Caphalor 5 starter abilities [done]

1.
Name: Shield Dash
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: Shield
Class: supplementary
Range: close
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Caphalor uses his shield to push away his opponent. It willknock the opponent back 1 meter. He moves the shield with 10 m/s. The maximum range is 70 centimeters. The abiletie is not a sustain abiltie.

2.
Name: Unbreakable
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10 stamina
Weapon Type: shield
Class: defensive
Range: close
Cool-Down: 2+1
Description: Caphalor hides behind his shield to void getting damaged. The ailety will protect him against 1 b tier, 2 C tier or 4 D tier attacks. He can sustain the abilitie if he wants to. He hides behind his shield with the speed of 10 m/s.

3.
Name: The butcher
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: cleaver
Class: offensive
Range: close
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: When getting hit by the clever you get hit by D-tier damage. The clade moves with a speed of 10 m/s in dimensional from left or right shoulder all th way down to the left or right side of the hips. The abilety only is for 1 attack. The maximum range is 2 meter

4.
Name: Cleavbleed
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5 stamina
Weapon Type: Cleaver
Class: Supplementary
Range: close
Cool-Down: 2+1 posts
Description: The cleavers blade turns red.  When you are hit the cleaver turn ack to its normal metal colour. The wound of the attack has extra bleed damage. This will be D tier damage for 1 the opponents posts. The blade moves with a speed of 10 m/s. It does not matter when he activates the attack if he attacks dimensional vertical or horizontal. The idea is to cut the wound for the bleed damage. The maximum range is 2 meter

5.
Name: Skullclash
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: Head
Class: supplementary
Range: close
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Caphalor uses his head to attack his opponent. He hits the opponent hard with his own head and can imobilize his opponent for 1 post. The head moves witha  speed of 10 m/s. The maximum range is 45 cm and it imobelizes one limb. If it hits the arm then that arm is imobilized for 1 post. If i hit his leg its his leg or if i hit his head then his head is imobilzed for 1 post. The abiltie is for 1 attack and is not sustained.

For all abilities, Class should be Offensive, Supplementary, or Defensive. Range would be "Close" All abilities need to have a speed listed for them. D-tiers may not combine Offensive, Supplementary or Defensive.

Please make sure you are reading the ability guidelines when creating your abilities.

Shield Dash: This can either force the opponent back as a Supplementary or it can deal damage as an Offensive, it cannot do both at D-tier.

Double cleaving: The amount rules for D-tier state only 1, so he would not be able to perform two slashes with the ability.

Cleavbleed: This can either deal damage directly as an offensive or passively as a Bleed Supplementary effect. A D-tier bleed effect will only cause a bleed effect for a single post.

Skullclash: This ability may either deal 1 D-tier damage as an offensive ability or it may immobilize a single limb for 1 post as a Supplementary.

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did what you said
srry noticed i was not really awake when i made them.ty i hope everything is alright now ^_^

Shield Dash: This would be Supplementary, as it is not blocking damage. You need to include the speed at which the shield moves, which for D-tier would be 10 m/s. Also include the sustain cost, as ALL abilities are now sustained.

Unbreakable: Please include the speed at which he moves to hide behind the shield.

The butcher: Please include the speed the cleaver moves at and how the cleaver is being moved. Is it a vertical or horizontal slash? Is it a jab?

Cleavbleed: Please include the speed the blade moves at. As you are listing this as simple bleed damage, it would need to be considered Supplementary, not offensive, as Bleed is a status effect.

Skullclash: Again, a D-tier ability may only immobilize a SINGLE limb for 1 post, not the entire body. You also need to include the speed he moves his head at.

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i hope itsbetter now Anythign else i need to change or include
pmed you about it

All abilities are sustainable, since Duration was removed.

Range is close for close-up attacks. The reason why we don't describe range for abilities is that you could get another cleaver that is longer, and then the range would be wrong. You use the weapon and arm length to determine the reach of the attack.


Cleavbleed: The blade isn't magical, so it shouldn't really be changing colors.

Skullclash:
Immobilization: This status effect is a temporary one. If the thing that is immobilizing the limb or body is removed, then the immobilization ends. Paralysis can only be obtained by Stealth users and Lightning mages, which paralyses a body part without needing constant force. This means your head would constantly have to be pushed against the opponent for the immobilization to continue.



I've cleaned up all of the abilities, so they should be good to go as below. Let me know if you want to remove any or change any, or if you're fine with it, and then we'll get it to the approved section~

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1.
[b]Name:[/b] Shield Dash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor uses his shield to push away his opponent. It will knock the opponent back 1 meter. He moves the shield with 10 m/s.

2.
[b]Name:[/b] Unbreakable
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] shield
[b]Class:[/b] defensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor hides behind his shield to avoid getting damaged with the speed of 10 m/s. The ability will protect him against 1 b tier, 2 C tier or 4 D tier attacks.

3.
[b]Name:[/b] The butcher
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] cleaver
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] When getting hit by the clever you get hit by D-tier damage. The cleaver moves with a speed of 10 m/s in dimensional from left or right shoulder all the way down to the left or right side of the hips.

4.
[b]Name:[/b] Cleavbleed
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Cleaver
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] The wound of the next attack has extra bleed damage. This will be D tier damage for 1 the opponents posts. The blade moves with a speed of 10 m/s.

5.
[b]Name:[/b] Skullclash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Head
[b]Class:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor uses his head to attack his opponent. He hits the opponent hard with his own head and can immobilize 1 limb of his opponent's for 1 post. The head moves with a speed of 10 m/s.

i fine with this ty but why is everythign now sustained before it wasnt like that.
Is that something new maby?

ty for your help you kind of know what i mean to say only can write it better down then i do hehe anyway thx garret you are awesome

Yea, it was changed a while back. Almost half a month ago, I think?

Anyways, you're all set. No worries. I forgot that immobilization is actually for 2 posts, so use this here~

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1.
[b]Name:[/b] Shield Dash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor uses his shield to push away his opponent. It will knock the opponent back 1 meter. He moves the shield with 10 m/s.

2.
[b]Name:[/b] Unbreakable
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] shield
[b]Class:[/b] defensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor hides behind his shield to avoid getting damaged with the speed of 10 m/s. The ability will protect him against 1 b tier, 2 C tier or 4 D tier attacks.

3.
[b]Name:[/b] The butcher
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] cleaver
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] When getting hit by the clever you get hit by D-tier damage. The cleaver moves with a speed of 10 m/s in dimensional from left or right shoulder all the way down to the left or right side of the hips.

4.
[b]Name:[/b] Cleavbleed
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Cleaver
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] The wound of the next attack has extra bleed damage. This will be D tier damage for 1 the opponents posts. The blade moves with a speed of 10 m/s.

5.
[b]Name:[/b] Skullclash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Head
[b]Class:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Caphalor uses his head to attack his opponent. He hits the opponent hard with his own head and can immobilize 1 limb of his opponent's for 2 posts. The head moves with a speed of 10 m/s.

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