Solomon King Nature's Embrace Tool Ability

Name: Nature's Fury
Tier:B-tier
Cost: 30 Magoi
Element: Life Magic
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Using tree seeds from a bag, or that are naturally upon the ground, Solomon produces 15 meter high growth of trees that move forward and pierce up and down from the ground like spikes. These spikes start at 4 cm in width before reaching a total of 1 meter in width. As these trees move forward, they destroy things in their path, almost like a wave. They discharge in a 15 meter diameter within 30 meters of him at 20 m/s, dealing B-Tier damage. The spikes will then turn into trees when fully emerged and grow and die at a regular rate for trees. If seeds or they are not naturally upon the ground the skill will still work just the tree will die after use.

you have height and width of the tree wave, but not the thickness. I know that the tree remain if not dealt with, but how thick is the initial wave (not taking into consideration that the trees won't go away on their own)? Also, please make sure to include sustain cost :)

not sure if i'm required to bump lol but bump

To answer your above question, yes ^_^. Whenever an edit is made, we aren't aware of it until it is bumped. I'm unaware of there being a follow option for whenever somebody edits a post in a thread...

Anyways, I edited your ability a bit. I want to mention that the only way for a spell to remain after it has been cast is if the product of its creation was originally physically present.

Therefore, in order to use this ability as it is, you must have a bag of tree seeds that this spell manipulates and grows if you want it to stick around for elongated periods of time.

You forgot sustain cost as well.

I changed the width of the individual trees to fit better aesthetically (in my opinion. You may want the tree wave to just be a single tree 15 meters in thickness).

If the below is fine, then it is approved for training:

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[b]Name:[/b] Nature's Fury
[b]Tier:[/b]B-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Using tree seeds from a bag, or that are naturally upon the ground, Solomon produces 15 meter high growth of trees that move forward and pierce up and down from the ground like spikes. These spikes start at 4 cm in width before reaching a total of 1 meter in width. As these trees move forward, they destroy things in their path, almost like a wave. They discharge in a 15 meter diameter within 30 meters of him at 20 m/s, dealing B-Tier damage. The spikes will then turn into trees when fully emerged and grow and die at a regular rate for trees.

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Approved for training as written below:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Nature's Fury
[b]Tier:[/b]B-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]  Solomon produces 15 meter high growth of trees that move forward and pierce up and down from the ground like spikes. These spikes start at 4 cm in width before reaching a total of 1 meter in width. As these trees move forward, they destroy things in their path, almost like a wave. They discharge in a 15 meter diameter within 30 meters of him at 20 m/s, dealing B-Tier damage. The spikes will then turn into trees when fully emerged and grow and die at a regular rate for trees if actual tree seeds were used, otherwise they will wither away and disappear.

trained via voucher:
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p120-ability-vouchers#29275

add to vault~