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1Val Techs  Empty Val Techs 13/01/16, 08:15 pm

Jason Achilles

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Name: Stab
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10 stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts/sustain +1
Description: Val stab the opponent at a 15m/s. This would deal C Tier.



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2Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 02:33 pm

Jason Achilles

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BUMP

3Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 03:15 pm

Merrze

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There is no need for scale in this ability. You also forgot to list how much damage the attack does to the enemy. Also the range would be close unless you are actually moving forward 2 meters which would have to be described in the ability making it Supplementary also.


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4Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 03:16 pm

Jason Achilles

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BUMP

5Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 06:17 pm

Ariella Negri

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please re-read what Merrze state, as none of her issues were addressed. If you move 2m to lunge and then stab, you would have to classify this as a supp/off ability as you move and deal damage. You did not list the damage dealt and there would be no scale for this ability.


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6Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 06:46 pm

Jason Achilles

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Hello Ari and Mer. I am very sorry that i bumped 2 times without actually correcting it. idk what happened but now i fixed my mistakes so BUMP.

7Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 17/01/16, 11:54 pm

Jason Achilles

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BUMP IT UP

8Val Techs  Empty Re: Val Techs 18/01/16, 12:15 am

Noir Ecryola

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Approved for Training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Stab
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts/sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Val stab the opponent at a 15m/s. This would deal C Tier.[/quote]


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