Slicer[Starter weapon]

Name: Slicer
Tier: D
Type: Gauntlet
Material: Chainlink and Hardened Leather for the protective gauntlet while it has Steel for the blades/protective knuckles
Appearance: Slicer is a gauntlet that Tuo's father especially made for the boy since he is a physical and upbeat fighter. It protects his right hand all the way toward the elbow. The blades on it a dyed red and black so that when sun hits it, it would show little light in case he's trying to ambush people.The blades attached to the knuckles of the gauntlet extend 8.89 centimeters out and are 12.7cm long in total with approximately a centimeter thick till it comes to the tip where it could easily slide between chainmail.

Please add the size dimensions. How long do the blades reach? How thick are they? Ect.

editted

Sup, I'm End and I'll be taking a look at this now.

The only problem I'm seeing so far is that the dimensions of the weapon need to be a bit clearer and more defined. An example of this is that saying "The blade extend 3 inches past the knuckles" isn't as good as "The blades attached to the knuckles of the gauntlet extend X inches and are X inches long in total". Okay? A little bit of extra detail goes a long way.

bump and fix

You need to change the measurements to metric, also carbon fiber wasn't invented till the late 1800s our time and the magiworld is much further behind. So such a thing wouldn't exist in this time. Pretty cool weapon though, once you make those edits you should be good ^-^

and there we go...i think lol.

Good catch on the carbon fiber, I can't believe I missed that v.v

Anyways, this is acceptable to me. Approved and added to your vault.

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[b]Name:[/b] Slicer
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Gauntlet
[b]Material:[/b] Chainlink and Hardened Leather for the protective gauntlet while it has Steel for the blades/protective knuckles
[b]Appearance:[/b] Slicer is a gauntlet that Tuo's father especially made for the boy since he is a physical and upbeat fighter. It protects his right hand all the way toward the elbow. The blades on it a dyed red and black so that when sun hits it, it would show little light in case he's trying to ambush people.The blades attached to the knuckles of the gauntlet extend 8.89 centimeters out and are 12.7cm long in total with approximately a centimeter thick till it comes to the tip where it could easily slide between chainmail.