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1 Oberon 27/11/14, 12:13 pm
Emperor JaJa
A-Tier
Name: Oberon:Commandment of the fairy King
Tier:B
Cost:30/15 sustain
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range:30 meter
Duration:Sustain
Cool-Down: 5 posts +1 sustain
Description:Jahan Grips Damokles firmly, the sword shines a golden hue and casts a spell commanding the rukh to emit a cylindrical blast of light that travels at 20 m/s starting from a smaller size, and as it travels forward it grows out into its maximum size of 10-15 meters in diameter and 10 meters in depth.
Last edited by Jahangir Nikator on 28/11/14, 12:39 pm; edited 1 time in total
2 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 01:28 am
Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Since a cone shape is a 3 dimensional object, I need at least 2 dimensions described in your ability. Also, the width of the cone should be either '15 meters' or '10-15 meters'.
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3 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 10:40 am
Emperor JaJa
A-Tier
..... It does say "The maximum width of the cone being 15 meters." (or did you just want me to take maximum out?)
It also describes the length, which is 30 meters, also the acceptable range.
In simpler terms
Base-15 meters
Height-30 meters
I think what your thinking is that I was describing a blast of light shaped as a moving cone. However the technique is actually a blase of light which forms the cone at 20 m/s.
4 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 10:47 am
Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Unfortunately, any ONE side of the cone cannot be more than 15 meters. This is explained in the Ability Guidelines when using Scale. The 30 meters describes how far away an ability can travel before dissipating. Therefore, your ability is not within the guidelines.
The width of the cone must be changed to 10-15 meters, because for balance purposes you cannot have such a large range of a variable in your abilities.
If your ability forms like a cone, but travels as a simple 2 dimensional circle, then I still need the depth of the circle. Also, the ability will need to be slightly reworded to reflect that it doesn't create a cone, but starts from a smaller size and as it travels forward it grows out into its maximum size of x-x meters in diameter and y-y meters in depth, or simply y meters in depth.
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5 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 12:40 pm
Emperor JaJa
A-Tier
Ok I made the edits, I suck at math though, so if anything is wrong please tell me, thanks for clarifying everything Gargar
6 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 11:30 pm
Vardreth
Ω-Tier
I'm assuming it forms and increases in size at the same rate it travels? If so, then below is what you're looking for:
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[b]Name:[/b] Oberon:Commandment of the fairy King
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b]30/15 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]30 meter
[b]Duration:[/b]Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts +1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Jahan Grips Damokles firmly, the sword shines a golden hue and casts a spell commanding the Rukh to emit a cylindrical blast of light that travels at 20 m/s starting from a smaller size. As it travels forward it grows out at 20 m/s, into its maximum size of 10-15 meters in diameter and 10 meters in depth.
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7 Re: Oberon 28/11/14, 11:40 pm
Emperor JaJa
A-Tier
Yep
Name: Oberon:Commandment of the fairy King
Tier:B
Cost:30/15 sustain
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range:30 meter
Duration:Sustain
Cool-Down: 5 posts +1 sustain
Description:Jahan Grips Damokles firmly, the sword shines a golden hue and casts a spell commanding the Rukh to emit a cylindrical blast of light that travels at 20 m/s starting from a smaller size. As it travels forward it grows out at 20 m/s, into its maximum size of 10-15 meters in diameter and 10 meters in depth.
8 Re: Oberon 29/11/14, 12:07 am
Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Approved for training:
- Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Oberon:Commandment of the fairy King
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b]30/15 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]30 meter
[b]Duration:[/b]Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Jahan Grips Damokles firmly, the sword shines a golden hue and casts a spell commanding the Rukh to emit a cylindrical blast of light that travels at 20 m/s starting from a smaller size. As it travels forward it grows out at 20 m/s, into its maximum size of 10-15 meters in diameter and 10 meters in depth.
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9 Re: Oberon 01/12/14, 07:23 pm
Emperor JaJa
A-Tier
Would like to use my B Tier Ability ticket to purchase this ability
10 Re: Oberon 01/12/14, 07:51 pm
Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
approved, deducted ticket, added ability~