Magi Application ratings

Why do you wish to be a Magi?I wish to become a magi because currently desire to add a new level of role play and open up my writing skills to something more advanced. With being a Magi I'll be able to indirectly change the flow of the main plot and to be honest this was my goal when I first started Magi world. I also wish to become a Magi so that while IC my character can experience things that normal mages don't get a chance to. I also wish to become a Magi because it means that I have an opportunity to raise Dungeons and choose a vessel to lead and guide and to be frank for me this will open up my reservoir as a writer it will me to more advanced as a writer and become a better Role-Player of course I won't be able to role-play like Ari who I recently learned who has 15 years of experience I hope this will allow me to become an 1/8 of how could her and people like Yak are the main reason I wish to become a Magi are because I feel it will push me to become a better writer and a better role-player.
Please RP out raising a dungeon. Sora traveled far and wide he had experienced the world and raised 3 dungeons but he hadn't traveled to the dark continent yet, this place defined wasteland for him even though he felt the vast desert wind swept against his face, it was a mild gust going on at the time he arrived but still the wind was as lifeless as the land. The land was barren and had no sign of life the rukh had left this place and abandoned everything here if anything was to thrive it had no chance. The Dark Continent was different from anywhere on earth it contained very little rukh if any rukh at all, and the land was dead not even a barely living bush weed could survive in this place even if it was adapted to little water... But Sora remembered his goals and how raising this dungeon would help him accomplish them. Sora had a duty as a Magi to serve the world and it's people and this dungeon was apart of his lifelong service to this world, he described himself as more devoted to his lifelong servitude than any another Magi. Sora was determined to do what no other Magi would do raise a dungeon in The Dark Continent which was practically dead. Sora  was different from the other Magi who sought balance in this world.Sora sought for a perfect order to completely abolish all dark rukh and possibly saving the future generations from falling into depravity. Sora pulled out his staff which was gold and stood at 5 feet in height and closed his eyes and for that split second he saw all the rukh in the world and a gold gate roughly 5 meters in height opened and what came from it was the reservoir of a Magi. Sora ready then opened his eyes and rose his staff into the air and from it rukh burst high into the clouds and what after about 5 seconds a large mass of rukh descended to the ground. A structure like nothing Sora had ever seen white and blue what seemed to be a great citadel this was the so far the greatest dungeon Sora had ever rose. Amazed he stood there as the dungeon came out of the ground and rose to the breaking point of the clouds where heaven and earth meet. Suddenly Sora noticed a man cloaked in black starring at the dungeon he was now curious why he would be on this land. Sora relaxed and let his vision take over he called this The Vision of a Magi he saw black rukh producing from the man in great floods. He would have to investigate but for now he would oversee the rising of this dungeon. The man said to himself "Seems like that Magi has the guts to raise a dungeon in The Dark Continent. He is wise far beyond his visible years. Even with this action it will not stop me from transforming The Dark Continent into a home for everything that has to be involved with Dark Rukh, and My Dark King Candidates from transcending the world". Sora happened to hear what the man said and he turned and pulled out his staff and thrusted it into the air and said "For I seek order in the world, I wish to see the scales overturned by white rukh, for I wish absolute order  using me as your patron saint englough this man I demand your presence Michael Archangel of Order demolish the beast for he is no Magi for he puts shame on the very name". Sora saw as his greatest work avatar magic combat the man but little did Sora know that the man was a Magi and a strong one, the man a Magi seeking a world of perfect balance had the determination to stop Sora. The man thrusted his staff into the air, Sora could see Gravity Magic forming a corresponding radius around Michael the possible Magi said "That avatar is beautiful it'll be a shame to watch my spell abolish it" Gravity of the Ascending Authority. Sora saw as the Gravity spell broke apart his Avatar Michael and with his enhanced vision when it came to magic he saw the rukh that made up his avatar being dispelled and disassembled as the spell advanced forward to break the spell down ,this battle would be tough but Sora had a strong feeling that he was to be the one to prevail. Pulling out his staff Sora casted the spell Incinerator this spell caused a fireball to appear 10 meters in height and 5 meters in width. Sora sent the fireball out to face its opponent but the Magi was prepared and casted the spell Gravitus Liftus at such an advanced stage it allowed the Magi to float and fly at incredible speeds. The magi being quick on his feet casted Great Vine Sora thought "This man must be incompetent to believe that a plant would sprout fear of all places" From the place where the man was standing he could see the young magi laughing and he said resulting from this "Well if you believe that to be so funny I challenge you to come at me with your greatest spell and see how I toy with it". This was clearly an attempt to in rage Sora but he was better than this he had a treasury of spells and he knew the exact ones to use. Sora casted Divine Gust A large wave of air causing great damage hit against the Magi's Borg was damaged excruciatingly and it broke. The Magi got up and he pointed his staff at Sora and said " If you wish to fight then I will bring everything I have." He struck his staff into the ground and dark rukh gathered in the masses and filled his Magoi and the a Magi casted his strongest spell Darkening Depression a large shadow appeared roughly 20 meters in height and 8 meters in width Sora estimated, and with one sweep the large dark rukh manifestation clapped its hands producing a large wave of sound, Sora was expected to waste no time in preparing for a clash he instead stood there ready to take the blow is what the opponent though but Sora long before planted an avatar underground and instead of attempting to move Sora the avatar clashed the spell head-on and this avatar Gabriel being stronger obliterated the sound wave, making Sora proud and surprising the opposing magi. Sora then instructed to Gabriel " Destory him"The other magi was dumbfounded not being able to respond at all and at that very moment in an instant Gabriel's hand devoured the other magi but before that action was taken Sora asked " What is your name, dark magi let me know it so that I can carve your name unto my heart and so that even as you return to the rukh I may remember you" the man replied with "Sarakrou Magi of Balance" as the man died Sora said "I seek nothing but perfect order and till then I will destroy anything dark for I only wish to see light".