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Akuma Jaaku

Akuma Jaaku
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Akuma Jaaku [Done] 11-49

"I shall atone for my sins by bathing this world in a beautiful crimson red."



Name: Akuma Jaaku
Nationality: Kou
Race: Fanalis
Tier: D
Specialization: Strength
Age + Birthdate: 23, September 22
Gender: Male
Sexuality: HeteroSexual
Personality:
Initially, Akuma was; cheeky, cheerful, and full of mischievous ideas. He is also one of the quickest-thinking people that many people had ever known. He is confident in his abilities, often being humble about it, but when somebody compliments him, especially Aven, he gets easily embarrassed. However, his ruthlessness and aptitude in killing shows the other side of him — deadly, violent, and bloodthirsty. Having been tortured since birth, Akuma has been conditioned to possess extreme tolerance for pain.

However, Akuma is still carefree, hates doing any responsibility, and does not like to do much. That is how is life has changed in what seems the small amount of time he has been alive. The only other thing that keeps him carefree and sane is his sisters that he uses as rather exotic weapons.

However, most of the time Akuma is portrayed as entirely self-interested and does whatever he likes as long as it pleases him in some way. He lusts for the thrill of killing powerful fighters in combat; likewise, he grows excited to meet any new people he deems worthy of fighting or anyone with potential to be a good fighter and entertain him in the future. However, he isn’t one to get off on this act, but rather simply enjoys a good battle and finds himself excited for knowing there are still many to come. Furthermore, he isn’t all about battle and seeking it but rather truly is mellow and sarcastic never targeting his guild members out of a sense of respect but knowing that one day many of them could find themselves on his list if ever the circumstances fit. While he tends to be mellow, outgoing, nonchalant, and rather sarcastic with his friends or people he finds enjoyable to be around he would rather say he has a completely different side when it comes to outsiders of his friends and respected comrades.

In addition, Akuma is or at the least, can be sociopathic. While he does like people, he finds himself stating that, valuable one day could mean trash the next and could kill anyone with little to no reservation. He is completely self-centered and manipulative with all of these traits being indicative of sociopathic nature. He does not care for what has happened in the past as he is only interested in what could be amusing to him in the future or present. While Akuma’s nature tends to be malevolent, he isn't an indiscriminate killer. While he has no problems killing anyone regardless of age or sex, he only kills people who are in his way or people he deems "worthy." As such, he is more simply amoral than flat out evil. He will even assist the people he deems “worthy” if there is "fun" in doing so or if it will make them stronger for a more entertaining fight in the future. So in addition to previously stated behavior, Akuma cares about having fun and a good challenge which may or may not involve killing people.

Likes:

::Music: This has always been a dying passion of this man truly this is one of the few blessed things that he found comfort and pleasure in that didn't revolve around the discomfort or death of other human beings for truly he was a man that felt music is a message that transcribes of peace and well-being rather than the life he was raised around which was surrounded by unneeded stress and blood shed only leading to more unneeded work and transactions.  Therefore, Akuma grew up with a rather lingering attachment to music and this would be one of the few things from his past he truly enjoyed still to this day.

::Training: Though many people view training as either brutal unneeded practices or tedious work that simply needs to be done because they are told to do so. However, Akuma views it as a beautiful stress reliever that lets him escape from the people that he views to be so ignorant of the actual events transpiring around them laughing as the man walks down the street and sees the proud and happy faces of men and women who have never truly seen the actions of war and the tragedy to some people have to go through. Though his personal view on war is one of a rather twisted sorts however, training to Akuma is like water it is just a needed that he has to keep in his life to truly keep himself stable.

::Smoking: The bad habit that follows most people to the grave by this seemingly harmless hobby the man is sure to die a rather premature death if this was the normal tobacco that most people have grown fond of in these times however, what Akuma smokes is something of a more relaxing nature that is rather green in coloration. He uses this herb as he would call it to calm his nerves and keep from going truly berserk when it comes to the people he is around. So usually he either be seen smoking a home rolled joint or a cigar that he has twisted the tobacco out of and replaced with his own personal preference

Dislikes:

::Cowards: Cowards are the equal to pure low life scum when it comes to Akuma’s version of horrible people. Truly he views cowards in any sense to be rather worthless and simply should either be exiled from his presence or even more drastically simply killed on the spot with not a single hesitation within his actions showing no mercy to those that cower away from life itself seeking to live behind an illusion of happiness instead of truly finding in this world that which would bring you true bless and happiness. However, he also has a rather strong loathing for those who cower in the face of combat and choose to run instead of fight and those people if he is ever to see them again will wish for death for he shall give them something far greater.

::Boring personalities: Boring people are some of the worst individuals for Akuma to be around simply for the fact that he lives his life to enjoy it and do as he pleases though these types of personalities and people don’t hinder the fact that he does what he pleases it rather makes it difficult at times to simply enjoy hanging around these said people or people regardless actually for it only takes one negative personality in a room full of lively individuals to completely change the atmosphere of the room. Therefore, Akuma simply tries to stay clear of this individuals so that they don’t kill his mood and make him want to kill them…

::Drinking: Akuma loathes most drinker or at least those that drink to get black out drunk for truly they are some of the most annoying and self-righteous people that he has ever meet. Although he does occasionally take a social drink or two when around certain people or in certain situations he would never truly drink to simply drink. As for why he truly dislikes this action or hobby it is simply because people become their most raw form when drunk and or getting drunk and truly it just makes him realize how little society has changed over the years of creation and evolution.  

Aspirations:

::Be Known as the "Amoral King": As for all the aspirations listed above they all come together in one meeting point to help him prove one thing while he breaths on this earth and that is to strive to be known as one of the most powerful individuals to ever walk these lands. He wishes for his story to be told many generations after his death and for the accomplishments of his era to be known around the world as some of the greatest and for that simply reason he strives to be known as a king, reach new levels of power and raw ability that very few ever achieve and also the perhaps hardest of them all is clearing any and every dungeon in his way so that once and for all he can prove his worth and ability.

::Transcend the normal bounds of human: As for all the aspirations listed above they all come together in one meeting point to help him prove one thing while he breaths on this earth and that is to strive to be known as one of the most powerful individuals to ever walk these lands. He wishes for his story to be told many generations after his death and for the accomplishments of his era to be known around the world as some of the greatest and for that simply reason he strives to be known as a king, reach new levels of power and raw ability that very few ever achieve and also the perhaps hardest of them all is clearing any and every dungeon in his way so that once and for all he can prove his worth and ability.

::Clear every dungeon: As for all the aspirations listed above they all come together in one meeting point to help him prove one thing while he breaths on this earth and that is to strive to be known as one of the most powerful individuals to ever walk these lands. He wishes for his story to be told many generations after his death and for the accomplishments of his era to be known around the world as some of the greatest and for that simply reason he strives to be known as a king, reach new levels of power and raw ability that very few ever achieve and also the perhaps hardest of them all is clearing any and every dungeon in his way so that once and for all he can prove his worth and ability.

Phobias/fears:

::Being known as a failure: As for why Akuma has a fear of being a failure relates to events in his past that nearly ended his life at a rather young age for his failings to have the commitment to do the necessary deeds that were asked of him at one point in time. Therefore, from a very young age it was drilled into his mind that failure is never truly an option and deep down he truly fears being known as the failure that never accomplished anything while he walked alongside the many other great people of this planet. Therefore, he simply choices to succeed at whatever he choices to do regardless of what these actions may be.

::Being known as weak: Being known as weak one may question of this truly is a phobia or a fear but truly don’t we all fear that we will never have the power or ability to do something to save one’s own life and the lives of the ones around them that they see worthy of saving? This is truly why Akuma fears being weak is for the plain fact that he was raised to believe that the weak should simply parish so that the strong may only walk among the living and so the genetic make-up of his race wouldn’t be tainted by a weak hearted individual.

Face-Claim: jolly - la storia della arcana famiglia
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Golden
Height: 6 ft. | 1.82 m
Weight: 200 lbs. | 90 kg
Appearance:
Akuma is a tall guy with toned, confident features and a solid body. He is slim, yet has some muscles that many women stop to admire whenever they can catch him with his shirt off. He isn’t your typical slender male, however, for you see the body is composed of red, white, and pink muscles. Through many strenuous hours of training and discipline Akuma was able to convert all of his muscle mass into pink muscles, therefore, explaining his slender and toned figure showing so much promise for great power and athletic ability. He has medium length jet black hair that seemingly always falls in his face in a rebellious manner though he doesn’t take the time to tend to his hair like many assume he does.

This complementing his seemingly pale, yet having subtle tan skin. His face showing a confident, powerful individual that doesn’t falter in his mannerisms and tones simply because he was blessed with an above average demeanor. Though he is conscious of this he is humble about this appearance and truly doesn’t care about it. Though when it comes to clothes he has a wide variety of styles he loves to wear but his favorite being something simple and easy nothing extremely flashy that may draw unneeded attention his way. Akuma can nearly always be seen wearing black sunglasses and smoking a cigar while walking around and doing whatever he sets his attention to for that day.

Rukh Alignment: Black
Special Traits: Born with black hair instead of red
History:
The Amoral king or better known as Akuma Jaaku was born twenty three faithful years ago upon a cool autumn morning into a world filled with hatred and love alike however, this man would be raised in a manner that his past was nothing but a mere inconvenience for the individual for truly he is a man that lives in the moment not carrying about his past or future only living in the now enjoying what little pleasures he was granted and using his own given abilities to slowly climb from his past so that he would never have to speak of it once again.

However, there may be a select few that know of this man’s rather tragic upbringing for he was a man not shy of knowing the horrible secrets that laid around the lands of his birth and the miserable deeds that he had to be able to live with so that as a human no rather as a survivor he would live to tell his tale of great fame or infamy. Though as he would progress through life it would seem that infamy would be the calling cared for the man that some people would only be able to describe him as the trickster of Kou though he wasn’t truly a man that sought out attention ever since birth the man had been used for one task or another.

Therefore, as the man would travel through his twenty three years of life he would begin to gain a reputation for being or attempting to be involved in rather dark and private matters. However, in youth he would use his natural given strength to best people in petty matches simply scamming them as he would only be able to survive of this petty little acts of trickery and this truly would be the beginning of the man’s decent into the dark abyss only being able to see the darkness and raw power in people instead of the good that one possible would be able to do, growing up knowing only one thing either you live to become strong and survive or rather you fall into the grasp of death and suffer an untimely demise…

Role-Play Sample:
Random thing:
It had been around four years since the young man had been into civilization, his breaths seemingly drawn in smooth and blown out with a grace of a king. His every step seemingly showing his feelings toward the people of the town he was in… downing… He truly hated back in the normal world everyone smiling and carrying on in life as though tragedy never existed and as if sadness is something of a fable tale… It truly disgusted him, the lacks nature of which humanity seemed to be now compared to his normal everyday existence. He who had fought for survival ever since he exited the womb, however, even though he felt such emotions toward these people there was a devilish smile on his face as though he was walking among some of the best people he had ever meet. Though this face wasn’t for he wanted to through a façade in the air so not to look suspicious but rather his bloodlust was peaking if anyone among these pitiful beings could tell his true emotions it would be that of another fighter.

Though he doubted anyone would truly pick-up of his true intent for his bloodlust was around his body tightly as though a beast hiding his presence before finally striking down on an unexpected victim. His smile going cleanly and smoothly across his face, his clothes of choice for his return to the normal world being a black suit with a light blue tie loosely hanging from around his seemingly clean pressed white collared shirt. He would have on black sunglasses hiding his golden eyes, his black slim fitting pants held up loosely by black leather belt and accompanying these pants would be matching leather black shoes. As he would walk the streets slowly heading toward the outskirts of town he would notice someone who seemed to be familiar a blue haired girl that seemingly reeked of the smell of blood her face sour in definition from what he could see it was as though she hated everything around her and simply was alone in this world. However, that would immediately douse the hopes of it being her for all he could remember of the young girl that once was, was a bright young smile and a cheerful look of enjoyment as she would watch him and her brother fight back and forth.

So with that last bit of remembrance and another shot of cruel reality he would simply let out a slight giggle for even thinking this world was even slightly forgiving in light of possibly becoming the man he once was, however, this would seal the deal of his new nature and personality though it wasn’t much different from that of when he was a child it was enough to call him now a true amoral killer. It was as though with that last interaction his fate would be sealed and his destination to begin his ever twisting and turning journey would be to arrive at Phantom Lord and establish his name in this world yet again as one of the most powerful beings.

Therefore, without further hesitation his stride becoming even more definite as he would slowly but surely make his way toward the destination that would truly turn his life upside down yet again…

2Akuma Jaaku [Done] Empty Re: Akuma Jaaku [Done] on 13/11/14, 01:50 am

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Aspirations: You have copy-pasted your aspirations 3 times, with the only thing changing being the first set of words. Move those into one set, and remove the copy-pasted portion of your application.


Since you have Black Rukh, that means that somewhere in your past you had to have cursed your fate. This types of times in your past need to be fleshed out in your history.

Your history has a lot of stuff talking about what types of feelings he experienced, and what type of emotions his actions have evoked, but it doesn't actually describe his actions.

The last paragraph is the closest thing to being something that informs me of what kind of stuff your character has experienced in the past. I don't need a year-by-year of what your character has been doing, but I would like something like: the general setting of where he was born (Shows us part of what cultures your character has experienced). How he was raised (what cultures he has grown up in. What kind of things he was taught). What caused him to have black Rukh (generally an extremely noteworthy occurrence, since one must literally curse their fate to have Black Rukh). Lastly, something that has him moving into a direction you plan to take him (such as why he is going to another country, or some such).

Just as a small piece of advice, your last 3 paragraphs have 5 sentences in them. Those are run on sentences. You may want to consider breaking them up into more manageable smaller sentences, to make your writing more fluid.


Other than that, everything else looks good.

P.s. Who is Aven? How does he use his sisters as exotic weapons?

P.p.s. Bump the thread when edits have been made.


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