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1Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 11:54 am

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier
Name: Pin-Point
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Offensive
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.
-50 metres range
-A tier Damage
-30 m/s Speed
-Single Shot


Name: Covering
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Defensive
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.
-50 Metres Range
-30m/s Speed
-Single Shot

Name: Webbing
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Supplementary
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.
-Immobilise on Hit
-Scale - 25 metres
-30 M/S speed
-Single



Last edited by Vodarara on 02/01/15, 01:30 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 01:16 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
At B-tier, you may only have a single A-tier ability

Pin-Point: Description does not include range or damage, consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.

Covering: This would not be offensive, as it is not intended to deal damage. It would be defensive and needs to specify what amount of damage it can deflect. Consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.

Webbing:Does not include how long the effect lasts. Consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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3Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 01:30 pm

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier
Editted

Its 3 A tier at A tier though isn't it so these will be my 3 for then and ill probs choose covering first.


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4Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 03:43 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
Then Covering is approved for training. Once you hit A-tier, the others can be approved.

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[b]Name:[/b] Covering
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.


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5Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 26/02/15, 07:40 pm

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier


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6Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 26/02/15, 08:41 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
training approved, add to your vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Covering
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.


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7Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 04/03/15, 09:23 am

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier
Requesting the next two dex abilities be officially ready for training please


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8Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 04/03/15, 09:55 am

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
edited for formatting, if these are acceptable, they are approved for training~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Pin-Point
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Webbing
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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9Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 04:37 pm

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier


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10Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 05:50 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
you must use the ability at least once during the training


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11Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 06:34 pm

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier
Damn sorry editted and added to the end.


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12Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 06:40 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
approved, add to vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Pin-Point
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.


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13Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 16/07/15, 07:14 am

Vodarara

Vodarara
A-Tier
A-Tier


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14Vodarara Archery Tech's Empty Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 16/07/15, 09:11 am

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
training approved, edited out duration for you, please do the same for pin-point in your vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Webbing
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40|20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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