Tororkun's Starter Abilities

Name: Mauling Giant
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Fist
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Tororkun balls his fist and throws a punch at 10m/s into his opponents stomach dealing D-tier damage

Name: Thrashing Giant
Tier:  D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Mace
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Tororkun makes 2 horizontal swings with his kanabo at a speed of 10m/s to deal up to D-tier damage. This swings in a 180 degree arc.

Name: Stoic Giant
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Mace
Class: Deffensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Tororkun remains stationary while using his kanabo to block incoming attacks at 10 m/s. This can block one C tier attack or two D tier attacks

Name: Striking Giant
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Mace
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Tororkun puts a great deal of strength into a single blow moving 10m/s to the ribs (horizontal strike) or shoulder (vertical strike) dealing D tier damage. Tororkun swings in a 220 degree arc.

Name: Sweeping blow
Tier: C
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Mace
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Tororkun lifts his kanabo over his head, bringing it parallel with his shoulders before swinging it inward at a vertical angle at 15m/s, striking his opponents feet and immobilizing them for 3 Posts.

Thrashing Giant: Duration would be either Instant, 1 post or sustained. The cool-down would be either 2 posts or "2 posts or Sustain+1" The description would be better worded as follows:

Tororkun swings his kanabo horizontally twice at a speed of 10m/s to deal up to D-tier damage.

Slamming Giant: Duration would be either Instant, 1 post or sustained. The cool-down would be either 2 posts or "2 posts or Sustain+1". If you wish to charge and attack with the same ability, you would need to make it C-tier, as this would make it Offensive/Supplementary. As it is worded now, you do not need to include the sprinting part. If you simply stated "He slams the front of his kanabo into them at 10m/s, dealing D tier damage" this would be perfectly acceptable, you would simply have to RP into the scene that you are running towards them. This also offers versatility, as you could still use the ability while not moving, if you so chose.

Stoic Giant: This should state he uses his weapon to block up to one C-tier OR two D-tier attacks.

Okay, I think I fixed it.

I fixed up some of your abilities. Your weapon has a range based on its size, which is not stated in abilities. For example, if you had 2 maces, 1 of which was 1 meter long and another of which was 50 cm long, you could use any of your mace abilities with either one. But it wouldn't make sense to have a mace ability for a 50 cm mace hit somebody at the maximum range of your 1 meter mace. Your abilities do not make the mace longer or shorter, so it would always be the same 'distance' away from you no matter what.

Your durations and cooldowns needed to be listed in the correct manner. Please look at the strength examples here so that you have an idea of what the abilities should look like.

I don't know what you're doing with Slaming Giant. It mentions that the attack can hit somebody 5 meters away? How? Do you throw it? The only time you would add a range to your attack with this weapon is if you are throwing it.



The following are good, if they do what you want them to:

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[b]Name:[/b] Thrashing Giant
[b]Tier:[/b]  D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun makes 2 horizontal swings with his kanabo at a speed of 10m/s to deal up to D-tier damage. This swings in a 180 degree arc.

[b]Name:[/b] Stoic Giant
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Deffensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun remains stationary while using his kanabo to block incoming attacks at 10 m/s. This can block one C tier attack or two D tier attacks

[b]Name:[/b] Striking Giant
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun puts a great deal of strength into a single blow moving 10m/s to the ribs (horizontal strike) or shoulder (vertical strike) dealing D tier damage. Tororkun swings in a 220 degree arc.

[b]Name:[/b] Sweeping blow
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun lifts his kanabo over his head, bringing it parallel with his shoulders before swinging it inward at a vertical angle at 15m/s, striking his opponents feet and immobilizing them for 3 Posts.

Okay thanks, and it was going to be a charge like attack but I cant do that... can I make an attack that uses a bare hand or would that be a non ability attack? Other than that yea those four still do what I want them to.

^_^ Excellent.

And yea, you can do a bare-handed attack if you would like to, for an ability.

Alrighty everything should be good then.

approved and added to your vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Sweeping blow
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun lifts his kanabo over his head, bringing it parallel with his shoulders before swinging it inward at a vertical angle at 15m/s, striking his opponents feet and immobilizing them for 3 Posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Thrashing Giant
[b]Tier:[/b]  D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun makes 2 horizontal swings with his kanabo at a speed of 10m/s to deal up to D-tier damage. This swings in a 180 degree arc.

[b]Name:[/b] Stoic Giant
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Deffensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun remains stationary while using his kanabo to block incoming attacks at 10 m/s. This can block one C tier attack or two D tier attacks

[b]Name:[/b] Striking Giant
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun puts a great deal of strength into a single blow moving 10m/s to the ribs (horizontal strike) or shoulder (vertical strike) dealing D tier damage. Tororkun swings in a 220 degree arc.

[b]Name:[/b] Sweeping blow
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Mace
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Tororkun lifts his kanabo over his head, bringing it parallel with his shoulders before swinging it inward at a vertical angle at 15m/s, striking his opponents feet and immobilizing them for 3 Posts.