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1Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Orie's time to shine Desu on 20/04/15, 05:43 am

Lagi

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Name: Anomaly Internal Revert
Tier: B
Cost:30 Stamina
Role:Support
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Instead of actual damage, Orie can  revert the lingering anomalously from the host body that was inflicted by status effects. This means that B rank and lower status effects are  healed  by the activation of this technique. Orie Must be using Host body.

Name: Outer Cell Repair
Tier: B
Cost:30 Stamina
Role:Support
Range: 15 Meters
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Orie can fire off a goop from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s, the size of the goop is 7 meters. Depending on where the goop lands, those inflicted by the group would be healed for B rank damage over 3 posts. The 7 meter puddle can be anywhere within 15 meters of Lagi.

Name: Digestive Slime bomb
Tier: B
Cost:30 Stamina
Role:Assassin
Range: 15 Meters
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Orie can fire off a goop from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s, the size of the goop is 7 meters and it travels as far as 15 meters. The symbiosis protects the Host body from the digestive properties from the goop, which means that lagi takes no damage in order to execute. This goop can  inflict B rank damage in the form of second degree burns upon contact. When sustained Orie can manipulate the existing goop attack from within a 15 meter radius of where lagi is in order to  chase down and consume the target at the same speed  or fire off another one.

Name:  Super Cell Repair
Tier: A
Cost:40 Stamina
Role:Support
Range: 15 Meters
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Orie can instantly heal Lagi's body of A-tier damage while reacting to damage at 30 m/s.

Name:  Goop Acid bullets
Tier: B
Cost:30 Stamina
Role: Assassin
Range: 15 Meters
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are 2 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body. The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. The bullets move as fast as 25 m/s an reach as far as 15 meters. Each bullet inflicts D-tier damage.



Last edited by King Lagi on 20/04/15, 09:16 am; edited 1 time in total


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2Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 20/04/15, 07:53 am

Ariella Negri

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Anomaly Internal Revert: You could heal a B-tier status effect, but you would not be able to 'half' a higher tier status effect. You aren't CLASHING with the status effect, just undoing damage already dealt. Range would be 'close' as she must be part of your body.

Outer Cell Repair: Remove the flavor text of 'The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.' Also mention that the 7 meter puddle can be anywhere within 15 meters of Lagi.

Digestive Slime bomb: You have this ability listed twice...

Super Cell Repair: Unnecessary wording 'The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.' and 'This can also be chained in response to physical trauma, instantly healing killing blows in response to the Symbioses nature to protect the host body.' Consider rewording the description to:
Orie can instantly heal Lagi's body of A-tier damage while reacting to damage at 30 m/s.

Goop Acid bullets: Simplify the description to:
Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are 2 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body. The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. The bullets move as fast as 25 m/s an reach as far as 15 meters. Each bullet inflicts D-tier damage.

For all: You do not need to state these can be sustained, as all abilities are sustained by default.


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3Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 20/04/15, 09:18 am

Lagi

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Edited, i felt it was necessary for the digestive goop, because its an additional effect only accessed from the goop pudde of an existing attack


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4Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 20/04/15, 09:31 am

Ariella Negri

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cleaned up the text, below is approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Anomaly Internal Revert
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can heal the effects of B-tier and lower status effects at 25 m/s of the Host Body.

[b]Name:[/b] Outer Cell Repair
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off a 7 meter diameter goop from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s to a point within 15 meters of Lagi, to heal B-tier damage over 3 posts of any within the goop.

[b]Name:[/b] Digestive Slime bomb
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Assassin
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off goop 7 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s to a point within 15 meters of Lagi, to inflict B-tier damage in the form of acidic burns upon contact. The symbiosis protects the Host Body from the digestive properties from the goop.

[b]Name:[/b]  Super Cell Repair
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b]40 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can instantly heal Lagi's body of A-tier damage while reacting to damage at 30 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b]  Goop Acid bullets
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b] Assassin
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are 2 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body. The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. The bullets move as fast as 25 m/s an reach as far as 15 meters. Each bullet inflicts D-tier damage.


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5Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 02/05/15, 10:42 pm

Lagi

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6Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 03/05/15, 01:54 am

Vardreth

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Training approved:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Anomaly Internal Revert
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can heal the effects of B-tier and lower status effects at 25 m/s of the Host Body.

[b]Name:[/b] Outer Cell Repair
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off a 7 meter diameter goop from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s to a point within 15 meters of Lagi, to heal B-tier damage over 3 posts of any within the goop.

[b]Name:[/b] Digestive Slime bomb
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Assassin
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off goop 7 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body at 25 m/s to a point within 15 meters of Lagi, to inflict B-tier damage in the form of acidic burns upon contact. The symbiosis protects the Host Body from the digestive properties from the goop.

[b]Name:[/b]  Goop Acid bullets
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b] Assassin
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can fire off 4 acid bullets that are 2 meters in diameter from any point of Lagi's body. The symbiosis relationship protects the host body from the execution of this move. The bullets move as fast as 25 m/s an reach as far as 15 meters. Each bullet inflicts D-tier damage.


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7Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 03/05/15, 02:40 am

Lagi

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8Orie's time to shine Desu  Empty Re: Orie's time to shine Desu on 03/05/15, 07:12 am

Ariella Negri

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training approved, add to vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b]  Super Cell Repair
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b]40 Stamina
[b]Role:[/b]Support
[b]Range: [/b]15 Meters
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Orie can instantly heal Lagi's body of A-tier damage while reacting to damage at 30 m/s.


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