Zhuli (D-Rank Starter)

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Name: Zhuli
Tier: D
Type: Brute
Species: Canis Lupus Argentum (Argent Gray Wolf)
Speed: 5 m/s
Appearance: Zhuli is still an adolescent, and is thus still growing.  Currently she's approaching 2m in length, and about half that in height at the shoulder.  Her long, rather fluffy, grey fur still needs to be shed and often flies off in clouds when she shakes given the hot weather. Her coat is dappled light grey, though her face and ears are a bit darker.  And her eyes are a pale blueish grey, a trademark of Argent Wolves.
Passive Traits:

• Argent armor: Zhuli has been trained and outfitted in traditional armor from the Argent division of the Reim Beast Corps.  (Standard Defense buff: The beast is able to take additional damage equivalent to one attack of the same tier.)
  

Active Traits:

• Wild Focus: The beast blocks out distracting stimuli and focuses it's heightened senses on finding any hostiles in an area, (ergo could still find people through a smokescreen or some similar effect).
  (Cost: 5 Stamina  Duration: 1-3 rounds  Cool down: 5-7 rounds respectively.)
  

Just as an FYI, Actives do not scale with the beast. Only Passives scale with the beast. What this means is that your active is only actually going to be useful until your beast hits C tier, as it will only ever upgrade a D-Tier attack to C-Tier since it is a D-Tier active.


If you would like a suggestion, which you do not have to take fyi, something that you could potentially make use of is a defensive trait that plays off of your passive. It could potentially be something like 'Battle Armor's rolling movement' and it could defend against C-Tier damage. This is somewhat useful throughout the entirety of your beast's existence.


With active abilities, try to make sure to put the cool down length of the ability, as well as the Stamina cost of the ability, and the speed at which the ability goes (if appropriate).


I made some edits. If you are fine with this, we can go forward, but if you want to change it let me know. Once the final stats are accepted, any further change will have to wait for you to upgrade it.

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[b]Name:[/b] Zhuli
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b] Canis Lupus Argentum (Argent Gray Wolf)
[b]Speed:[/b] 5 m/s
[b]Appearance:[/b] Zhuli is still an adolescent, and is thus still growing. Currently she's approaching 2m in length, and about half that in height at the shoulder. Her long, rather fluffy, grey fur still needs to be shed and often flies off in clouds when she shakes given the hot weather. Her coat is dappled light grey, though her face and ears are a bit darker. Her eyes are a pale blueish grey, a trademark of Argent Wolves.
[b]Passive Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Argent armor: Zhuli has been trained and outfitted in traditional armor from the Argent division of the Reim Beast Corps.  (Standard Defense buff: The beast is able to take additional damage equivalent to one attack of the same tier.)
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[b]Active Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Bloodlust [Sustain: 3 posts. Cost: 5 Stamina]: Zhuli deals C-Tier damage for attacks done in the posts this is active for.
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Changed technique, and added appropriate costs and cooldown times.

Approved~

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[b]Name:[/b] Zhuli
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b] Canis Lupus Argentum (Argent Gray Wolf)
[b]Speed:[/b] 5 m/s
[b]Appearance:[/b] Zhuli is still an adolescent, and is thus still growing.  Currently she's approaching 2m in length, and about half that in height at the shoulder.  Her long, rather fluffy, grey fur still needs to be shed and often flies off in clouds when she shakes given the hot weather. Her coat is dappled light grey, though her face and ears are a bit darker.  And her eyes are a pale blueish grey, a trademark of Argent Wolves.
[b]Passive Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Argent armor: Zhuli has been trained and outfitted in traditional armor from the Argent division of the Reim Beast Corps.  (Standard Defense buff: The beast is able to take additional damage equivalent to one attack of the same tier.)
[/list]
[b]Active Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Wild Focus: The beast blocks out distracting stimuli and focuses it's heightened senses on finding any hostiles in an area, (ergo could still find people through a smokescreen or some similar effect).
(Cost: 5 Stamina  Duration: 1-3 rounds  Cool down: 5-7 rounds respectively.)
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