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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling)

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Vardreth

Vardreth
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Magic ability for my weapon Desceld that I would like to train:

Gold Dragon Garden's Tail and Fin
Tier: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
Scaling: For every additional 10 magoi, the length of the tail and fin increases by 5 meters.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20
Description:

  • The root of the Gold Dragon Garden grow, expanding after being fed magoi. This creates a root that shoots up from the ground to 10 meters in height.
  • The root grows a razor-sharp leaf in the shape of a dragon's fin that is 10 meters long, 10 cm thick (tapering off to be razor-thin at its edge). upon this root and leaf are 'scales' made from thorns, equally sharp.
  • The tail proceeds to spin around like a blender, dealing A-Tier damage to those that come in contact with it, whether it is contact with the blade or with the root/blade's body from the sharpness of the thorns.



Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling
Tier: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
Scaling: For every additional 10 magoi, the area of effect increases by 5 meters.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20
Description:

  • The root of the Gold Dragon Garden rapidly expands and splits, grasping upon any and all within 10 meters of the epicenter of the Gold Dragon Garden and immobilizing them by keeping their entire body tightly coiled around until the energy feeding its power is cut or until it is forcibly broken by A-tier damage.
  • These roots expand either in a direction of the user's choosing or in a diameter with the Gold Dragon Garden as the center.


Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect
Tier: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be capable of using Magoi Manipulation. Must be wielding Desceld while this ability is being channeled. It takes 5 seconds for Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect to form.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi spent, the size of the Gold Dragon Aspect increases by a tier (6 meters in length, 3 meter in diameter for the exterior Dragon Aspect and 9 meters in length with 1.5 meters in diameter for its 'tongue', or interior Dragon Aspect).
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20
Description:

  • As the user feeds Magoi into the weapon a number of vines rapidly expel from the pommel of the sword. These vines are all interconnected, and form a 'miniature' plant dragon which coils in the style of a Chinese dragon with claw-shaped leaves and a bloomed golden bud that imitates the jaws of a dragon. The plant dragon is 6 meters in length and 3 meters in diameter. Inside the dragon's maw is a hollowed out area; the interior 'walls' of the dragon are filled with razor sharp edges to the vines. Within this area is a 'tongue'; a single root that splits into many ends which is 9 meters in length and 1.5 meter in diameter.
  • The tongue of the dragon, with B-Tier durability, lays coiled within the mouth until it fires out and entangles all those it comes into contact with, 'holding' them while it returns into the mouth.
  • The tongue is then 'combed' by the interior of the Gold Dragon's Maw, dragging those who were captured through the sharp interior and dealing B-Tier damage.
  • The Dragon Aspect's exterior is always in contact with the body of the user, and is directed with magoi manipulation in order to function.



Last edited by Vardreth on 14/08/16, 11:25 pm; edited 2 times in total


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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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The first 2 abilities is fine for me, but I need some time to discuss about the 3rd ability with the other creation member. Please wait until we finished discussing about that one ^^


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) GONhvwv

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Gold Dragon Garden's Tail: How many attacks can the ability do with each use? Yes it is an AOE, but you wont get away with having a 100 individual dragon tails with each sustain of the ability.

Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect: The tongue of the dragon should be noted to have B-tier durability. Why is Magoi manipulation required for this ability?


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) GONhvwv

Vardreth

Vardreth
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Gold Dragon Garden's Tail: How many attacks can the ability do with each use? Yes it is an AOE, but you wont get away with having a 100 individual dragon tails with each sustain of the ability.


Since I can't choose a 'Vladimir's Garden' type of visual effect to the AOE ability, I'll simply create a 'Blender's Garden' instead. It looses quite a bit of its 'cool factor', but if I split it into a numbered function instead then my damage would get nerfed, and if I limit the number then there would be a lot less versatility in the usage of the scaling capabilities.


Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect: The tongue of the dragon should be noted to have B-tier durability. Why is Magoi manipulation required for this ability?


Fixed by including the B-Tier durability. I added magoi manipulation to the requirement of the ability in order to justify being capable of directing the 'head' of the dragon during a fight so that it makes more sense when controlling it. It also gives reason to require it to stick near my character instead of being capable of being sent out to attack from a long range with near impunity. If this is unnecessary, I don't mind removing the requirement and changing the spell to a 'long range' type of spell in order to increase its power/capabilities.


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Merrze

Merrze
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It's seems the described issues were fixed, I don't really see anymore issues unless the others do, so it has my half approval.


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) BB2kzwq
Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) TXTx1qB
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Ariel

Ariel
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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) BXPpSGDm

Approved!

Code:
[center][b]Gold Dragon Garden's Tail and Fin[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every additional 10 magoi, the length of the tail and fin increases by 5 meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]The root of the Gold Dragon Garden grow, expanding after being fed magoi. This creates a root that shoots up from the ground to 10 meters in height.
[*]The root grows a razor-sharp leaf in the shape of a dragon's fin that is 10 meters long, 10 cm thick (tapering off to be razor-thin at its edge). upon this root and leaf are 'scales' made from thorns, equally sharp.
[*]The tail proceeds to spin around like a blender, dealing A-Tier damage to those that come in contact with it, whether it is contact with the blade or with the root/blade's body from the sharpness of the thorns.
[/list]

Code:
[center][b]Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every additional 10 magoi, the area of effect increases by 5 meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]The root of the Gold Dragon Garden rapidly expands and splits, grasping upon any and all within 10 meters of the epicenter of the Gold Dragon Garden and immobilizing them by keeping their entire body tightly coiled around until the energy feeding its power is cut or until it is forcibly broken by A-tier damage.
[*]These roots expand either in a direction of the user's choosing or in a diameter with the Gold Dragon Garden as the center.
[/list]

Code:
[center][b]Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be capable of using Magoi Manipulation. Must be wielding Desceld while this ability is being channeled. It takes 5 seconds for Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect to form.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi spent, the size of the Gold Dragon Aspect increases by a tier (6 meters in length, 3 meter in diameter for the exterior Dragon Aspect and 9 meters in length with 1.5 meters in diameter for its 'tongue', or interior Dragon Aspect).
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]As the user feeds Magoi into the weapon a number of vines rapidly expel from the pommel of the sword. These vines are all interconnected, and form a 'miniature' plant dragon which coils in the style of a Chinese dragon with claw-shaped leaves and a bloomed golden bud that imitates the jaws of a dragon. The plant dragon is 6 meters in length and 3 meters in diameter. Inside the dragon's maw is a hollowed out area; the interior 'walls' of the dragon are filled with razor sharp edges to the vines. Within this area is a 'tongue'; a single root that splits into many ends which is 9 meters in length and 1.5 meter in diameter.
[*]The tongue of the dragon, with B-Tier durability, lays coiled within the mouth until it fires out and entangles all those it comes into contact with, 'holding' them while it returns into the mouth.
[*]The tongue is then 'combed' by the interior of the Gold Dragon's Maw, dragging those who were captured through the sharp interior and dealing B-Tier damage.
[*]The Dragon Aspect's exterior is always in contact with the body of the user, and is directed with magoi manipulation in order to function.
[/list]


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Vardreth

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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) Approval_zpsoloj6ntd

Training approved for Gold Dragon Garden's Tail and Fin, add to vault ^^

Code:
[center][b]Gold Dragon Garden's Tail and Fin[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every additional 10 magoi, the length of the tail and fin increases by 5 meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]The root of the Gold Dragon Garden grow, expanding after being fed magoi. This creates a root that shoots up from the ground to 10 meters in height.
[*]The root grows a razor-sharp leaf in the shape of a dragon's fin that is 10 meters long, 10 cm thick (tapering off to be razor-thin at its edge). upon this root and leaf are 'scales' made from thorns, equally sharp.
[*]The tail proceeds to spin around like a blender, dealing A-Tier damage to those that come in contact with it, whether it is contact with the blade or with the root/blade's body from the sharpness of the thorns.
[/list]


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) GONhvwv

Vardreth

Vardreth
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Learning the 4th spell, Desceld Golden Dragon Aspect:
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6826-revisiting-the-military-academy#37455


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Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) HVhvTYv

Remember to add the code below to your vault, but I'm sure you already know that. :]

Code:

[center][b]Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be capable of using Magoi Manipulation. Must be wielding Desceld while this ability is being channeled. It takes 5 seconds for Desceld, Gold Dragon Aspect to form.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi spent, the size of the Gold Dragon Aspect increases by a tier (6 meters in length, 3 meter in diameter for the exterior Dragon Aspect and 9 meters in length with 1.5 meters in diameter for its 'tongue', or interior Dragon Aspect).
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]As the user feeds Magoi into the weapon a number of vines rapidly expel from the pommel of the sword. These vines are all interconnected, and form a 'miniature' plant dragon which coils in the style of a Chinese dragon with claw-shaped leaves and a bloomed golden bud that imitates the jaws of a dragon. The plant dragon is 6 meters in length and 3 meters in diameter. Inside the dragon's maw is a hollowed out area; the interior 'walls' of the dragon are filled with razor sharp edges to the vines. Within this area is a 'tongue'; a single root that splits into many ends which is 9 meters in length and 1.5 meter in diameter.
[*]The tongue of the dragon, with B-Tier durability, lays coiled within the mouth until it fires out and entangles all those it comes into contact with, 'holding' them while it returns into the mouth.
[*]The tongue is then 'combed' by the interior of the Gold Dragon's Maw, dragging those who were captured through the sharp interior and dealing B-Tier damage.
[*]The Dragon Aspect's exterior is always in contact with the body of the user, and is directed with magoi manipulation in order to function.
[/list]


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) BgH0fcQ
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Traits Points: 0/8
Shards of Solomon: x2

Vardreth

Vardreth
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Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling:

Begins here (more than 5k wc, beware):
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8033-a-fated-fight-for-love-b-tier-reserved-amaya-vardreth#43296


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Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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A-Tier
Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) HVhvTYv

Code:
[center][b]Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] At least one instance of the function for Desceld, Gold Dragon Garden, must be in use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every additional 10 magoi, the area of effect increases by 5 meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]The root of the Gold Dragon Garden rapidly expands and splits, grasping upon any and all within 10 meters of the epicenter of the Gold Dragon Garden and immobilizing them by keeping their entire body tightly coiled around until the energy feeding its power is cut or until it is forcibly broken by A-tier damage.
[*]These roots expand either in a direction of the user's choosing or in a diameter with the Gold Dragon Garden as the center.
[/list]


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Magic Weapon ability (Desceld; Gold Dragon Garden's Tail, Gold Dragon Garden's Coiling) BgH0fcQ
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Traits Points: 0/8
Shards of Solomon: x2

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