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1Second Wave of Spells Empty Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:08 pm

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Name: Gravity Lift, Stage 1
Tier: C
Cost: 20 on cast; 10 sustain
Element: Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or Sustain+1
Description: A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

Name: Super Nova
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Seti's body sends out an explosive blast of golden energy in a shell around him, blasting everything non-living to dust from the pure energy involved. The pure energy forces people up to 5 meters back, stopping CQC attacks from landing.

2Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:17 pm

Vardreth

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Super Nova:

Clashing rules will always apply, therefore it is not a guarantee that the Nova will stop CQC attacks. I have removed that from the spell.

I am unsure on whether or not your spell is attempting to do 2 supplementary effects in 1 spell... I am assuming the spells primary function is meant to knock things away from it? If that is the case, then I have made an edit to show as much. If you wanted it to destroy non-living objects, you would have to remove the 'knockback' effect that it has. Each ability can only have a maximum of 1 effect listed under its Class type (1 offensive and 1 supplementary for split spells, or just 1 offensive or just 1 supplementary).



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[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

[b]Name:[/b] Super Nova
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Seti's body sends out an explosive blast of golden energy in a shell around him, blasting everything around him up to 5 meters back.

3Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:36 pm

Seti

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Well, in that case... just add this one as well.

Name: Piercing Rays
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Seti's body generates an explosion of energy, blasting apart matter within 10 meters around him. On top of any damage from falling, everyone within 10 meters receives C-rank fire damage.

4Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:45 pm

Vardreth

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Ah, I actually missed something in the last one; you are using light to push things away in your Super Nova ability. Could you explain how you're doing such a thing? Normally, that would be the domain of something like Wind, Strength or Water magic.


The following are approved for training:

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[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

[b]Name:[/b] Piercing Rays
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Seti's body generates an explosion of energy, blasting apart matter within a 10 meter diameter centered around him. Everyone within 10 meters receives C-rank fire damage.

5Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:49 pm

Seti

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well, I kind of imagined it as releasing a build up of energy which would have a shockwave as a side-effect, but I realize that might fall more under strength magic on second thought.

6Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:56 pm

Vardreth

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Yea, that does sound more along the lines of strength magic... If you would like, we could ask the other staff members to come to a decision, or we can move forward with what you have here right now.

7Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 28/03/15, 10:57 pm

Seti

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Yeah, I'll keep it with just those two now.

8Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 29/03/15, 12:00 pm

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9Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 29/03/15, 03:09 pm

Vardreth

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Training approved, but be sure to add magoi/stamina counts in your job posts in the future, otherwise the abilities do not count. Regardless of whether or not the job has combat in it, it may not be both a Job thread and a Training thread due to all job threads requiring them to be Kill Viable, and all Training threads forbidding the thread from being Kill Viable (among other balance reasons).

Please add the following to your vault:

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[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

10Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 31/03/15, 07:03 am

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11Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 31/03/15, 08:18 am

Ariella Negri

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please bold where you used the attack in your post, and then I will approve it~

12Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 31/03/15, 08:22 am

Seti

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Bump.

13Second Wave of Spells Empty Re: Second Wave of Spells 31/03/15, 08:26 am

Ariella Negri

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training aproved, add to your vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Piercing Rays
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Seti's body generates an explosion of energy, blasting apart matter within a 10 meter diameter centered around him. Everyone within 10 meters receives C-rank fire damage.

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