Aengar's B-Tier Spell

Name: Michael Guardian of Eden
Tier:B
Cost: 30-Sustain 15
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description:The user summons a image of light . The image is 10 meters in height and 3 meters. The image always travels at 20m/s. The light image can travel around a 30 meter radius of the caster dealing B-tier damage to anything it touches. The literal arms of Michael have a radius of 3 meters with where his body is positioned. All damage is B-Tier burn damage.






Name: Superior Aurora
Tier:B
Cost: 30-Sustain 15
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range:30 meters
Duration:Sustained
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description:The user summons a 5x5x5 cube. If an opponent touches the outside or enters the cube would be dealt B-Tier damage. All damage is burn damage so if an opponent that sticks a limb through the cube it will burn it off. All damage with this spell is B-Tier burn damage.



Name: Light Veil v3
Tier:B
Cost: 30-Sustain 15
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: Personal
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description:The user manipulates the light around himself. This manipulation causes for him to be fully invisible no matter the background.

what is a "hardened" of light? You need to include the size of the... whatever... of light. You also need to include speed.

For any and all abilities, always make sure you include the following: Speed, Scale, Range, Damage/Effect

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Michael Guardian of Eden: Cool-down would be 5 posts. You still have not explained what "hardened light" is. If you mean to say it has physical form, this is not possible with Light magic alone, you would need light and strength magic. You are limiting the spell to travel at 10m/s, when B-tier ability speed is 20 m/s. Please specify that it is burn damage. Condense the size to say "3 meters wide and 10 meters tall."

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B-tiers, even sustained, only have a cool-down of 5 posts. You will never, even as an Omega, be able to sustain it more than 4 posts. Replace all Cool-downs with "5 posts" All of these are missing sustain costs. List all damage as "B-tier burn damage". Your invisibility spell is B-tier but only performing C-tier invis, was this intentional? You cannot summon a sword over your staff.

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Edited to fit guidelines. Bump if acceptable.

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[b]Name:[/b] Michael Guardian of Eden
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user summons a image of light . The image is 10 meters in height and 3 meters. The image always travels at 20m/s. The light image can travel around a 30 meter radius of the caster dealing B-tier damage to anything it touches. The literal arms of Michael are three meters long. All damage is B-Tier burn damage. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.

[b]Name:[/b] Superior Aurora
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b]Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user summons a 5x5x5 cube that moves at 20 m/s and can travel within 30 meters of themselves. If an opponent touches the outside or enters the cube would be dealt B-Tier damage. All damage with this spell is B-Tier burn damage. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.

[b]Name:[/b] Light Veil v3
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Personal
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user manipulates the light around himself. This manipulation causes for him to be fully invisible no matter the background. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.

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Approved for training~

training approved, add to your vault

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[b]Name:[/b] Michael Guardian of Eden
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user summons a image of light . The image is 10 meters in height and 3 meters. The image always travels at 20m/s. The light image can travel around a 30 meter radius of the caster dealing B-tier damage to anything it touches. The literal arms of Michael are three meters long. All damage is B-Tier burn damage. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.

Training Superior Aurora and Light Veil v2 using Ability Vouchers
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p75-ability-vouchers

Approved, however your spell is titled Light Veil V3. Add to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Superior Aurora
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b]Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user summons a 5x5x5 cube that moves at 20 m/s and can travel within 30 meters of themselves. If an opponent touches the outside or enters the cube would be dealt B-Tier damage. All damage with this spell is B-Tier burn damage. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.

[b]Name:[/b] Light Veil v3
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30-Sustain 15
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Personal
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]The user manipulates the light around himself. This manipulation causes for him to be fully invisible no matter the background. This ability may be sustained to use again on a subsequent post.