Val Techs

Jason Achilles · 1 Val Techs 13/01/16, 07:15 pm

Jason Achilles

β-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(330/330)

Name: Stab
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10 stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts/sustain +1
Description: Val stab the opponent at a 15m/s. This would deal C Tier.

Last edited by Val Achilles on 16/01/16, 05:41 pm; edited 2 times in total

Jason Achilles · 2 Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 01:33 pm

Jason Achilles

β-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(330/330)

BUMP

Merrze · 3 Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 02:15 pm

Merrze

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(240/240)
Stamina:

(590/590)

There is no need for scale in this ability. You also forgot to list how much damage the attack does to the enemy. Also the range would be close unless you are actually moving forward 2 meters which would have to be described in the ability making it Supplementary also.

Jason Achilles · 4 Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 02:16 pm

Jason Achilles

β-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(330/330)

BUMP

Ariella Negri · 5 Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 05:17 pm

Ariella Negri

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(600/600)
Stamina:

(100/100)

please re-read what Merrze state, as none of her issues were addressed. If you move 2m to lunge and then stab, you would have to classify this as a supp/off ability as you move and deal damage. You did not list the damage dealt and there would be no scale for this ability.

Jason Achilles · 6 Re: Val Techs 16/01/16, 05:46 pm

Jason Achilles

β-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(330/330)

Hello Ari and Mer. I am very sorry that i bumped 2 times without actually correcting it. idk what happened but now i fixed my mistakes so BUMP.

Jason Achilles · 7 Re: Val Techs 17/01/16, 10:54 pm

Jason Achilles

β-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(330/330)

BUMP IT UP

Noir Ecryola · 8 Re: Val Techs 17/01/16, 11:15 pm

Noir Ecryola

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(570/570)
Stamina:

(260/260)

Approved for Training~

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Stab [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts/sustain +1 [b]Description:[/b] Val stab the opponent at a 15m/s. This would deal C Tier.[/quote]