

Within a year of her purchase however, several other slaves had managed to arrange an escape, freeing Aayla of her chains along with them. At first, the girl didn't know what to do... she thought of remaining, but after having listened to her fellow slaves for months, began to think that maybe there was more to life than just servitude. She was still uncertain of this, but she chose to follow those slaves that escaped.

How did they escape you might ask? Well, it definitely wasn't easy. They had to get through a few guards that had spotted them, but to Aayla's own surprise, she found that she was quite strong when it came to defending herself...

The first guard that attacked them was quickly subdued by the girl who kicked his head so hard, his neck broke and he immediately fell to the ground lifeless. From there, she was able to discover a plethra of skills she didn't know she had. For starters, she always knew she was strong, but wasn't aware of just how strong she was! Then, there was her speed! When she wanted to run she was so incredibly fast, it startled her and her comrades! When she was finally grabbed by one of the guards, even her shriek proved to be incredibly loud and painful!

With her newfound skills, the group managed to escape their new masters housing, fleeing to a neighboring town where they found ways to rid themselves of their shackles. From there, the group helped themselves stock up on some food (by stealing it of course) and then everyone went their seperate ways, each seeking out something different. Some sought out their lost kin, others moved on to return to their villages and some to find jobs. Aayla... well... she had to find out how to live on her own...
Role-Play Sample:

Aayla's foot slammed down hard on the chest of an enemy bandit that had stood in her way, his chest caving in enough to cause the man to internally bleed out. Her cold, emotionless yellow eyes stared into the very souls of his fellows comrades gathered around her. She had been contracted to capture, or kill a group of bandits that had been making it nearly impossible for the nearby village to get any food or medical supplies, and she planned to take this job quite seriously as it seemed her employer had connections to one of the Kou Empire's Generals.

"Come on men, it's just one girl! She may be strong but we have the numbers!"
One of the bandits cried out in an attempt to build up his team's morale. It didn't seem to work very well however as 3 of the bandits began to take steps away from Aayla. They weren't stupid, they recognized the signature hair color and ridiculous strength... This girl was a Fanalis! and by the looks of it a rather angry one at that! She had already gone and killed one of them as easily as if she had swatted a fly out of her way, what would make them think they stood a chance to fight her?

Nothing! The 3 men that had taken steps back began to retreat, running away from the rest of their company, to which Aayla would only shake her head. She would move her foot and plant it hard in the ground, using it to push herself forward at an amazing speed! She darted past the first bandit that spoke to encourage the others to attack her, and moved to cut off the cowards retreat.

*CRACK*
Her leg sailed through the air to collide with one of the bandits back in a jump kick that saw him kiss the ground likw a sack of potato's. As she landed, she pushed off the ground again and ran up to catch up with the second bandit, who at this point had stopped to brandish his sword and swing at the Fanalis woman. The sword would cut through her leather armor, but with a quick maneuever she would avoid any serious damage and punch the man hard in the face, breaking his nose and sending him crash backwards.

She darted towards the third who threw himself to the ground, arms above his head as he was quite loudly sobbing.

"I'm sorry! I'm so sorry please don't kill me! I'll give you anything! Money, jewels? Anything you want! Just please! spare me!"
He pleaded with her. Caught off guard by the mans sudden hysterics, Aayla would pause for a moment before picking the man up by the scruff. She would stare deeply into his tear filled eyes, watching the fear continue to grow within him before bringing her free hand up to collide with the side of his neck, angling it at a rather... impossible angle.

He wouldn't leave those villagers alone even if she accepted his bribe... she had learned to know better than to trust people like him... they were all liars.

With that, she would turn to face the bandit that had first issued orders to attack her.

"I am sorry, I have orders."
She said coldly, her yellow eyes seeming to glow as the light of the sun seemed to dance off of them, signaling the death that was about to stain the sands at their feet.



Last edited by Aayla on 08/09/16, 09:06 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 06/09/16, 11:29 am

Aayla

Aayla
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bump

3Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 06/09/16, 03:58 pm

Farid Issah

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Put this instead of the webpage link for your class.
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[b]Class:[/b]

Also, the reference isn't necessary, when you create a vault, you'll have a section specifically for those things listed.

Other than that, great work. :)

4Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 06/09/16, 10:48 pm

Aayla

Aayla
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That was a bad coding fail on my part. Fixed up and bump

5Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 06/09/16, 11:20 pm

Farid Issah

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1/2 approved

6Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 07/09/16, 12:32 am

Noir Ecryola

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Please explain how your rukh turns black o:
I didnt see the event in your history that said that she is cursing her fate so much and made her rukh turned black.

7Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 07/09/16, 09:07 am

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I figure it's something that she doesn't understand since there's so little of the world she knows. The more she learns about outside world, the more she comes to realize that her life so far has sucked and completely unfair to her.
So I guess it would be a bit of a transitional state for her since she's starting out kinda dumb lol

Her sadism is a way that she vents that frustration and anger

8Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 07/09/16, 10:04 am

Noir Ecryola

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Phobias/Fears must be at least 75 words in length, only 4 words more to go
Weight needs to be in kg
Height needs to be in cm

History Yes, but you need to put that in your history section. perhaps saying that because she realized that her life was a mess, she began to curse her fate for making her went through a very bad past.
Black rukh is cause by rejecting and hating one's fate. A character's rukh usually becomes black after an event that causes them to reject fate, such as losing a father to a misfortunate event, or a breaking point when being mistreated as a slave. We need to see that kind of trigger that could change your rukh into black in your history.
Having black rukh doesnt mean you are evil, and having white rukh doesnt mean you are good.

Please edit those and your character will be approved ^^

9Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 08/09/16, 09:07 pm

Aayla

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Just changed my Rukh to white, I want to RP her learning things and actually go through the process of her Rukh turning black so I'll cross that bridge when I get there.

Fixed the conversions and added a few words...

10Aayla - The stray warrior Empty Re: Aayla - The stray warrior 08/09/16, 09:14 pm

Duquin

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Character approved~

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Post your starting traits, abilities and weapon for approval:
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Any questions don't hesitate to ask!

P.S.

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[color=#ff0000][b]Name:[/b][/color] Aayla
[color=#ff0000][b]Country Affiliation:[/b][/color]Kou Empire
[color=#ff0000][b]Race:[/b][/color] Fanalis
[color=#ff0000][b]Tier:[/b][/color] D-Tier
[color=#ff0000][b]class:[/b][/color] Warrior
[color=#ff0000][b]Age + Birthdate:[/b][/color] 19 years old, exact birthdate unknown
[color=#ff0000][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Female
[color=#ff0000][b]Sexuality:[/b][/color] Straight
[color=#ff0000][b]Personality:[/b][/color] Aayla for the most part is a very quiet girl, as is customary of most girls who grew up as she did. To those she must speak too (friends, masters, employers, etc) she speaks only what she has too to get her point across. However, she is a very curious girl, so it isn't uncommon for her to suddenly droll into asking a million questions.

While she hates seeing children suffer, she has no issue with the suffering of adults, especially when it comes to a fight. She likes to break her enemies before finishing them off, causing the most bloodshed possible in the process. A real silent sadist.

She is usually incredibly selfish in everything she does. All that matters to her in the moment is her own safety and her own future. If you aren't a friend or employer, she may very well throw you under the bus to get what she wants, or accomplish what she needs to do.

She is by no means a leader. She would much rather follow someone's guidance than to trust her own due to the limited knowledge of her upbringing. Being a mercenary allows her to search for a strong employer or leader to follow.
[color=#ff0000][b]Likes:[/b][/color]
-She loves the thrill of a good fight
-She liked to be led, as she has always had someone to tell her what to do her whole live. She wouldn't know what to do without a master, or a friend to guide her.
-The bloodier the fight, the better. There's a strange, euphoric sense about being covered in your enemy's blood~
[color=#ff0000][b]Dislikes:[/b][/color]
-She dislikes being confined and alone in the dark.
-Doesn't like seeing young children getting hurt
-Spiders freak her the heck out.
[color=#ff0000][b]Aspirations:[/b][/color]
-As of right now, Aayla only wants to find somewhere where she can belong, and feel happy being there. She knew little more than the life of a slave and a mercenary, so is seeking to find something that fits within those lines, without having to go back to being a slave. She wants someone to call her own, though isn't sure if that means an employer, a lover or something different. She simply strives to build herself a better tomorrow by any means necessary.

Maybe one day, she may even become a guard or soldier within the Kou Empires armies... as she prefers to follow someone else's orders, thismay be the ultimate position for her to find herself in.
[color=#ff0000][b]Phobias/fears:[/b] [/color]
-While she doesn't mind serving others, Aayla never wants to be a slave again and that is why she fears anyone approaching her with chains, or the overall sound they make.
-The first master Aayla had as a child, was a strange looking human with dark tribal like tattoo's covering the right side of his face and ocean blue eyes. Anyone that has any similarities to her first master frightens her and she'll be sure to avoid them at all costs.
[color=#ff0000][b]Face-Claim:[/b] [/color]elsword elesis crimson avenger
[color=#ff0000][b]Hair Color:[/b][/color] Crimson
[color=#ff0000][b]Eye Color:[/b][/color] Yellow
[color=#ff0000][b]Height:[/b] [/color]160cm
[color=#ff0000][b]Weight:[/b] [/color]68kg
[color=#ff0000][b]Appearance:[/b][/color] Aayla doesn't try to hide her body behind leathers or armor, finding that they slow her down, she instead dresses herself in a red, low cut cotton shirt that's open at the back, revealing the scar on her back. She wears black pants of the same material, with two leather belts strapped around her waist to hold her supplies. On her arms, she wears two black and red long sleeve gloves that stop just before her shoulders.
Her hair is usually tied back into a loose kind of pony tail with strands loose next to her bangs. When she fights, this gives her a more wild look to her which helps in scaring opponents.
[color=#ff0000][b]Rukh Alignment:[/b][/color] White Rukh
[color=#ff0000][b]Special Features:[/b][/color] Besides the classic crimson hair of the Fanalis, Aayla has a rather deep looking scar that spreads out over and down her spine, reaching out and almost resembling the mark of a spider.
[color=#ff0000][b]History:[/b][/color]
Like many Fanalis, Aayla was taken from her people at a very young age. She doesn't remember what life was like with her family, nor does she remember faces or voices, or if she had any siblings. All those memories fell into obscurity as she was taken to be a slave within the Kou Empire.

Most of her young life was spent working large fields with many other slaves. The children would work outside harvesting crops, building fences and caring for the livestock.

As an adolescent, Aayla was taken to instead serve her master and his guests. She was made to wear fine clothing to cover her chains, and dressed up to look appealing. While she was too young to be sold into the market for more... adult pleasantries, she was of a fine age to be presented as a potential sale. She would serve by bringing her master his food, or serving his guests tea and over-all being ready to stand by for whatever order was issued to her.

As an adult however, Aayla was brought to market for sale to a new master to serve much more intimate duties. She was stripped in front of all those looking to buy a slave of 'quality' and sold within minutes.

Her new master was nothing like her last. He was driven by greed and lust, and seemed to be easily blinded by those sins. Often, Aayla served her duties with no complaints. She didn't know anything else than how to be a good servant, and so she didn't truly understand that what was happening to her was vile.

Within a year of her purchase however, several other slaves had managed to arrange an escape, freeing Aayla of her chains along with them. At first, the girl didn't know what to do... she thought of remaining, but after having listened to her fellow slaves for months, began to think that maybe there was more to life than just servitude. She was still uncertain of this, but she chose to follow those slaves that escaped.

How did they escape you might ask? Well, it definitely wasn't easy. They had to get through a few guards that had spotted them, but to Aayla's own surprise, she found that she was quite strong when it came to defending herself...

The first guard that attacked them was quickly subdued by the girl who kicked his head so hard, his neck broke and he immediately fell to the ground lifeless. From there, she was able to discover a plethra of skills she didn't know she had. For starters, she always knew she was strong, but wasn't aware of just how strong she was! Then, there was her speed! When she wanted to run she was so incredibly fast, it startled her and her comrades! When she was finally grabbed by one of the guards, even her shriek proved to be incredibly loud and painful!

With her newfound skills, the group managed to escape their new masters housing, fleeing to a neighboring town where they found ways to rid themselves of their shackles. From there, the group helped themselves stock up on some food (by stealing it of course) and then everyone went their seperate ways, each seeking out something different. Some sought out their lost kin, others moved on to return to their villages and some to find jobs. Aayla... well... she had to find out how to live on her own...
[color=#ff0000][b]Role-Play Sample:[/b][/color]

Aayla's foot slammed down hard on the chest of an enemy bandit that had stood in her way, his chest caving in enough to cause the man to internally bleed out. Her cold, emotionless yellow eyes stared into the very souls of his fellows comrades gathered around her. She had been contracted to capture, or kill a group of bandits that had been making it nearly impossible for the nearby village to get any food or medical supplies, and she planned to take this job quite seriously as it seemed her employer had connections to one of the Kou Empire's Generals.

"Come on men, it's just one girl! She may be strong but we have the numbers!"
One of the bandits cried out in an attempt to build up his team's morale. It didn't seem to work very well however as 3 of the bandits began to take steps away from Aayla. They weren't stupid, they recognized the signature hair color and ridiculous strength... This girl was a Fanalis! and by the looks of it a rather angry one at that! She had already gone and killed one of them as easily as if she had swatted a fly out of her way, what would make them think they stood a chance to fight her?

Nothing! The 3 men that had taken steps back began to retreat, running away from the rest of their company, to which Aayla would only shake her head. She would move her foot and plant it hard in the ground, using it to push herself forward at an amazing speed! She darted past the first bandit that spoke to encourage the others to attack her, and moved to cut off the cowards retreat.

*CRACK*
Her leg sailed through the air to collide with one of the bandits back in a jump kick that saw him kiss the ground likw a sack of potato's. As she landed, she pushed off the ground again and ran up to catch up with the second bandit, who at this point had stopped to brandish his sword and swing at the Fanalis woman. The sword would cut through her leather armor, but with a quick maneuever she would avoid any serious damage and punch the man hard in the face, breaking his nose and sending him crash backwards.

She darted towards the third who threw himself to the ground, arms above his head as he was quite loudly sobbing.

"I'm sorry! I'm so sorry please don't kill me! I'll give you anything! Money, jewels? Anything you want! Just please! spare me!"
He pleaded with her. Caught off guard by the mans sudden hysterics, Aayla would pause for a moment before picking the man up by the scruff. She would stare deeply into his tear filled eyes, watching the fear continue to grow within him before bringing her free hand up to collide with the side of his neck, angling it at a rather... impossible angle.

He wouldn't leave those villagers alone even if she accepted his bribe... she had learned to know better than to trust people like him... they were all liars.

With that, she would turn to face the bandit that had first issued orders to attack her.

"I am sorry, I have orders."
She said coldly, her yellow eyes seeming to glow as the light of the sun seemed to dance off of them, signaling the death that was about to stain the sands at their feet.

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