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1Necromancy to train for. Empty Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 03:40 am

Lestacia

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Abilities for Lestacia

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Name: Reveria
Tier:D
Cost:10/5
Element:Life
Class: Offensive
Range:10m
Cool-Down:2 posts (Sustain +1)
Description: The caster of this spell lifts a hand up, and a skeltal version of said hand shoots from the ground. It then swipes everything away in a 5 meter radius as it goes 10m/s dealing D-tier damage to anything it hits.

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Name: Field of Famine
Tier:C
Cost:20/10
Element:Life
Class:Offensive
Range:10m
Cool-Down:3 posts (Sustain +1)
Description:  The caster stabs their staff into the ground  and a field of bones 10 meters in diameter is generated 10m/s. From where the caster is a giant wall of bones protrudes from the ground 10m in height. surrounding the mage. With a simple hand gesture the bones push anything in front of them further away and out of the circle. When pushed the Skeletal hands deal C-tier Damage.

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Name: Rezomreis
Tier:C
Cost:20/10
Element:Life
Class:Offensive
Range:20m
Cool-Down:3 posts (Sustain +1)
Description:  The caster stabs their staff into the ground and a large Zombie 200cm in size, claws it's way from underground. The Zombie will move towards an enemy at 10m/s. If and when it makes contact with the enemy or an ally it will explode dealing C-tier damage.



Last edited by Lestacia on 10/07/15, 12:40 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 07:46 pm

Vardreth

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For Reveria, you'll need to put in that it does D-Tier damage since it is an offensive spell.

For Field of Famine you will need to add the height of the bone wall, and also make sure the scale is correct (10 meters is the highest/largest in diameter that it can be).

Rezomreis can explode and deal damage, however the damage over time abilities are limited to Poison magic and Plague magic.

3Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 08:25 pm

Lestacia

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it has been edited

4Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 08:33 pm

Vardreth

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As it stands, Field of Famine looks supplementary because it is pushing people away. Is it supposed to deal damage? If it is, please add the damage ^_^.

5Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 08:48 pm

Lestacia

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aaaaand added the damage

6Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 09:18 pm

Vardreth

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Alrighty, I made some final edits to make sure everything meshes correctly. If you're fine with them, bump and let me know~ The following will be approved for training:


As a note, my biggest changes was making sure Reveria was a diameter, not a radius and changing Field of Famine from being both an Offensive and Supplementary ability (Dealing damage and causing knockback).

If there were still changes you would like to make, don't hesitate to mention them.


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[b]Name:[/b] Reveria
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Cost:[/b]10/5
[b]Element:[/b]Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]2 posts (Sustain +1)
[b]Description:[/b] The caster of this spell lifts a hand up, and a skeltal version of said hand shoots from the ground. It then swipes everything away in a 5 meter radius as it goes 10m/s dealing D-tier damage to anything it hits.

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[b]Name:[/b] Field of Famine
[b]Tier:[/b]C
[b]Cost:[/b]20/10
[b]Element:[/b]Life
[b]Class:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]3 posts (Sustain +1)
[b]Description:[/b]  The caster stabs their staff into the ground and a field of bones 10 meters in diameter is generated at 10m/s. From where the caster is a giant wall of bones protrudes from the ground 10m in height. surrounding the mage. With a simple hand gesture the bones push anything in front of them, dealing C-tier Damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Rezomreis
[b]Tier:[/b]C
[b]Cost:[/b]20/10
[b]Element:[/b]Life
[b]Class:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]20m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]3 posts (Sustain +1)
[b]Description:[/b]  The caster stabs their staff into the ground and a large Zombie 200cm in size, claws it's way from underground. The Zombie will move towards an enemy at 10m/s. If and when it makes contact with the enemy or an ally it will explode dealing C-tier damage.

7Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 08/07/15, 09:26 pm

Lestacia

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I'm fine with that thank you.

8Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 10/07/15, 01:13 am

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9Necromancy to train for. Empty Re: Necromancy to train for. 10/07/15, 02:55 am

Vardreth

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Almost everything checks out~ It just needs to have the ability usage actually in bold.

I do want to make mention that creating zombies and skeletons doesn't actually require black Rukh to do.

Spoilers at the following link:
http://magi.wikia.com/wiki/Rukh

Either way, what you've wrote is quite fine as-is ^_^. It's just that either the magician is mistaken or intentionally misleading you, if you're cool with having it written that way.

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